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I also subscribed a lot to the last book on martial arts, so I will support this one too. Currently I have seen Yiren and subscribed to some. Overall it is pretty good, especially the refreshing ones. It is really refreshing, with all kinds of slaps in the face. But there are also some problems that I personally think are more serious. Here are my personal opinions - 1-The worldview is too complex. The beginning was too humorous at first, and I thought it was purely for a game, but as it went on it became more serious. It was a simple game at the beginning, but later many branches and clues were inserted, which gradually revealed the background of the world. But I feel that the author's writing skills are a little lacking. After unraveling it, I feel like Stitches, which includes monsters from ancient Chinese legends, Western vampires and werewolves, and more modern vocabulary and enemies such as aliens. You say it's a game that's stitched together to the point where it doesn't matter, but as the author, your background descriptions are getting more and more serious. This serious background + the elements of spoof make me feel awkward. Maybe the background is not fully developed, but now it's getting more and more weird, out of character. 2-Characters Character values ​​have been jumping back and forth between the two poles (for the most part). The description of the emotions and dialogue of the person who is chasing the protagonist. For a while, the guild was treated as a game, and my brothers went up to hack him to death. I can't kill the protagonist in a while, this is not a game, my life is very important. So, do all the characters here value their own lives? I personally feel that almost all characters currently do not realize that human life is a non-renewable resource in this game. Think about a person who is healthy and educated, and if you calculate it carefully, you will know how big a figure it is and how much time you still have. How small of them are suitable for fighting, and how precious the fighting elite is (except for the national BL agency). All guilds that hunt down the protagonist seem to subconsciously ignore the consumption and replenishment of elite talents. According to the rules that can be seen so far, no new players have entered, but the current players are constantly attrition and getting stronger. The current social structure in the game is a meat grinder that only consumes human resources without any input. Isn't this a scary world? As a leader, the lives consumed cannot be replenished quickly, so shouldn't he be more cautious? As an individual, shouldn't we care more about life in a game where you will die if you get injured? But you can't see it in the book. In ancient times, when more than two or three people died in a battle, the achievement collapsed. The protagonist hacked the general to death, and two or three thousand people could not kill the protagonist. He was still planning this and that. Is this a modern army? It's particularly awkward to see a group of modern civilians with military literacy that far exceeds that of a modern army. Tactics, no strategy. To put it further, do these underworld-like guilds have any practical benefits by killing the protagonist? No. Are there risks? It's huge and a lot of people will die. Therefore, the explosion in the first few chapters was very awkward in my opinion. There was no actual benefit, it was a huge risk, and a bunch of people were colluding. It felt so awkward and I couldn't enjoy this period. 3-Positioning of this book. As I said before, the beginning is humorous, a spoof, a slap in the face, and an unboxing. The three magic weapons are gone, the pranks are gone, and they are becoming more and more serious. There are still slaps in the face, but because they are too serious, the slaps are not as enjoyable. When I opened the box, the golden fingers were almost gone! Because the golden finger of the see-through treasure chest is offset by the guild's numerical advantage - which chest can you see better? I can use the crowd tactic in any guild: open all the boxes, and all the good and bad stuff will be mine! The coolness has seriously declined. It is recommended to change the settings or supplement the settings to get the coolness back. Another positioning problem is that all players behave like playing computer games. But the actual actions occasionally make readers realize that this is actually a survival game. The rhythm is sometimes humorous and sometimes too serious. Personally, I feel that the book's positioning has serious structural problems at the beginning. The positioning is not clear, and there is no balance between humor and seriousness, and it does not lean in any one direction. It will influence subsequent readers to pursue the book. Finally, I hope we can see improvements in the future. Come on, keep watching.

I have read three or five novels of this type, and this one is the most reasonably written and has the fewest bugs. . . Unlike other books where the supporting characters are brainless and all powerful things are monopolized by the protagonist... Although this book is a bit yy, it is relatively reasonable. . It's considered food and grass.

It's received rave reviews, but I haven't seen any complaints. Could it be that this is real grass jelly? Or was it cleaning the floor? Don't rush to ban me. I am definitely a genuine consumer and never watch pirated copies. As long as you can read the book, you will continue to subscribe. If you can't read it, you will take it off the shelf and leave. I will definitely complain when you see the poisonous points. I hope the author of this book is not a small-minded chicken.

I invested 2W, please work hard and make sure I get my money back.

Why do authors rely on IQ to write heroines? If you can't write a brilliant plot, just write an invincible protagonist. You have to add a heroine with an IQ close to that of a monster. Then the heroine seems to have taken your perspective and inferred based on what I think. And her inferences are too arbitrary. It's like deducing a person's personality through one incident and then deducing his behavior pattern. It's so outrageous that Sherlock Holmes wouldn't even dare to write like this.

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. There are too many unreasonable places. Let me just talk about a few places that I think are the most unreasonable. In the Bronze Ranking Strangers, it was said that the biggest advantage of humans over beasts is the ability to use weapons. But are aliens beasts? But your setting artist is also intelligent, and is hidden among humans. He can also control humans and turn humans into subordinates of his own kind. Don't they know humans have weapons? And you don't know about weapons like missiles and nuclear bombs? Also, it has only been a few months since the aliens arrived on Earth. Where did humans get the alien serum and anti-control helmets? If you say that there have been aliens in other cities for a long time, then why don't humans know about the existence of the furnace? In other words, all the aliens in other cities have been wiped out, so why do the aliens in this city still rely on you players? Can you rest assured that you players are causing trouble here? This is the first one The second one: the battle between players and the dark race. At the beginning, the human player guilds were like chickens and dogs in front of the army of dark creatures. Moreover, they were still trapped in the main city, so they could only send elite teams out of the city in batches to obtain supplies and fight small-scale battles. However, a month later, in the decisive battle between human players and the dark clan, the human players were able to suppress it, but the dark clan fought? Just because there are more Silver-level people than the other side? The thing that insults my IQ the most is the motorcycle cavalry unit. They can still charge back and forth on the battlefield while riding motorcycles? Is your motorcycle unit not damaged at all? If you go to a motorcycle race and the motorcycle in front falls over, what happens to the people behind? Not to mention that even people were dead, and there were corpses blocking the way. Also, there are more than a hundred smart people in the human race and they have no experience in large-scale combat command. Can you command a million-level battle? Finally. Why do humans have 4 commanders with cheating abilities? Why aren't there aliens? Your setting is that the people behind the human race and the alien race in this game are at least evenly matched, and even the alien race will be stronger. If it weren't for the fact that the aliens were stronger, it wouldn't make sense why the Thousand Districts would be merged in advance.

The only question in the whole book is, why are those people not afraid of death? Think. The author is a bit like writing an online game novel. Although the bosses are cowardly, their younger brothers are not? May I ask why these guilds can be ordered to move? Those so-called presidents are just some so-called company bosses, but they can actually make people work hard?

The writing is good, I won't go into the advantages. The disadvantage is that the guild is obviously a new beginning, but they are still workers, and the top management is still the top level. Even though the president and top management were killed, they still want to kill the protagonist, and they are not afraid of death. They can only be afraid of death after their names appear. The ones without names are like a group of puppets who will not die because of their teammates and run away for fear of death. They/they are like the guild in the game that can still be resurrected. So the direction of the novel is wrong, it should be a virtual game type.

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