The Rise of Malfoy at Hogwarts

To be honest, I was put off by the premise alone. It's obvious the author put a lot of effort into writing this book. The translation is also very meticulous. However, changing the spell's name is one thing, but changing the character names completely changes the story. Everyone is used to Albus Dumbledore. You think the translation is bad, so you change it?

Undeniably, this novel is the most faithful to the original work. From every detail, it can be seen that the author's understanding of the original work is vastly different from most HP fanfiction authors. He knows many settings that are not shown on the screen or in the novel like the back of his hand, making him a walking HP database.

I'm speechless. The beginning was going so well, and then this sudden death of the female lead is just ridiculous. Seriously, this isn't a fairytale-style fanfiction. A female lead is just kidnapped, and judging from the comments saying there are still months left... Well, those who know, know it's practically dead. After all, this isn't a fairytale-style fanfiction.

After reading dozens of chapters, this protagonist is incredibly contradictory. He wants to win over non-pure-blood wizards, yet he has a terrible relationship with the Order of the Phoenix and is at odds with pure-blood families, including his own. His beliefs are so strong that even his own family can't change them in the slightest. He's practically isolated.

I don't object to novel protagonists having harems, but I find it hard to imagine a group of kids who have just finished elementary school surrounded by women, rushing to build a harem. Shouldn't this age be a time for developing relationships?

Well, I haven't finished reading it yet; there are still 20 or 30 chapters left before I saw the latest update, but I just can't continue. The book is very good, but I really can't stand the plot. Has the author gone too far in making the protagonist suffer? The protagonist was betrayed by his best friend earlier, and there was nothing he could do but endure it. I can understand that.

To be honest, people who see the title and synopsis of this novel and are about to click on it usually think that this novel has the following characteristics, but the reality is often different. 1. The protagonist possesses leadership qualities. In fact, the protagonist's pronouncements of his own ideas and ideals in front of others are incredibly childish and immature.

That's so stupid, absolutely so stupid! Does this main character serve any purpose? Does adding this character have any impact on the original events? It just seems like the original trio experienced fewer "adventures"? Let's call it an adventure for now.

Female characters

Hermione