Her Loyalty Terrifies Even the Emperor

The writing style is a bit, um, stream of consciousness? Radio system? The setting should be good, but it looks a bit abstract.

After completing the hero's mission, he was reborn in the original world and then lost his memory? Still have not traveled through the timeline of another world? Is the heroine here early? The stream of consciousness is a bit confusing

It's too messy. I can vaguely see what the author wants to express, but the reading experience is not good, and I always feel that a lot of description is missing.

The writing style is okay, but the writing is very messy. This is an online article, and you can't expect readers to slowly understand it on their own. What should be explained clearly should be explained clearly in advance. I was attracted to that elf girl because of her unreserved trust. Whether it's affection or loyalty or whatever. But be able to trust without reservation. It's a pity that I can only say that I personally don't understand the protagonist.

The writing style of the work really makes people read it clearly, it is simple but can bring emotions In terms of plot, I can't understand what you are writing about The story is too short to mention for now But the content is really too radio, I can't understand it at all

Too messy, too little foreshadowing, too little foreshadowing

Very to my taste, author, don't be a eunuch

If you think something is wrong, please leave a mark in the relevant chapter and paragraph so that I can try to modify it.

There are also typos in the radio article. It's very tiring to read.

Is it entertainment, part-time, or full-time?