Signing In with Eri from the Start of the Gale Swordmaster's Journey

Post to criticize. To be honest, quite disappointed. This book perfectly describes what it means to open high and go low. Highly popular and highly collected, the new book issue is not only the top-notch work of the same period, but it is also a number one. Let's not talk about the writing style. My experience after reading the whole article is that the author did not make a good outline and the story he wanted to tell was fragmented. Sometimes this character's skills will be mixed in, and now that one will be involved, and later I want to add a Zhutianliu chat group. The mess is like a ball of yarn that cannot be sorted out. During this period, I couldn't grasp what points in the work excited readers. In the middle period, when a group of people finished watching the foreshadowing and planned to watch Sweets, Lu Mingfei forced himself into the scene for ten chapters. Discourage most students from pursuing their studies. Everyone is watching Eri Yi making sugar and having to interact with the whole League of Legends golden finger, which is so confusing. The summary is that the author wrote it for fun, but he didn't expect it to become popular. As a result, I couldn't hold on and wrote to death.

Xia Zuo wiped the blade of the knife, and when he turned his head, he saw that Eriki was almost touching his face. From such a close distance, he could see himself reflected in Eriki's eyes. "What's wrong?" He asked, putting away the knife. "Want to go out to play? Not today, I have to go out to meet someone." "Meeting someone?" Eli Yi grabbed his left hand and wrote slowly, her big eyes showing a kind of mischief that she would not usually show, like a child who had succeeded in playing a prank. In some ways, she is indeed a child. Xia Zuo scratched his head in embarrassment and struggled for a while before speaking: "A... Netizen, a very close netizen, has let her down many times. This time I can't break my promise again." "Yes. Will you take me with you? She must be someone very important to you, right? Eriyi also wants to see her." The corners of her mouth raised slightly, and her face turned red for the first time, and she held Xia Zuo's hand tighter. "Shall I ask? After all, this can be considered..." "A date?" Eryi wrote quickly, which actually interrupted Xia Zuo's speech. Xia Zuo was slightly startled and nodded. "Then just ask, she will definitely agree." Xia Zuo took out her phone a little strangely and found Zirandai, and typed and asked: "Can I take someone on a date? /Awkward/Embarrassing/Embarrassing" Eli Yi quietly took out her phone and typed quickly. Transcript: "Of course it is if it's Darling. She must also be Darling's favorite person, right? /Hug/hug" Xia Zuo subconsciously glanced at Eri Yi holding the phone and replied, "Ah, yes, she is very important to me, really important." Transcript: "It's very important. How important is it? /Expectation/Expectation" "I'm used to having her by my side, maybe... I can't live without her anymore, right?" Xia Zuo was still about to say something, when she felt something bumping behind her. Eryi's hands wrapped around his waist, she leaned her face on his shoulder, and kissed the side of his face. What's going on? Xia Zuo put down his phone and had just sent out the words "I like her very much" in the chat box. When he was about to turn around and say something else, Eriyi blocked his mouth. She kissed carefully, like a child who had just received candy and was reluctant to eat it in one bite. She took small mouthfuls and savored the deliciousness of the candy, slowly tasting the thing she had been waiting for for a long time, which was more delicious than candy. She left a free hand and wrote on Xia Zuo's hand that had no place to rest, "I am majesty's natural lover, and I like majesty the most." Xia Zuo was stunned for a moment, and suddenly remembered what Mai Shutoku said, and then he suddenly realized that his wife had always been by his side? Eriyi's eyes were full of smiles, Xia Zuo also smiled and said: "Why don't you just say it?" "Love needs little surprises, majesty is my biggest surprise😘" Eriyi wrote with a smile.

To the author. I felt quite emotional after reading the latest announcement. Brother, have you ever thought that this book only contains 170,000 words. Brother, have you ever thought about how many people come from next door? The university next door has proven that fellow dragons can also become gods. Just look at how many Dragon Clan fandoms have emerged recently and you will know that this subject has a large audience. Brother, have you ever thought that even if you write the same theme again for Dragon Clan Eriyi, it will only be updated in one month. I don't want to put pressure on you, and I understand why the author's mentality collapsed. But really, 170,000 words of an online novel means nothing. How many people don't read anything less than 400,000 words. If you can't get into Sanjiang's book, do you have no chance? This ability overwhelms the recently popular single female protagonist, Dragon Clan, and the treasure of dog-food novels. But how do you know that the next book can still beat the wind? The number of people who tipped it has proved that the subject matter of this book is correct. I have read it. But are the tipping and collection data fake? I consider myself an old bookworm. This result is really not bad for a new book with less than 200,000 words. The author's thinking is correct, which means that if you stick to it, you may not get a better view. If other book friends agree with my point of view, please click like and let the author see how many people support him.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not start the plot but ended, so I don't need to use the common name, this is the end, the full order is more than 450 fan points, and the speech costs 500, I don't want to say more about the appearance, someone has already said it below about the plot, so I won't repeat it again. Let's just play around with writing a book. In fact, I have always felt that I am quite a loser. I talked about generating electricity for love, but then when I saw that the results were not good, I immediately pulled the plug.        ：，， I don't have good grades and no income, so I don't want to write: Ah, I'm just writing for fun, but I don't have grades, so I won't write. Let's re-open a book, it should make more money. The plot is broken, and I don't know how to write it: Oh, I'm just playing for fun, please be more considerate, I will definitely pay more attention to re-opening a book than I am now (and then repeat it) Some of the more stupid people just write the ticket at the beginning. Then when various problems arise and they don't want to write, they just refer to the beginning. The ticket seems to have become an excuse for the unfinished work. What I dislike the most is that after the end is unfinished, I continue to shamelessly ask for support. Trust seems to have turned into a leek. Once you cut a stubble, it can grow back and continue to cut. To be honest, I am not an author, and I don't know much about the "hardship" and "hardship" of their writing. However, I think it is the basic principle of the profession to love one's profession, and it is also to make money. Why don't you give it a try at work? Why did it change when it came to writing? I'm not very good at writing, and my typing may be a bit messy. I feel like I haven't finished what I want to say, but I just smoked a cigarette and suddenly I don't want to say anything anymore. Things are bad enough, so why should I poke him twice? That's it, goodbye, never see you again.                                                                                                                                                                                                           since

The writing skills of the author can be seen to be very good. There are relatively few people who write about the Dragon Clan fan series, and even fewer who write well. Generally, they rarely give direct rewards for the sake of fan value. They always subscribe until the fan value is enough before speaking. Having said so much, I just want to say: The author writes very well, come on! If I maintain this quality, I will continue to subscribe (wait until the paid chapters are released)

Author, when you write about Lu Mingfei and Little Monster, it feels like the protagonist is being ntr. The protagonist has been with Little Monster for so long, and the relationship is almost in person online. Originally, it felt like they were about to be together, but suddenly Lu Mingfei intervened. It feels really uncomfortable. I feel that Lu Mingfei is really inappropriate. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it'

Since I raised my speaking permissions, there are finally no trolls anymore.

You need 500 fan points to speak, so I rewarded you with 500. When I saw the seventy-sixth chapter, the protagonist did not appear in 10 chapters, so there was a little scene of what the protagonist was doing in the middle. Even when the boss said he sent a video call to the protagonist, he didn't describe the protagonist. So what are these 10 chapters describing? They are all about Lu Zongbi and Hui Liyi. The little devil wants to use Lu Mingfei's hand to control Hui Liyi. However, I have been reading books for so many years, and I have never read a book with more than ten chapters that does not write about the protagonist but instead writes about the NTR protagonist. I can only say that the author is cheating!

Eri Yi will always be a pain in the hearts of Dragon fans. I hope the author can write her well.

Why don't the other positions of Operations Officer go to whoever gets the most rewards? Doubt? ? ?