A Perfect Life Begins with Devouring

I don't understand. In the first few chapters, you only fought high-level monsters, not low-level ones, to hone your combat skills. By the mid-game, you're already invincible on Earth, so why not go on a killing spree? Especially with your D-class fighter jet, clearing out all the monsters on Earth and racking up tens or hundreds of billions of experience points wouldn't be difficult.

I'll start a thread here; please post any problematic aspects here so I can fix them. Personally, I think there were quite a few flaws in the early stages; it's my first time writing, so there's really no way to avoid them... It seems to have improved slightly towards the end, and I hope readers will be patient and read on. 😥😥

Having read up to chapter 47, the beginning was alright. There was a cheat code, and the Dark Game world could be cleared in 5 chapters, the pacing was decent, and it would be great if it were explored more deeply. However, the sudden appearance of the System Mystery and then Battle Through the Heavens felt completely unnecessary and deviated from the main plot.

I feel the protagonist's vision is too limited. The world he's devouring is too vast, and humanity's existing power structure is essentially stagnant. If the protagonist tries to expand his influence, he'll quickly fall behind the pace. Expanding influence is pointless; he might as well join one of the five major powers and focus on cultivation now.

If it's a universal upgrade, why can't combat awareness and arcane techniques be upgraded?

I haven't seen a completed fanfic about the system-devouring genre yet. Keep it up, author!

I just watched the protagonist get lucky and keep going. There was no female lead, no family, no friends. At first, I thought it was very good, but after watching for a while, I found it boring.

I feel like... There's no need to wander to other worlds. The world of Swallowed Star is so vast; developing within Swallowed Star is enough.

Much better than the books I've read before.

The Lord of the Universe only needs to comprehend the complete laws of time and space independently; there is no need for fusion. The entire universe may only have the original spacetime fused. If spacetime is fused, then he would be a strong being among the strongest beings in the universe.