The Emerald of Hogwarts

I feel that the time-travel setting can be completely discarded. The protagonist's various behaviors are no different from those of a 10-year-old child. The souls who have traveled through time are young people. Youth is between 15 and 30 years old. I'll count you in your 20s. You are a 20-year-old mixed with a group of teenagers, as if you have the same mind as them.

I feel that McKenna's look really suits Ada's. 🤔

Here's a suggestion: if the protagonist can't remember the plot, write that it's been too long and is vague. Don't write anything about it being censored. Both outcomes result in the protagonist not remembering the plot, but the latter is a significant flaw.

Let's find a vulnerability that's not really a vulnerability. Snape wouldn't target students. Even if someone had eyes like Lily's, he might pay more attention to them but wouldn't deliberately target them. Snape's reason for targeting Potter was that he had the same eyes as Lily, but acted like his father and even had the surname Potter; it was somewhat like a feeling of disappointment and frustration. (The above represents personal opinions)

I'm just wondering, are there any other guys like me who watch this? Am I normal? 🙂

Why are female-centric novels popular in male-oriented genres?

I also have a suggestion: the third-person pronoun used by the protagonist should be consistent – ​​should it be "he" or "she"? The characters in the story call Ada "she," but the author uses "he" when writing about Ada, which is very confusing for readers, making it impossible to immerse themselves in the story and causing them to feel disconnected.

The family drama was so cringeworthy! The way a noble family handles conflict is by resorting to violence. The way the protagonist's father falls in love with the protagonist's mother is incredibly awkwardly written. The protagonist's sudden closeness with his grandmother, whom he's never met, is completely out of character. These departures from the established characters in the original work are incredibly jarring.

Female lead

This book is the story of an indigenous heroine, and you can't tell she is a time traveler.