From the Start, I Picked a Fight at Lion Camel Ridge

What kind of setting is it? You have already ascended to the immortal world and you are still unable to live without food. Since there are a bunch of beggars and refugees in heaven, you will starve to death without food What kind of immortal can you cultivate? Just kidding, right? Even if you breathe in the heavenly environment, you are full of immortal energy. You are a pig, right?

A heavenly soldier is not as good as an ordinary mortal. Are you sure this is heaven? If a nuclear bomb falls, will the entire heaven be destroyed?

There will be refugees in the fairy world? Joke. That would only have such a setting if it were a "cultivation-style novel". If you want to write classical fairy novels, then you must have a correct view of classical fairy tales. The "Thirty-sixth Heaven" of the fairy world is the most "pure" place in the world. There can be no ordinary refugees. There are two classes of "commoners" in the fairy world, one is the ascendants, and the other is the aborigines of the fairy world. There are also several settings for ascension. One is like a cultivator, where gods ascend, and the other is a "chicken and dog ascending to heaven" type, passively ascending to immortality. However, the second type of people's own cultivation is not enough to ascend, so there is a saying of "Flying Immortal Pond", that is, these people with insufficient virtue passively wash away their mortal bodies in the Feixian Pond and become "celestial beings".                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ))'s Hide,       Divided into, The Highest One Is the Highest Classification. The lowest ones are the servants of gods and humans such as the ascended ones, with low status. I strongly disagree with the author's statement. It's best to change the settings. Are you still "ragged"? It's simply an exaggeration.

Chapter 1: At least persuade 90% of the readers to quit. The heavenly soldiers and generals don't talk about heavenly immortals. At least the earthly immortals. You wrote that the heavenly soldiers and heavenly generals are refugees who can't afford to eat. They can't even defeat me. That's a bit too much. How can they be weak and manage the three realms of governance?

I suggest the author to write urban articles! Xianxia! You need to further your studies before writing! Because I saw that the immortals you wrote do things the same as ordinary people. Can this be called a fairy novel?

The first one is to persuade them to quit. There are actually refugees in Heaven, and what's even more outrageous is that they actually recruit troops directly from these refugees. I thought about how such a large Heaven, whether it recruits directly from the ascended ones or from the souls of soldiers who died in the mortal world, it's okay to find a group of refugees and spend time laying the foundation. Damn it, what kind of nonsense is this?

Why are there still refugees in heaven? Do you spend your whole life cultivating immortality and then go to heaven to become a refugee? This first chapter is simply too powerful to persuade me to quit. 😅

Dear fellow Taoists, I am deeply poisoned. Please come here to report. Don't... Pfft...

There are actually refugees in heaven. This is something I never expected! Why, heaven can control it, and the world is going smoothly, but it can't control itself? ? ? Poisoning one to death is one.

Chapter 1 Those who can stand up are not ordinary people