Why Are the Heroines in This Dating Game So Weird?

The handsome guy reading the book, look over here! Although I wrote this book very seriously, I don't have much confidence. If you see any flaws or poisonous points, or if you have any suggestions or ideas, please feel free to share them in this post. I will read them. Thank you🙏

What do you think of this little Tsubaki⊙⊙

In the end I couldn't help but write something. First of all, I have to say that I haven't been following it all the time, but I have been watching it since the early days. It has been a bit intermittent recently but I still follow the plot. The author always surprises me with his imagination and the unexpectedness of the plot. I think this book also has its own style that is different from other books. However, the author seems to have lost his temper after the counter-attack. The transformations of the eldest lady and the protagonist are very blunt, and some plots are very rough. Obviously there are some plots that I find very interesting, but they feel a little baffling, that is, eh, have they developed to this extent? Most of the problems are related to the eldest lady and the protagonist. I can provide you with an idea. I know you will read it, so just take a quick look at it. Don't be affected too much. The most important thing is to lay out the outline and details now. The eldest lady did not kill the protagonist immediately after being counter-killed because she wanted to tame the protagonist. She believed that such a protagonist was valuable enough for her to make an exception. Then the next step is to take action, and the student union and other things are all because of this. Then you can naturally discover the closeness between the protagonist and Qingmei and become jealous, but you haven't reacted yet, and then instinctively use her power to disturb the protagonist and the two, without being too direct. At least the eldest lady's character must be maintained during this period. She can take time to do other heroines' things, and then the eldest lady will give feedback on these things. The pull between the protagonist and the eldest lady, one wants to tame, and the other has the courage to resist, and then the eldest lady finds that she can no longer bear to be harsh, but she will still switch to other ways to punish. The protagonist also thought that the eldest lady just wanted to tame him again, so he hated her very much. However, because of her power, he could not rely on her, so he wanted to use the system to work hard to become stronger, so he became more motivated with all the beautiful girls. Among the beautiful girls in the guide, along with the jealousy of the eldest lady, it is necessary to set up the daily routine and intersperse it a little more. This tests the attack power. Finally, when attacking a certain beautiful girl, such as the yandere one, the protagonist loses control and is rescued by the eldest lady. Of course, the protagonist's disgust will not subside just because of this, but the eldest lady has the capital to negotiate with the protagonist. At this time, due to long-term jealousy and the protagonist's lack of income, the eldest lady has accumulated a lot of complaints, which can be given away in vain. Then, although the protagonist's attitude has not changed much, he has noticed that something is wrong. To be honest, the eldest lady's line is at the crematorium of her husband, so she will definitely be wronged, but it is up to the author to judge whether this is appropriate? Also, I think the scene where the eldest lady shed a tear on the protagonist last night was great. It should be that it was better to write it when the two of them broke the ice and improved in the later period because they were unable to fall in love for a long time, and then were misunderstood by the protagonist in the end. Writing about the protagonist touching the tears dripping down his cheek, the eldest lady actually cried? In short, the eldest lady needs a more delicate psychology and mentality portrayal.

Qingshui Kaoru The Eternal God of Black Silk

Congratulations to the author for taking a new path. I originally thought that if the protagonist was still in the dog-licking mode, I would just delete it. Unexpectedly, after a few days of waiting, I was pleasantly surprised. Finally, a normal man came out. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

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Chapter 65 so far. Around Chapter 20, Shimizu Kaoru's treatment was unpleasant, even disgusting. Around Chapter 55, a reversal came. Although I think this reversal is still a bit "hard", considering that reversing it too late will lose more readers, I reluctantly accepted it. According to the current situation, Sanjiang should be stable. Overall, it is a very good book. I'm just waiting for it to be released. The updates every day are really not enough.

The early setting is very similar to "I Loaded the Love Game", which is not a problem in itself, because it can be seen that the author wants to write his own story. But the protagonist feels like a "diaosi" 😅. Let's not talk about the fixed revenge method of light novels by making the enemy fall in love with you. You tie up your enemy and then commit suicide in front of her. This is the first time I have seen it... And what is even more outrageous is that this way, you can make the enemy fall in love with the protagonist? I really don't understand what kind of emotional line this is. As for why I feel like a "diaosi", the episode that gave me the strongest feeling was the part about my wife Lan. To make people surrender and regret through "what's the point of being strong?" I almost thought I clicked on the wrong novel website. What's even more outrageous is that there is a fake pregnancy plot. Although it turned out to be fake in the end, when I saw the beginning of that paragraph, I thought it was a classic abortion scene in some domestic youth literature, which was extremely uncomfortable. In general, the plot of this book feels a bit too strong. There are many eye-catching plots, but the rationality and logic are too far behind.

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