The Mountains Are Calling

I have read all the updated ones so far. Let me tell you my feelings. The beginning is very interesting. There are no clichéd systems and plug-ins. It is a realistic dark style with elements of Cthulhu DND Wizard, mainly Cthulhu. I think the writing is quite good and very flavorful. It is one of the best starting points. There is no such thing as a routine in this book. The protagonist is the author. As a pioneer, it is a pioneer of slash and fire. It is very novel and has a unique power system. At least it is the first time I have seen it. There is also a very important point. The protagonist is a living person who will make mistakes, fail, be careless, arrogant, and angry. However, I feel that there is less emotional writing, making the protagonist a bit dry and cold. Moreover, it is not refreshing enough. The ending is too rough and skipped, which lacks a lot of sense of immersion. Some things are not explained clearly, and it feels a bit like moving here and there. I find the fighting scenes extremely embarrassing, and I'm looking forward to the undeveloped map and power system, so be sure to hold on tight and don't write down. But overall, in a world where pretentious writing is rampant, this is a rare and thoughtful work. The author is also doing it for love, and I admire this spirit. While reading the book, I also met a Madonna reader, and I really wanted to give them both a thumbs-up. Finally, I hope that the author's story will get better and better and more exciting. Readers who are watching this for the first time should be patient and read on.

What is written in the back? The sense of mystery and weirdness at the beginning is gone, and it becomes a cliché power struggle, elemental magic, and later on, belief in gods??? These are not things from old-fashioned fantasy novels, and it does not write anything new.

I caught up with the latest chapter in one go. I feel that the author has written the first half very well and the characterization is also very good. The further you get to the back, the more you let yourself go. I only represent myself and say that everything I see is chaotic and evil. The way the story is told is somewhat fragmented which affects the viewing experience. But overall, it is one of the most promising books I have read recently. Finally, the author of the book about facial expressions and blood control made the protagonist look a little special. She doesn't have to be beautiful as the world thinks, but she doesn't want to be ordinary. Please🙏🥺

Oh oh oh, updated

After entering the academy, it became the classic pretense and slap-in-the-face routine of Qidian. The settings and plots that were so amazing in the early stage have turned into rubbish here, as if they had hired a ghostwriter. If this book had followed the plot line at the beginning, it would have become popular a long time ago.

This book is a lot more advanced than Black Adam, in all aspects. Behind the smooth plot text, I saw a relatively complete outline. I hope the author of the later setting plot will also think hard and not end up like Black Adam. After reading this book, I saw the author's true potential to become a god. I still hope that the protagonist can try his best to get some recommendations or publicity.

This pretense is too stiff. I don't know why, but after fighting with that new star, it suddenly turned into a brainless and cool article. . . Is there really no substitution?

Alas, the author Da Da's last book was originally very exciting, but it's a pity that it was due to performance reasons. The subject matter was a bit niche, and the writing style was not worthy of mention.

This book is not at the starting point (read alone)

After leaving the Ural Mountains and starting to slide down, I immediately threw up when I saw the chapter "New Star Supernova". The mysterious, weird, and Cthulhu flavor was gone, and a fantasy smell came over my face, but it was still earthy fantasy.

The more I read, the more disappointed I became. I was introduced to the Grammar novel, but when I went to school, it turned into a traditional Western fantasy, as if it was written by two people, and the taste completely changed.

Regardless of the writing, the opening of this book is the best I have ever seen in a book of this type, a perfect opening, a god-like opening.     ，，，， If you follow the beginning, you will definitely be able to become a god, which can only be said to be a pity.

In the first chapter, the time traveler was threatened and forced to tell everything, and the efforts to persuade him to quit were maxed out.

Almost like a eunuch. After all, the author has a criminal record. None of the three numbers is complete. Basically they are all bad guys or eunuchs. It's so difficult to update now. I have written another 700,000 to 800,000 words. It's almost time to become a eunuch. Waiting for the new book to be released.

There is a scary atmosphere of Cthulhu in the front, but it is too cliched to directly adjust it to the academic style in the back, and I don't feel it.

If this kind of good writing is buried, the starting point will be just like that.

Read this book carefully. The description of the power struggle is a bit unreasonable. Even life and death cannot be guaranteed. External disasters are so powerful. A new family. Do you actually have such a strong desire for power struggle? A new family. Not that yet. Meat eaters are so despicable. How could there be such a struggle?

The first few chapters are quite eye-catching, but unfortunately they are just using novel anti-internet novel routines to create a sense of freshness, and then their skills are completely exposed. The part about overthrowing the dwarf tribe was particularly outrageous. The motivations of each party in this incident were far-fetched, and everyone was out of ideas. Only the protagonist suddenly changed from being submissive to being exhaustive. There was no logic at all.

I can only say that this book is a good read, but the review environment is quite poor. For those of you who want to read cool novels, the brain-brained comments made in this book based on the protagonist's situation are so funny. The novel doesn't look at the writing, the setting, or whether the plot is reasonable or not. It only looks at whether the protagonist is living a good life. Then why don't you read a bunch of books?

This college chapter is too strong and I can't stand it.

It is indeed a good book. The theme of the story is novel, and the character of the protagonist is worthy of recognition. The IQ is not just online, it is directly beyond the standard. Although the ending is a bit rushed and feels like there are some pitfalls, and it has not been filled in -_-||. For example, the Witch and Moon Girl got Matthew, but what about the Witch? And there is no explanation about the Witch at the end. . . . I feel that the author has a good grasp of the advancement of the protagonist's spiritual practice in the article. From the beginning of the Ural Mountains, he walked on the road to ascend to the gods, then split into two, worshiped the Yin Leng Society to make up for the lack of spiritual knowledge, and in the later period, he subdued the Rat Father, the Moon Girl, the Goddess of Destiny and the Giant, used the True Spirit Position and Karma Map to create a new world and become the Creator. The best and most essential point is that the protagonist knows what he should do at what time and what choice is the optimal solution to the protagonist's current situation. These all reflect the protagonist's excellent qualities and the necessary conditions for success.

Dad, don't be a eunuch🙇🏻‍♂️🙇🏻‍♂️🙇🏻‍♂️

Although, I know the reason why I gave up the pit is quite confusing, but I still want to say it. Sometimes I want to look at the chapter table of contents to see if there are any chapters that I am interested in, but they all have two-word chapter names. I can't see any useful information, so I don't want to read them. . .

I have been reading novels for several years, and I am not a rich person. This is my first alliance. The author writes well, and I hope I can stick to it.

Black Ring, are you still writing a new book?

There is a big lump in the middle of the comment area, how many chapters are there in the academy chapter, so I can skip it.

Qidian's current book, System Add Points Panel, made me want to vomit after reading the author's Hall of the Dead. It is really a magical book.

The disadvantage is that it is too boring and easily boring to read.

Sit back and wait for the new book, put your jade buttocks lightly🙂

My favorite is "The Demonic Tide of the Void". Later it was renamed to Great Spirit Tide, changed the vest and reissued it, and finally disappeared