
The Days When the System Forced Me to Be an Undercover Agent in the Navy
系统逼我在海军当卧底的日子
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- 1.0M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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Don't treat others as fools. Will there be no revolutionary soldiers in the navy? Is the protagonist smart? Long has been in the navy for a long time. Doesn't he know that and wants you to remind him?
I've read a few books where the main character has a doppelgänger and many people retreated from it. It's really a failure. After all, they all lead themselves into the main character and suddenly a second male lead appears. I retreated.
The ability of the Zhuanzhuan Fruit is transfer. It can transfer attacks and damage. Can it even transfer emotions? Emotion? Time and space? Strength? Transfer emotions, examples transfer emotions to the world, will the pirate world have a way of heaven from now on? Transferring feelings, for example, turning someone else's wife into your own? Transfer time and space, for example, transfer an island in the world to a new world? Transfer power, transfer Whitebeard's strength to ordinary people? Even changed the gender? Men and women transfer to each other?
The clone skills are a bit bad
The name of the main character's fruit is so awkward. Isn't it the fruit that is carried by Doflamingo's subordinates? Is it possible to change the name if I insist on using it? Moreover, this transfer ability is so stupid.
I haven't watched it yet, but I'd like to ask a question. . . Is it true that the protagonist is 1.68 Meters tall?
The revolution may be cruel, and the process must be bloody, but I think Dorag can be called a great man (in the world of pirates)
Forget it, I originally planned to watch it, but I can't stand the abuse of the protagonist of the original work. If Nami Robin is really captured into the Navy or the World Government, how can it be better? It's withdrawn.
The writing is not good, and there are a lot of unnecessary narrations in the fighting scenes, especially the part at the beginning where you get the Rookie King and G0 to verify your identity. The next few chapters are even more ridiculous. It was mentioned before that Kalla is such a genius. He practiced from 50 to 100, and he was holding his breath there. , I feel that Karla went from 50 to 100, but I only went from 320 to 329. I don't know what to feel aggrieved about. You have already said that you are not a genius. Besides, it is not clear at a glance which one is easier, 50 to 100 or 320 to 330.
You learned Armed Color Haki in the early stage, but in the end, you never used it once in battle. I kept looking at you and saying that Armed Color Haki has doubled or grown a lot, so why don't you use it?
Just write well and write well, what the hell are you doing?
I can understand the phantom, but in the world of Pirates, it is not possible to cultivate a clone using a Devil Fruit. I think it does not fit in with the world view.
It starts with an old-fashioned fantasy style. . . . . One Piece is suitable for fighting in the past, so just go ahead and do it
You say something but don't listen, you hear something but don't understand it, you understand it but don't do it, you do something but do it wrong, you make a mistake but don't admit it, you admit it but you don't change it, you change it but you don't accept it, you don't accept it but you don't say it, what do you want the readers to do?
Is it so easy to reach the general emperor level threshold? His physical fitness is not up to the standard at all. Without two years of systematic basic attribute training, how could it be so powerful? . .
Transfer souls, call Garp, the result of the battle is that the three generals were captured by Kaido, find someone to transfer souls to each other, and earn a lieutenant or fourth emperor in vain
I was fine at first, why did I suddenly become a cultivator? I'm speechless 😅😅
The Turning Fruit is actually similar to the Great Shift of the Universe. It is invincible in close combat. It transfers the damage to the ground through the feet. When the physical strength increases, you can go up and fight hard. How did the opponent hit you? Add your own damage and hit it back. It is the same as the black one in the mutants. Just like the emperor, he stores the damage of nuclear bombs in his body and shoots it out when needed. Before going to the battlefield, he asks the three navy generals, Garp and Sengoku to beat him up, saves the damage, and then asks them to attack Kaido, and then he goes up and transfers the damage like an assassin 😃
If you have any opinions, you can put them forward here. Little Elephant will definitely accept them with an open mind...
Cheer up, Samsung. Writing, three and a half stars. Characters, Samsung. Plot, three and a half stars. Story structure, four stars. Comprehensive evaluation, 17 stars, a bit too cliche, but worth reading, food first!
Hehehe, I like to follow the boat the most. I like pirates because Luffy has a kind of simplicity and kindness that people in modern society don't have. He likes to help others unconditionally. I have always liked it. It's not like people nowadays who think about disgusting things every day and comment on kind people.
It's so poisonous. The author added a lot of personal understanding to it, and it's very different from the original work!
The combat power system is in complete chaos. Even if it's all broken, it still can't break Qiao Zi's armor.
Regarding Devil Fruits, I think they can affect people's emotions: Luffy's one tendon (rubber), Ace's impulsiveness (burning), Enel's arrogance (thunder), Dover's desire to dominate (thread), Tezoro's desire for money (golden), Blackbeard's darkness (darkness), Kuzan's sleeping laziness (freezing), and Akainu's fiery (magma). The awakened ones currently appearing are Ming Ge's own strong desire to dominate, his arrogance as a Celestial Dragon, and his use of the Thread Fruit to control humans, which ultimately led to the fruit's awakening. Tezoro's desire for money and control of wealth made the Gold and Gold Fruit awaken. The Nuo Nuo Fruit cannot understand it. I always feel that the Devil Fruit will affect people's emotions, and the closer it is to the characteristics of the fruit itself, the easier it is to awaken. There is a saying: If you can only choose the original fruit, the Tuntun fruit feels the most powerful.
I feel like the rear admiral must have 2000 power. 1000 Power is only the strength of cp9 Tauren Bruno 🤫. It's too bad.
It doesn't matter if it's more than 20 chapters in a boot camp. It's still trying to force extra scenes. I don't understand what's so cool about it.
Overall not bad. But there are too many things that violate the original settings, which makes me, a person who has studied some pirates, uncomfortable with it. For example, Kizaru is not good at taijutsu and domineering, but you insist that he is just pretending not to be good at it. The personality of each original character has been worn away by you. Most people in One Piece cannot think rationally, and all their behaviors and habits have a strong personal style. In order to set a combat power level, you templated everyone. For example, it is the official setting that the Admiral is weaker than the Yonko. Although it is said that the Admiral will not lose against the Yonko in a short time, weak is still weak. The most serious thing is that you gave Blackbeard an unwarranted phantom beast fruit, which is simply unacceptable to me. I think the setting that the Dark Fruit is a special Devil Fruit has been going on for almost a thousand episodes, and it doesn't make sense that you want to overturn this. In my understanding, there is no combat power higher than that of the Four Emperors, and the space of One Piece does not allow it. At most, the Four Emperors are more powerful.
How powerful is he already in his 10s? The cheating is so great. He is so awesome at such a young age. It is a bit insulting. I feel that other people have lived in vain for decades. Compared with the protagonist, I would kill myself. At least, don't be too young, at least make it about 20 years old.
Come on 😁😁😁
Doppelgänger is the biggest flaw. I wrote all three places but the writing was not good at all. Isn't the result of the navy transfer bad?