Hogwarts: The Stars Shine Bright
霍格沃茨，星辰闪耀
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 383k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
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155Chapters
2.5kRecommendations
12.6kFans
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🤫Since the protagonist is so good-looking, I think he could try dyeing his hair red and wearing green contact lenses to seduce Snape.
Call me again when the main character has calmed down.
I came here after watching Emerald! Emerald is finished, and there aren't many people here, so I'm just saying a few words. I haven't finished reading The Emerald yet, but it's well-written. It's one of the few Harry Potter fanfics that doesn't have large sections copied and pasted; it has some original content and doesn't just follow the main characters aimlessly.
The Harry Potter books can have other elements, but the core should be magical wonder. However, as you've written it this far, the protagonist's magical progress has become too peripheral. This is one reason why the books haven't performed well. The protagonist's growth is not depicted; he is constantly immersed in the events, and his thirst for magic gradually disappears, creating a stark contrast with the previous chapters.
I strongly suggest improving the protagonist's emotional intelligence. Sometimes being too clueless is a major flaw. Don't let him be oblivious to the girl's feelings for him, or afraid to admit them—that would make him a total jerk.
Coming from Emerald, here are two monthly tickets for my new book! I want utter darkness! Aaaaaah! Become the Dark Lord! The Third Dark Lord! Rage and rule Slytherin!!
I just read chapter 12. I hope the author doesn't make it too harsh. As long as the male lead has enough emotional intelligence and is talented enough, he shouldn't face any difficulties in Slytherin. Look at Tom, he's also half-blood, and he's doing so well in Slytherin. Not to mention Grindelwald's Witchcraft/Cryptocratic tendencies.
If the main character ever gets bullied, just let me know.
It's not even as good as saying something, it's really fucking awful.
Did the author change their account? I really like the writing style of this book, but I don't know when it will be updated. If the author has changed accounts, could you please let me know the new account?