The Wandering Wizard of Hogwarts

It has nothing to do with Hermione this time, right? Let me support you first. As for the heroine, you can choose between Penello or Farley or create a few original ones. As for the academy, I personally prefer Ravenclaw.

Because the child originally fell down the stairs, the male protagonist took advantage of the situation and gained control of his body? So where did the original soul go?

The best HP story I've seen recently. As long as you don't chase Hermione, everything else is easy to say. Hermione's pursuit is acceptable. There are too many Hermione heroines. I vomited when I saw it.

I found this book before it hit the shelves, and to be honest, it was averagely written. As the protagonist, I feel that the portrayal is not too vivid. It has a facial expression. He looks calm and steady, but he will still be the first to rush forward when something happens. The only better thing is that this protagonist is not the kind of reckless man who rushes into the situation. Maybe it is because of the author's control. This protagonist has not been defeated yet, but suppressing first and then rising is the narrative method of Japanese comics. If you are a writer of novels, don't play this routine. There is also the direction of the plot. In your words, the plot pit at the beginning is foreshadowing, but to be honest, if I wasn't an old bookworm, I would have quit long ago. What is online writing now? It's cool writing. You, a novice writer, have buried so many pitfalls. Who can read it? In addition, there are several characters that everyone has commented on. As of now, their IQs are all online, except for Roger Davis. However, I still don't think you need to focus on portraying an enemy of the same grade, an 11-year-old kid as the protagonist's enemy. Don't you think it's too cheap? But you are the author, how you write is still your business. I hope it doesn't collapse later!

Come on dalao! From a cute newbie waiting for updates

A major problem was discovered. First of all, George and Fred should have entered school a year later than the protagonist. According to the rules of the Goblet of Fire Triwizard Competition, wizards under the age of 17 cannot participate. If calculated according to yesterday's chapter, George and Fred are just old enough to participate in the Goblet of Fire competition and do not need to use age-enhancing potions.

Apart from giving the protagonist a magical talent through soul travel at the beginning, it would be boring to do soul travel later on, and I don't really want to see it.

I wish everyone a happy new year. If it is convenient, I would like to ask you for some recommendation votes😁😁

At the beginning, the pit is unclear, and then the appearance of the ring energy disrupts the plot. Most of them are original and well written! But a lot of people can't understand it, and the plot of Kaiying and stuff like that is confusing.

Make some magic equipment. You'll always get tricked. Why don't you just buy a few pieces of equipment? It's so uncomfortable to be abused all the time😖

I had to go back and forth several times before I accepted this! The first three made me abandon them several times, and then I accepted them after skipping them.

Very boring! There's no point in building a system! Just a long-winded one