The Dark Swordsman's Daily Life in Konoha

Complete nonsense. Although I haven't read this book yet, I still think it's nonsense after reading the comments. Naruto and other 12 Xiaoqiang have the strength of Jonin in the Chunin Exam? Are you sure this isn't a joke? I saw someone in the previous comments saying that this way of writing puts Kakashi, a 12-year-old Jonin who shocked the entire ninja world at the time. As a result, the author said that there were no jounin when I graduated from school, and there were definitely jounin during the chunin exam. I want to say that this is still a 12-year-old jounin? You know, Naruto was only 12 years old when he took the chuunin exam. If Naruto was a jounin at that time, then all the people who participated with him would also be jounin. Jun Malu Gaara is a perfect Kage level, are you kidding me? You must know that Naruto was 12 years old if he had not failed school to graduate. You must know that graduation, going to the Land of Waves to do missions, taking the Chuunin exams, Konoha's collapse plan and other things definitely happened when Naruto was 12 years old, because Naruto graduated from the ninja school at the age of 12, and later went out to train with Jiraiya for 3 years. When Naruto came back, he was 15 years old. These are the times clearly given in comics and animations. So author, you said Naruto was not 12 years old when he took the Chuunin Exams, but how old was he? According to what you wrote, wouldn't there be a bunch of 12-year-old jounin in the Chuunin Exam? Some people in the previous comments said that the author has not watched Naruto. The author got excited and said that he watched the episode on demand on TV from the time Naruto aired to episode 46. That is to say, you were still a younger brother when I watched Naruto. But author, how many years has it been since Naruto aired 46 episodes? It's almost 20 years! You wrote the book based on the memories you had when you were a primary school student 20 years ago? Relying on that memory to compete with readers? There is a reason why I am sure that the author did not relive Naruto before writing the book but relied on memories from 20 years ago. Because someone commented before that didn't the protagonist obtain the skills of lol's Gale Swordsman and Sword Master? Why are all the skill names in the novel wrong? Guess what, the author actually replied that he only remembered q w e r but not the name of the skill, so he made it up. Good guy, when writing a book, the author just googles it and can get it all in less than a minute. The author is not willing to look it up. If you ask him to review hundreds of episodes of Naruto, isn't that ridiculous? Wouldn't it be even more ridiculous if you asked him to look up Naruto's formula book? So this author replies to every comment, which seems to be modest. In fact, it is not the case. I read through the comments and they all said that there is a problem with his division of strength. No one supports him, so he can still dominate! Author, when everyone doesn't think you are right, can't we find the reason from ourselves? Do you have to be tough? If scientists explore the unknown, it can also be said that the truth is in the hands of a few people. But Naruto is just a manga plus animation, it is really there. Not to mention that there are a thousand Hamlets among a thousand people, and there are a thousand Sun Wukongs from Journey to the West among a thousand people. That is because of different psychology, but it has nothing to do with the division of strength, because no matter how many Sun Wukong there are, no one can think that a monkey that just jumped out of a stone can beat Tathagata, right? I said in my previous comments that I would like to see it but not leave! This is true, but it's not the truth. If you write something about yourself, you don't have to post it. Isn't it just for people to read it? If others read what you wrote and feel that some parts of it are unreasonable, they will feel uncomfortable and leave a comment to say what is unreasonable. Is this correct? Author, you must have an attitude in everything you do, and you cannot do whatever you want. The World of Naruto Through the Eyes of Reincarnation This book was quite popular before, and I believe many people know that the author of that book is a big Shuibi, but he is such a big Shuibi. Someone said before that some parts of his book were unreasonable. After reading Naruto for a day and checking the information for a day, he replied that he was indeed wrong. This is the attitude! Just like playing games, of course it is for entertainment and to make yourself happy. But when you play games such as LoL and Honor of Kings, you can hang up when you want, give away when you want, play however you want, and just care about your own happiness. When your teammates scold you, you say, "Playing games is for fun. I can play however I want. You guys like to have fun, but if you don't, get lost!" Isn't that okay? You can't base your happiness on the pain of others, right? So you can play stand-alone games however you like, but for games that require interaction with others, you have to consider other people's feelings. You can't do whatever you want! So if the robber steals a lot of money, the robber is very happy, but others suffer, it is a crime, this is the law! So if you hang up and give away heads while playing games, you may be happy to play however you like, but others will be in pain and have their accounts banned. This is the rule of the game company! So since the book has been posted online for others to read, you can't enjoy it! In addition, I am not a person who makes money exclusively through blackmail. That kind of person doesn't have time to write so many things.

I don't know the plot of time travel, so it's better not to wear it

The protagonist's name, forget it, let it go

The writing is average, and it is obviously an explanatory novel. The whole process is explained, and it is very interesting to read.

Many fans regard the third generation as a good person who does whatever he wants for Konoha. Kakashi's father committed suicide, the Uzumaki Kingdom was annihilated, the Senju were annihilated, and Naruto's tragic childhood. Many people said that it was Danzo who had done it. Didn't the Third Generation know? Would Danzo dare to take action without the third generation's acquiescence? What would happen if the third generation said a word when White Fang and Naruto were attacked by villagers? Also, White Fang's failure in the mission and his choice to save people was just an excuse to launch an attack to force White Fang. White Fang's reputation was too high, threatening the status of the third generation. The Book of Sealing is in the hands of the third generation. Rare Earth Reincarnation: Doesn't the third generation of such an awesome ninjutsu know that this ninjutsu is equivalent to a nuclear weapon? Who would dare to attack Konoha if it appears just once! To put it bluntly, the Senju clan has been exterminated. How can the third generation face the first and second generations? The third generation was afraid and didn't dare.

If you have a system to travel through Naruto, you really don't want to go to Konoha, so you can destroy Konoha openly 🤭

Is there such a setting in this novel? Student, first in grade, half-step genin, first genin, early genin, middle genin, late genin, peak genin, perfect genin, extreme genin, half-step chunin, first chunin, early chunin, middle chunin, late chunin, peak chunin, perfect genin, extreme chunin , half-step special jounin, first time special jounin, early special jounin, middle special jounin, late special jounin, peak special jounin, perfect jounin, special jounin limit, half-step jounin, first time jounin, early jounin, mid-jounin, late jounin, peak jounin, perfect jounin, extreme jounin, half-step master Elite jounin, first time elite jounin, early elite jounin, middle elite jounin, late elite jounin, peak elite jounin, perfect elite jounin, elite jounin limit, half-step shadow level, first time admission to shadow level, early shadow level, mid-level shadow level, late shadow level, peak shadow level, perfect shadow level, ultimate shadow level, half-step shadow level, first time entry Super shadow, early stage of super shadow, middle stage of super shadow, late stage of super shadow, peak of super shadow, perfection of super shadow, limit of super shadow, half-step to the six paths, first entering the six paths, early stage of one layer of six paths, middle stage of one layer of six paths, late stage of one layer of six paths, peak of one layer of six paths, perfection of one layer of six paths, limit of one layer of six paths, half step to the second layer of six paths, first entering the second layer of six paths...

Alas, I don't want to watch it anymore. The combat power setting is confusing. Temari Kankuro is a jounin, and the two supporting jonins are all teenage jonins. Kaka's 12-year-old jounin is the best in Hokage. As far as the author is concerned, there are too many 12-year-old jonins. Naruto and Sasuke were jounin in the chunin exam, Neji and Lee were also jonin, and Shikamaru and Shino who defeated Temari Kankuro must have been as well. The strongest Choji of Ino Shikacho is also a jounin. Even if a Jonin is worthless, he is still invincible in the early stage. If he is a Jonin just after leaving school, then Kakashi is the biggest joke.

If Sasuke stays in Konoha, he will die sooner or later. Naruto is taught by Jiraiya like his own son. Where is Sasuke? What can Kakashi teach? How many people in Konoha consider Sasuke a friend? Most of it was about isolating Sasuke.

Pillar, pillar, what's wrong with you? Wahahahahaha, the legendary Uchiha Qisuke!

And when Orochimaru and the third generation were PKing, no one in Konoha came to help the third generation. Is the Four Purple Flame Formation created by the four chunin so powerful? Kai wanted to help the third generation but was stopped by Kakashi. Jiraiya was not far away from Konoha and the third generation so he didn't want to help. He had been entangled with several psychic snakes for so long! Danzo won't talk about it. Three generations have been separated from each other. No one came to help him. Even his son was watching the theater on the roof!

I feel like the author hasn't watched Naruto very much! I feel like I don't know a lot about Naruto. If you really don't want to read about Naruto's settings, you can also check out Danzo from the cat next door. The author has basically figured out all of Naruto's settings, and even readers can't tear him apart.

I was persuaded to give up after seeing the name. At least give me a name that matches Naruto. Is there anyone in Japan with a single surname of "Ye"? If there is any, I have little experience and I apologize. If not, just hehe →_→.

After thinking about it, I put it mildly. In the chuunin exam, the fact that the top twelve are just jounin is really too exaggerated. What about the teachers who are stronger than them? How about family elders? How to count the dark roots? What kind of combat power does Orochimaru and Hokage have on the same level? What about Nagato who is more powerful than them? How about Madara and the others who are stronger than Nagato? How to calculate the more fierce Kaguya and others? It's scary to think about it, the original book can split the moon, but this super-enhanced version of you is going to the Dragon Balls.

Well, author, you said they have the strength of jounin, but they are not as strong as Kakashi and the others, then you can give a jounin as a reference. Otherwise, your division of strength is too weird. There is no such level as Shadow Level in the original work, Shadow Level is just a secondary design. The person who wants to be at least the Hokage is a Jonin. So, how is the combat power of your Jonin level divided? In my opinion, the strength of a ninja is determined by their proficiency in ninjutsu and combat experience. At that time, Naruto and the others needed proficiency but not proficiency, and they needed experience but not experience. It was barely acceptable to say that they were chunin, but was it too much to say that they were jounin? When the plot develops later and a group of jonin come out, how do you show their strength to them?

After reading a few pictures, the words "female tyrannosaurus" and "old witch" can dissuade most people. If I want to change it, just use Tsunade. The strength aspect is vague, which is a taboo. A clear instant selection of strength can make people feel more involved (the protagonist is more handsome and more immersive), because when reading a book, you bring yourself into the protagonist. Yes, for the name of the protagonist, I suggest giving up the name Ye Xiaotian. The play can be played every minute. There is no need to change the name of the undercover agent. Mulong can just call Pig's Foot a fake name. Plan the route for Pig's Foot to develop its strength well. Don't become strong suddenly. For example, what is needed for upgrading? In terms of writing style It is recommended to read Controlling Time from Naruto. This is one of Goldfinger's most exciting articles. Read his and then yours and you will know what is going on. The issue of character design is to set up the character of the protagonist. I watched it for a long time and I didn't even see the character of the protagonist. For the protagonist, he can do anything. It seems nonsensical. Saving people and meddling is like a fool. It has its own plot line, changing the original plot, turning tragedy into something beautiful, etc. This is all fun. So far, it seems to be based on the original work, and the arrangement is very rigid. I really don't want you to collapse and throw a knife into the palace later. The subject matter is quite good.

It was put on the shelf without saying anything. There isn't even a testimonial on the launch. There is no update. Author, you are not wise

Let's change the daily guide to daily poison. I was poisoned in the first chapter. God damn it, the young man's voice is also very young. I bought a watch last year. . .

😅How should I put it? It's okay to have an original plot and it's okay to have original characters. Can you be careful when choosing a name? The Wind Blade Clan? And the art of fire? Sorry, it's not Boruto, and ordinary ninjas don't have many advanced ninjutsu. The only technique that can be discussed is to extinguish the sea of ​​fire. How should I put it? Recently, a lot of authors have appeared in the fandom area who do not check the information and treat fanfiction as otherworldly novels. I would like to give you a suggestion. Fandom is not a blank slate. It is about making changes to the original story. What is important is how to make readers feel reasonable and not jump into the plot.

The author's writing is excellent and has so much refinement! Even so, I was persuaded to quit! I understand the cheating is Wuji and Orphans, and I like changing the skills! It's unique, and I couldn't stand the forced setting of Qinglong Fist later! It doesn't matter what the discussion is about the third generation! It's water anyway! It doesn't matter whether it's good or bad! But the description of Orochimaru in the Chuunin Exam is really embarrassing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I saw an explosion

Adding too many secondary settings. To be honest, this kind of thing should be left to the later stage, because the early stage of the fandom should revolve around the main plot and make appropriate changes to the plot. Then when it becomes stronger, it can completely change the plot development. Things that are not described in the original work but can exist reasonably. Adding too many secondary settings too early will drive away many people. I have always said that fandom is a dream. This dream is very fragile. Wrong timeline, wrong setting, and the unfamiliarity with the original work caused by too many secondary settings like yours will be like urine at midnight. Wake up from a dream. I can never go back

Toxic, this is a novel written by Douying.

His strength is too high, and he hasn't even taken the chuunin exam yet. Sasuke and the others have the strength to be jounin? At that time, if you only had one big fire ball, and two magatama, would you be able to have jounin strength? ? ? Come on, Rachel hasn't learned anything yet.

The author is a bit too verbose. He explains the strength of the chuunin and genin over and over again, which is too tedious. People are not here to see you interpret or refute the original settings. You just tell the story according to your plot and settings, and quickly develop or fight. You always fail to get to the point, and people are distracted.

This name will just dissuade you 😅

The author has never watched Naruto, right. How dare he write after reading a few fanfics?

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Swordsman and Hokage are not good at all, I feel like they have no imagination.

It's too poorly written and poorly finished. I simply don't know what to say.

Damn it, the author doesn't want to use his strength to persuade people to quit. Just look at the introduction and it's so vicious. If he says he is a swordsman and adds an assassin, he will persuade a lot of people to quit.