Signing In with Eri from the Start of the Gale Swordmaster's Journey

I'm posting this to offer my criticism. To be honest, I'm quite disappointed. This book perfectly illustrates the saying "a strong start followed by a decline." It was a highly popular and widely collected book during its initial release period, ranking among the top works of its time, if not the absolute best.

Xia Zuo wiped the blade, and when he turned his head, he saw Erii almost touching his face. At such a close distance, he could see his reflection in Erii's eyes. "What's wrong?" He asked, putting away his knife as he did so. "Want to go out and have some fun? Not today, I have to go out to meet someone." "Who are you meeting?"

To the author. I felt quite emotional after reading the latest announcement. Brother, have you ever considered that this book only has 170,000 words? Brother, have you ever considered that the "Going to University" fanfiction next door has already proven that Dragon Raja fanfiction can be legendary, and how many people came from there?

I came for the little monster, but it felt like the plot ended before it even got going. No need to use the common term, this is a terrible ending. A full subscription costs over 450 fan points, and you need 500 to comment. I don't even want to say much about this greed. People have already talked about the plot below, so I won't repeat it.

The author's writing skills are clearly quite good. There are relatively few people writing Dragon Raja fanfiction, and even fewer writing well. Generally, they rarely give rewards directly for the sake of fan value; they usually subscribe until they have enough fan value before speaking. After saying all that, what I really want to say is: the author writes very well, keep it up! If you maintain this quality, I will continue to subscribe (until the paid chapters are released).

Author, the way you wrote about Lu Mingfei and the Little Monster makes it feel like the protagonist is being NTR'd (Netorare, a form of infidelity). The protagonist has been by the Little Monster's side for so long, and their online relationship is practically on the verge of meeting in person.

Since the speaking privileges were increased, there are finally no more trolls.

You need 500 fan points to comment, and I've already given 500. Having read up to chapter 76, the protagonist hasn't appeared in 10 chapters, only appearing briefly in the middle. Even the scene where the boss mentions sending a video call to the protagonist doesn't describe the protagonist at all. So what are those 10 chapters about? They're all about Lu Mingfei and Erii.

Erii is a source of eternal pain for Dragon Raja fans; hopefully, the author can portray her well.

Why aren't other operations officer positions filled by those who receive the most donations? I have a question.