Taming the Whole World

The slap in the face came so quickly.

Warm reminder, this person's book updates are super stable. Also a warm reminder, every chapter of this guy is super short.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I finally understood the structure. The protagonist can travel between the end of the world 100,000 years later and the current world, and then it is estimated to be a plot to reverse the future. Such a basic setting was delayed until more than 20 chapters before it was revealed. Moreover, the first 20 chapters were written in a fog, and the problem was the same as the previous 10,000-year novice protection period. The early stage was too delayed. He deserves to be thrown into the street.

The setting of this book is great, I like it very much. But why is it so bleak? 1. The protagonist takes in his younger brother too casually. All the characters in the early stage are included, which makes it feel like a refreshing novel, but the style of this article is obviously not that. 2 The world view is revealed too quickly. The pace of contact in the early stage is slowed down. Describe more rare objects to use together, conquer rare objects, etc. 3 The protagonist's ability is too casual and a bit invincible. Restrictions need to be tightened, otherwise it will be reckless and boring. The transaction reduces the number of anchor uses and increases the description length of going back to 10,000 years ago. The protagonist should use more brain power and be written as an intelligent protagonist. 4Change the past and influence the present. The effects caused by the protagonist's ability only affect the present and have no depth. For example, the protagonist goes back to the past and changes the train route, causing the train to hit the evil god. This writing feels like a failure. If this is true, then does it mean that the protagonist is invincible in China, and I can change the route and kill anyone in an instant? You can watch the movies in the "Butterfly Effect" series to get some inspiration. Currently the protagonist does not have a strong sense of immersion, and the decisions he makes are not the optimal solution. Take it personally and try to make a choice.

The reading difficulty is revealed. Hey, people who don't know think it's philosophy or classical Chinese.

Brother, don't write things you don't understand, really. Human hibernation does not mean freezing people directly in liquid nitrogen.

I was a bit confused in the early stage, but after about thirty chapters it became exciting. Book lovers, be patient and don't abandon the book so quickly.

The Riddler for twenty chapters is amazing. It's okay to create information fog for the protagonist, but also fog for the readers... Author, do you have trouble with subscriptions? Don't say how good it will be after so many chapters. The first few chapters are too hungry and the writing is mediocre. It's not worth it, sir.

I feel like there are too few people following me. I suggest the author leave a new title for the previous book.

I really like it, the author will update soon 😜