Global Mist: StarCraft System from the Start

The author overpowered the units. If Marines' armor can be easily penetrated, then Terran would be fine with just swarms of Marines; why bother building Hydralisks and Ultralisks?

I've only read 20 chapters, and let me just say, your writing is absolutely toxic... Ugh. Here are the shortcomings and flaws I noticed. You need to understand what it means to destroy all communications; that's equivalent to destroying the world. Leaving aside ancient methods of communication, let's take modern times as an example.

Highly technological

Maybe my standards are too high. I just couldn't stand watching that executioner cleave the SCV in two with that axe.

I came here for StarCraft, but you've given me poison 😭

If the author sees this comment, please refer to it; it might open up new ideas for you! All post-apocalyptic novels feature protagonists with cheat-like abilities (or "golden fingers"). This is what we readers like. However, protagonists with these cheat-like abilities who rise quickly cause monsters to mutate and become stronger. What about ordinary people?

As a StarCraft novel, the author's general storyline is fine, but many readers feel that the Terran technology is overly suppressed. Perhaps the author could rename the "SUV" cheat code to mislead readers, thus avoiding comparisons to the Terran's overall power level. One While there aren't any major problems, the character development is too rigid.

Your savior-type characters shouldn't have female leads; if they do, it's bound to be a disaster.

I must regroup the troops!!

Human's strongest melee unit