Binary Train of the Dead

It's an excellent book, but the way of describing the character is a bit weak. It looks like a campus Japanese comic, without the rich and colorful feeling of cyberpunk. But overall it's worth a try. There are no special shortcomings in any aspect, and the world view is even pretty good. If you invest, you should be very profitable.

Author, do you still want the book? Don't want me to pick it up and write it myself.

I saw the latest update and would like to share my personal thoughts. First of all, the author has a strong imagination, the structure of the dungeon world is reasonable and interesting, the main world's combat power increases at an unexceptional speed, and the battle scene design is also good. Now that I have said all the good things, I think the reason why the author is in such a bad situation is that he is too greedy. Too greedy in terms of characters: the girlfriend needs to be written, and the father and subordinates should also be written. The readers can remember the characters, but the characters are all average. There are no supporting characters that are outstanding enough to like, and there are no long-term enemy characters, which cannot show the long-term confrontational growth of the protagonist when he encounters his opponents. Too greedy in the plot flow: I have prepared for too long for precipitation and contrast. If the dungeon world is well written, it will account for more of it. The main world is also unnecessarily long. How much popularity is lost by a black earth looking for a bride. There is no need to procrastinate in improving the combat power of the main world. Becoming stronger along the dungeon level, entering the national war, or turning into a divine war are more in line with the current market than describing experiments in the laboratory in each chapter. In general, the author wants to write high-quality articles. So far, the works before Black Soil were excellent science fiction works, but later on, the plot design was too procrastinating. I hope the author can stabilize his mentality, redesign, and come back to win.

Personally speaking, at least so far, the novel is really good. Don't be carried away by the pace and just keep going. It's satisfying. It's fun, there's fighting, and there's a little interaction with the female characters. It's perfect. The fusion of flesh and blood and machinery is the biggest feature of this novel. Once you start the competition, it's all over. Personal food - grass jelly

It feels very good, the plot advances smoothly, and I personally feel that the world view is well shaped. But the writing is a little weak. Personally, I don't think there's any big poisonous point 🤭

Baigui can appear as another vest for the male protagonist, helping him do things that are inconvenient for him to do. Authors can also check out Surge 2, Horizon, and Ghostrunner, which are sci-fi games that may help you write novels.

I feel that there is someone behind the scenes who is behind the appearance of Goldfinger, and they are raising the protagonist as a cup. Otherwise, such a coincidence would not happen. A car carrying dead people will leave things for the living, and this thing also assigns tasks. Goldfinger is a bit like a novel about an alternative god.

I feel like what the author wrote is pretty good, keep up the good work

Pink-haired punk girl Heine Finitz

Social phenomena, social changes, an extremely large and complete social outlook, and a super long-term arrangement. I think this book is not exciting enough, but it is worthy of being praised. I am more optimistic about it.

The heroine felt too much in the later stage. . . .

A monthly ticket form encourages. The creativity is okay, the rhythm is well controlled, the characters of the supporting characters are a bit stereotyped, and the plot conflicts are too linear and routine. The ideas on how to use the technology tree in recent chapters are still okay. Generally speaking, you can still take a look when you are bored. It seems that it is still in the development stage, and the information related to Gold Finger is not clear. It will take a while to see the plot arrangement in the future.

I remember that I had already subscribed, but why did I have to pay again? Qidian, I'm afraid it's going to be over.

The author can write well, come on! ! !

The introduction is very attractive, keep it for now

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Worth watching. Don't let the comment section fool you. The plot in the real world is indeed cliche, but the fighting, machinery, flesh and blood, and carbon change are well written. It has a certain relationship with cyberpunk, but it is only a partial reference. A considerable degree of processing has been carried out. If you write it down daily, it will be perfect. Worth the wait. (There are a lot of old clichés. Small poisonous spots are like sheep dung eggs on rural dirt roads. They are very small, but there are many. I don't know how I came up with this metaphor😅😅😅)

I'm just a stranger, this book is really good, please vote for it.

Just this

One thing to say, it's actually quite well written. At least the power system is different from other novels, and the writing style is okay. I hope I don't overwhelm myself and ruin the power system. This kind of thing at the beginning is normal. Who would remember this after reading dozens of chapters?

A pure passerby, a pure passerby with very pure ingredients, unlike a pure passerby who just posted his author number in a family post (doge dog head) First of all, when Turing first registered his name, he used Gray Fox, which was the big fox he bought before. This represents his beginning and the establishment of his spiritual world. Later, after the protagonist's carbon change, he developed obsessive-compulsive disorder and became a perfectionist. How could he change his original intention before thoroughly studying technology? Since he wants to transform, he should transform it perfectly and transform into the ultimate demon god like Yaqi. The protagonist's own transformation is not very large, or there are not many directly implanted in the body. The big fox raised at home has not been modified at all, which is very similar to the protagonist. So I think that after the exhibition plot near Chapter 300, that is, after the protagonist enters the world of hunting cars for the third time, it is possible to see the deification of this gray fox demon before four nights. Don't spray if you don't like it

The protagonist now has obsessive-compulsive disorder, so... The good news for obsessive-compulsive disorder is here. Friendly reminder: For some reasons, the picture cannot be viewed. Click to open it to see it

The creativity is pretty good and there are no big problems. Just when I was reading, I had no sense of immersion. I always feel that there is a sense of separation between the background and the characters, which is very inconsistent. There is also the possibility that the author has pushed the plot too fast, there are too many coincidences in the development of the story, and the logic of the details cannot withstand scrutiny.

The ideas and power system are great, but some details are not particularly well described, but it can be said that the flaws are not concealed. It is really a rare new book.

The previous Moyu () can be regarded as the early gray fox in my mind ( ˝ᗢ̈˝ )

The idea is really good and creative, no big problems, basically I won't pounce on it, if you like it you will like it very much

The first uncomfortable thing I felt when reading the novel was the name of the protagonist. Turing is a name with special meaning. I used this name as the name of the protagonist. I don't know why the author did this? Just like when you think about medical novels, is it appropriate for you to use the name Zhong Nanshan as the protagonist? Writing novels should not be too controversial. This means giving readers two ways to choose. Even using Zhang San and Li Si is fine. Why use names with special meanings.

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As a protagonist who focuses on mechanical ascension, it is too humane. You, a mecha guy, don't think about upgrading the technology tree. Instead, why do you go to other companies to play with the world in order to check the background of the world...

(Because the front part is so beautiful, I didn't even look through the table of contents) Damn it, if I hadn't looked at the comment section on a whim, I wouldn't have noticed it was a eunuch I've read 500+ chapters, but I was speechless about the protagonist's tentacles having an anti-entropic name but not even nanoscale; The only achievement of air defense is the long world tree ; I really can't stand the cliché of "I'm awesome, my dad is awesome, but I just won't tell my dad, let's develop our own ways and then meet at the top~" "My dad imprisoned my father-in-law and killed him". I really can't stand the cliché of the ancient romance novels. When I came to the comment section, I saw that it was still a eunuch novel My heart was completely broken.