Hogwarts: The Stars Shine Bright

🤫 I think since the protagonist is so good-looking, he could try dyeing his hair red and wearing green contact lenses to seduce Snape.

Call me when the protagonist is not angry anymore

Came here after seeing Emerald! Emerald is over, and there are no people around, so I'm just chatting here casually. Emerald has not been finished yet, but the writing is still good. It is rare among Harry fandoms that I did not copy and paste large sections, but wrote some of my own things, and did not follow the protagonist around. The characters are well drawn, and the most important thing is that the book is finished! Now that I have finished the Harry fanfic, I can count it among the best (covering my face and crying with laughter)! The author describes how a character grows up from youth! Although the protagonist is not perfect, he is very real! He is not a dark wind, nor is he a good old man. He has his own thoughts and principles. I think it is a success! The whole book is still written according to the general framework of the original text, without any magic modifications. I think this is also the reason why Emerald's results are so average, and why it was able to complete the book! I hope the author can continue to work hard, write a new book, and take me into a new and different magical world→‿→

Harry Potter books can have other contents, but the core should be magic. As a result, until now, you have written too marginally about the protagonist's magic progress. This is one of the reasons for the poor performance of the book. The growth of the protagonist is not written out. He has been involved in the incident, and his desire for magic gradually disappears, which is in sharp contrast to the previous chapters.

I really recommend improving the emotional intelligence of the protagonist. Sometimes being too straight is a big poison. Don't let him not notice the girl's feelings for him, or dare not admit it. Isn't that a scumbag?

Coming from Emerald, open a new book and give me two monthly passes! I want complete darkness! Ahhhh, turn me into the third generation Dark Lord! Dominate me in Slytherin! !

I just read Chapter 12, and I hope the author won't write it too viciously. As long as the male protagonist has enough emotional intelligence and is a genius, he won't face any difficulties in Slytherin. Look at Tom, he is also a mixed race, and he does well in Slytherin. Not to mention the witch-party ideas like Grindelwald.

One day the protagonist gets angry and calls me

Let alone put it in a better way, it's really fucked.

Did the author change his account number? I like the writing style of this book very much, but I don't know when I can update it. If the author has changed his account, can you tell me the new account?