The Beginning of Martial Arts

The layout of this book is too small. The protagonist has been showing off in the village and on campus. I've been doing some boring shit.

Let's break up first, saying it's for the male protagonist's benefit. Later, the male protagonist has a girlfriend. This ex-girlfriend starts to stick to each other again. The most bizarre thing is Chapter 290. The protagonist is dragged into a hotel by four women and raped. I'm really drunk.

This novel should be called "Excerpts from Jin Yong's novels and transfer of book reviews". Chapter 100 is to persuade people to withdraw. Latecomers need to be careful.

I originally wanted to wait until it was released on the shelves, but I couldn't stand it until I reached a hundred chapters. They were all clips from Mr. Jin's novels, and there were so few of my own. It felt like I was reading a collection.

The author probably became a gangster after graduating from elementary school. If a normal person is not forced into desperation, who would use a knife on someone who is somewhat related to him by blood? He later kills someone without any fluctuations in his heart and feels at ease. This only shows that in the author's mind, as long as he stands on a moral high ground, he can commit murder and arson without any legal bottom line! I can't stand it anymore

I can't stand it anymore. There are a lot of low-level mistakes. The author's previous books had such low recommendation votes. Why is this one so high? What do people who vote monthly look like?

Paralyzed, I read more than a hundred chapters, forgot to add bookshelf, and then nothing happened. I can't remember the title of the book, the protagonist's name, and the heroine's name.

Sure enough, it's still a 404. I've booked everything. What should I do? 🙂

I was speechless when I saw the author's whitewashing of the Young and Dangerous series. What do you mean by whether it should be bad or not? If you are going to die in the end, then why do you need to see a doctor when you are sick? Teaching bad boys means teaching bad boys and beautifying the community. According to your explanation, the law does not include the provision of abetting a crime. I also used other horror films as examples. Is this the same genre? How many are you a gangster? How many people can become murderers?

Finally, there is another completed novel that made me forget to read other serial novels that I am still following.

I have been silently pursuing the book, and finally I couldn't help but come out and say a few words. First of all, in terms of updates: sometimes it's six thousand words, sometimes it's four thousand words, it's very few, it's almost never explosive. In terms of plot, I thought it was pretty good in the early stages, but in the later stages, it almost became a review of the novel, with almost no plot to read in one chapter. The author is great. Everyone has read Jin Yong's books. Is it necessary to write so much about the plot and comments? It just gives people the feeling of trying to make up the word count. Therefore, it is recommended that you write less original text, comments, and even first- and second-floor articles. In the eyes of readers, they are all nonsense. Third, as for the emotional line, you either have to be dedicated to the end, or you are romantic to the death. You are neither dedicated nor romantic, which is really confusing. Fourth, I would like to give some advice to the author: since the protagonist's golden finger can be exchanged for various things, he should be allowed to sing and prosper instead of grinding away at writing novels, songs, filming TV series, and movies. He can write a lot. Now it feels like it has become a chronicle. Personal words. I don't mean to discredit the author. I just hope that the author can write better.

Forget the scattered little poisons in front, just bear with it and it will pass. Chapter fifty-seven is poisonous and dies, I really can't accept it. A school beauty offered 100,000 yuan and volunteered for a song. It felt like my IQ was being rubbed on the ground.

I have just read more than 300 chapters, and I enjoyed it quite a lot. But as a law student, I found it embarrassing in some parts. First of all, the calculation of royalties tax is strange at first. If the amount is less than 4,000 yuan at a time, 800 will be deducted. Then if the amount is less than 800 yuan at a time, won't it be reversed? I checked the "Personal Income Tax Law" and found that Article 6 does contain those, but they are taxable income, not income tax payable, which means these are not taxes, but are parts that should be excluded from personal income tax. The real royalties tax is Article 3, 20%, which means the real royalties tax is (Remuneration - Article 6) x 20%. Of course, the minimum number here is zero, so don't expect to get any money back. It is worth mentioning that the quantifier in front of the taxable income in Article 6 is "times", which means that if the remuneration for each "time" does not exceed 800, tax is not required. There is also Jinan Black Heart Factory. The protagonist's behavior fully meets the elements of defamation under the criminal law. Scolding "professional film critics" also constitutes an invasion of privacy. I'm not saying that the protagonist did something wrong. The protagonist's behavior has already been done. It is certainly not that easy to eliminate the impact. Its purpose has been achieved. What I care about is that it is not illegal to keep saying this. The former policeman just stayed there, unable to do anything to the protagonist; the latter one even made a loud noise, and the author forced himself to explain. However, what is prohibited by law is not the behavior of "human flesh search", but the infringement of other people's privacy caused by the behavior of "human flesh search". For citizens, everyone is free even if the law prohibits it, but there is no way to completely prohibit the behavior that infringes on people. Therefore, many provisions in the law are not based on the behavior itself, but on the fact that it infringes on people. It's just a personal complaint. I have little talent and knowledge. If there are any omissions, please forgive me.

When I first read it, I felt that what was being explained at the beginning was not very clear. For example: the reason for time travel (many books have not been written about it now, I personally feel it is better to mention it), the general situation of the time when the world was traveled (the level of technological development), the economic level, etc.

"I've read Chapter 6, and this pig's foot doesn't explain anything. I started copying novels as soon as I came here. I didn't write about the background of the world or my family. What's going on at home? There are no very special circumstances for high school students. I'm afraid they won't rent a house alone outside, right? And that girlfriend, yandere... Why would any parent choose such a lousy name? Moreover, this high school student fell in love with her as soon as she came here. Don't you think it's more appropriate to say "like"? It seems strange. At present, what the author writes seems to mean that he gave up his studies? I couldn't get into college after finishing high school. Then all kinds of copies of novels, classics, and operas? Even if you are a genius, you must also have basic cultural literacy, right? Otherwise, it's not called genius, it's called knowing it from birth! In the future, you will be plagiarized in various ways. People will say that what you wrote is not plagiarism, but you will not be able to deal with it, and you will not be able to pass the college entrance examination. And the one who submitted the article said that it was a novel originally ordered by the son of the magazine publisher. Since it can be finalized, it means that the novel should be basically good, right? If it's not decided, it's okay to say, since it's already decided, isn't it because I'm so full that I have to look for trouble? The next issue of the bimonthly magazine will be on there. I have to have such a blunt conflict. I haven't read the rest yet, but if I write it like this, it will definitely be the president's son looking for trouble. He's low-level! After reading only a few chapters, I feel that it is full of flaws and poisonous points! I looked through the table of contents and copied like crazy. I kept copying and publishing. How did you, a poor student, get so much cultural heritage? There are geniuses who have already studied on their own in school. They feel that they can't learn much in school, so they drop out and start a business. You're a scumbag who keeps copying and publishing novels. How the hell is that okay?

I'm here to meet the boss. I came from other books. I heard that the author's offline book friends were bleeding, so I came here to watch 🙂

I wish all your wishes come true and all kinds of good things prosper!

There were a lot of poisons in the past, especially the ambiguous relationship with the teacher, which was really poisonous. You think it's awesome and exciting to pick up a teacher when you go to school, but I think this pig's feet are really rubbish. And after killing three people in the river, the police actually recognized them as gangsters and ignored them? Holy shit, this is a murder case, okay? It's still three articles, it's a big case, how can you think that the person who died is a bad person and just ignore it? And the heroine in front of you didn't follow you, saying that her father didn't agree? Didn't you already have more than 200,000 royalties at that time? Can you show it to his father and let him see it? If you feel that the other person looks down on you, you don't even look at the situation of your own family. Even the kang can only be built if you have money, you can't study well, and it has caused the girl to lose her grades. What parent would look down on such a gangster who brings up his own children? I basically skipped watching it later. More than 100 chapters are poisonous.

When I saw Young and Dangerous, I gave up. I couldn't stand it anymore because of my different views.

Can I say that I was attracted by the reason for discontinuing updates of "Martial Arts Live"? 🤓

I heard that the author was anally raped😏

After reading Chapter 66, what can I say? The subject matter is okay, but the writing and plot really need to be improved. In the first 30 or so chapters, I felt it was okay. Later, I gradually felt that the violence was a bit heavy, and there were too many conflicts. Personally, I didn't feel any better, but it wasn't unbearable. In fact, what annoyed me the most was chapters 65 and 66. I had to drag my parents along to an unfamiliar dinner party. Do you think your parents wouldn't be embarrassed? Just caring about yourselfyourself and showing off. Have you ever considered your parents' feelings? The most unpleasant part is here, the parents were angry and left, and then the protagonist went in with peace of mind, which was very good and powerful. Then you just pretend to be good and write songs, and your mouth is full of oil. Have you ever considered your parents? Maybe they could just buy two steamed buns from a random store and deal with it. If it were me, I would have gone with my parents instead of making my parents angry and embarrassed. If I was writing the song for the sake of pretentiousness later on, I just want to say that the plot arrangement is really disgusting. If he had walked away at that time and waited for the protagonist to become famous later, wouldn't it be better to pretend to be invisible? It's not ten years ago now, it's not okay to be so blunt. If the protagonist's character content is the author's insinuation, it will be very scary to think about it. There is also the magic of talking and talking, which forcibly targets the heroine, and the sense of immersion is extremely poor. What I really want to ask the author most is, haven't you read it yourself? Do you think it's okay? This is the first time I write such a long review. If it weren't for the issue of parents, I wouldn't have written it. I hope the author can think carefully and strive for a better next book.

Dare to ask where the road is? The author is very brave, be careful when a six-year-old boy holds a press conference and scolds you for infringing his copyright.

It's not suitable for current readers. I loved reading it in 2016, but now it feels like it's toxic.

But after seeing the content of 191, I have to say something, I really shouldn't go into the pit of "Carefree Prodigal Son"! PS: In terms of setting, although "Happy Prodigal Son" imitates many martial arts, it still has its own highlights.

🤣After reading a bunch of comments, I ran away quickly.

The full set of Pili Puppet Show costs tens of millions, while Journey to the West only costs five million. How do you rate the price?

With so many books on Earth in the past life, if you publish martial arts novels one by one, one book can be serialized for several months, how many books can you write in a lifetime? If you want to gain prestige, why don't you post it online to expand the readership of a newspaper and magazine after it's been serialized, and just stick to one magazine? A newspaper? You don't have to think about the plot and just copy it, why can't you copy it in two copies? Is it so difficult for an offline magazine to serialize only 10,000 or 20,000 words in a month? It's really a waste to give the protagonist a golden finger.

After all, everyone came to see martial arts... I feel that most of the reading is to see Mr. Jin's martial arts... I cried when I watched it... Now when I watch these, I feel a long-lost feeling. My heart is numbed by reality, and I gradually become more energetic, even if it's just these days... The jokes in the entertainment industry are also very interesting... After all, everyone misses the classic TV series and movies of the year... What the heck is the second world and comics... To put it bluntly, reading is very concerned about the experiences of novel authors... But comics... Are a niche group. With our numb hearts, we don't care about these and will only look at them with cold eyes... The so-called second world may only focus on becoming a hero and conquering the world...

Make a sign and poison yourself so that you don't have to read this book again in the future.