Begging for Mercy

The writing is very good. Take your time and don't rush.

I couldn't stand the plot of saving a child in Chapter 14, and I couldn't bear to treat evil people. As a spiritual practitioner, I was still humble, and the plot had no meaning of reversal. The description was unreasonable, and I felt uncomfortable.

Now I have roughly read the reviews of book friends, and I can have a deep understanding of what everyone means. However, the problem mainly focuses on the scene where Xuanzhou follows the master at the beginning of the film. Some book friends feel aggrieved, but calm down and try not to poison everyone. Xuanzhou is still small, there are many beggars, and there is no big backer. I really don't want to make Xuanzhou look like a tyrant. Everyone in the book is flesh and blood. In the final analysis, Dajiang wants to take book friends to visit this troubled world from the perspective of Xuanzhou. It is not about killing people indiscriminately. Even the King of Hell will not do this, so how can a child be so virtuous and capable? The above is the summary of January. The summary of February will be placed at the beginning of next month. If you have any ideas, you can express them. So thank you for your support and wish all book friends a Happy New Year in advance! (❁´ω`❁)

This book is really good, but it's just a bit cold

The writing is good, but I don't like the author's completely indifferent thinking. He first killed the boy's master, and then threatened to kill the master and apprentice of the protagonist if he couldn't save them. He actually saved people, even Qian Fukang destroyed the barrier to kill them, and even persuaded the female ghost to be kind. I can't bear this poison!

I hope there will be a single female protagonist. It's Ye Ningshuang, the best

Daily guide, worthy of being a daily guide

There are reasons why it is not popular 1. Niche 2. Complex and fragmented 3. No main line 4. Not practicing 5. Ye Ningshuang is disgusting and forced to make up the plot 6. Chaotic and boring

Chapter 125, I can't hold on, it's too poisonous, this heroine's arrangement is too poisonous, let's go

I always feel that the protagonist participates in various events without any skills or trump cards, which is quite poisonous. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I still can't stand it. Also, I can't bear to touch Ye Ningshuang even though I know he is a calamity.

Be curious. I understand that practitioners have moral integrity and scruples, but what gives ordinary people the courage to think that they can harm and humiliate monks? This is the biggest bug in the book so far To put it simply, the tiger should not eat the sheep when it is full, and the sheep are not worthy of provoking the tiger.

This novel is so good, do you all dream of Shundu? How old are you?

I think this book is very good. The only thing that makes me feel pity is the three thousand paper techniques. The first time I saw the yellow paper technique, I was attracted by the mysterious feeling. Unfortunately, I didn't see more wonderful paper techniques after that, and the protagonist didn't practice it much.

Why do you think it's so good? The plot is very confusing. What's the point of hiding a wealthy family's second wife? They can just start walking on land and water. On the contrary, the words of patricide are the most mysterious, and he is so arrogant before inheriting the family property. My mother actually didn't get angry even if she died, and she had no intention of fighting.

I don't understand why it's called a beggar, it feels weird. Especially the title of Lord Beggar is even weirder.

Edit again, it's my judgment. Cutting off the red line has nothing to do with Ye Ningshuang, little junior sister Sai Gao! ! ! ! Edit again: I still like Ye Ningshuang after cutting off the red line. Edit: There is another heroine, and the current one is framed by Yue Lao (reserve my opinion for the time being). It's not that we can't have a heroine. You can at least write it appropriately, and you arrange it for a girl. Your brain is not clear yet. Readers have God's perspective. They know at a glance that this is the heroine, and then the two of them obviously don't like it. You force it, and we also know that they will be together in the future. It's really outrageous that the heroine is so annoying.

It's good to read, but I don't dare to read it because it's too good to read. It's too little, and I'm afraid I won't have anything to read later.

After reading Chapter 105, I couldn't hold on any longer, so I gave up and went to the underworld. I felt inexplicable. Ye Ningshuang was a bit poisonous, so I couldn't stand these two points.

I like your novel better. The best thing is that it is serious and has a sense of the real world. The style of Qidian novels is basically funny. It is okay to read a few without using your brain, but it is boring if they are all like this. However, this type of genre requires very high logic, especially the latest ones. People of Meng Po's level should not do things like this. It's rough. If it's just to ruin the marriage of the pig's feet, there is no need to choose Ye. If you change to a more ordinary woman, there won't be so many obstacles. It will be easier and more natural. There is also the use of medicine to force it. The method is too low-level and obvious, and it is not that no one cares. I hope the author pays more attention to the logic, otherwise the readers will not be pleased with both the good and the bad, and it will be very embarrassing.

By the way, the character of a beggar must still be maintained. Although the protagonist himself has been involved with many people, these all happened objectively and are inevitable. If the character of a beggar cannot be retained in the resolution of the incident, then a major feature of your book will be gone. You cannot make decisions for your employer just because the protagonist has become stronger. Even if the protagonist changes later, because of family ties or love, teacher-student relationships, etc., One has to intervene in cause and effect. With the rule of not intervening in ordinary things, it becomes more obvious that the preciousness and prominence of family affection, love and other emotions need to be expressed. Think about it, from childhood to adulthood, no matter how big or small, you have followed this principle, but for a certain thing, you have to break this principle, this emotional exaggeration, this explosion Fa, how big is it? It's best to have this happen once or twice. Just like a balloon, it will only burst when it accumulates to the maximum. Today you break the principle for your junior brothers and sisters, and tomorrow you will break it again for love. The day after tomorrow, you will no longer feel it because of the teacher-student relationship. It is the same as usual. After you go down the mountain, the principle is gone. Not only is the characteristic of begging for mercy gone, but the emotion you want to exaggerate is not very contagious.

It's a bit of a holy lady, and the writing is okay, but the Qian Mansion in the second picture is really a bit poisonous, and he threatened me if the protagonist didn't torture him to death so that they would know what the difference between immortals and mortals is.

The author's writing has a lot of grammatical problems, the words don't convey the meaning, and the sentences are broken randomly. This makes the reader a little tired.

In fact, the imagination and story structure are good, but the language is too difficult to pronounce. It can be explained clearly in two sentences, but it has to go round and round in a long paragraph. It is too written, and the characters' language is the same and lacks individuality.

The writing is not concise enough. The author should not fall into the pit of excessive wording.

The author writes well and has a certain artistic conception in it. After reading the whole book, I felt a little disappointed... No matter how powerful the power is, how amazing the cultivation is, in the end, it is just a handful of loess. Many things in ancient and modern times are all discussed and laughed

After the rebirth, the quality dropped seriously. It felt like it was written by a different person. There was no plot foreshadowing at all and it was just written by force. The subsequent plot felt completely floating and not grounded. Many details were completely skipped, as if a general plot development was written.

The logic here is so poor. Female ghosts can possess people and kill people. Wouldn't it be better to kill his whole family? Why do you have to fight with the protagonist? If you fight with others, you end up fighting the one who broke up the fight. This weird logic is completely made up to promote the plot.

In any case, since arriving at Medicine Master Valley, this book can be said to have completely collapsed. The protagonist has been completely reduced to a passerby role. When writing a book, I am most afraid of writing a large-scale world-destroying plot. In the early stage, the protagonist looked like a quiet and indifferent cultivator. It's time to delete

I don't know whether it is intentional or unintentional, but it is obvious that the author has lost control of the entire plot. Originally, the plot of Ren Chuanzi could have been written more grandly as the ending of the Dujiang South Bank plot, and then a new map could be opened, so it would be better to take it slow. In the end, this major plot was ended hastily. Not to mention, the name of the protagonist and the character of the protagonist were changed in the middle. Different from the two people who were separated before, Ye Ningshuang also suddenly became a brainless passerby. The entire plot after reincarnation is basically a running account. Is this a plan to finish the book hastily and run away. I think it is better to end the plot directly with the death of the protagonist, so why bother myself and the readers.

Fighting is not the main method, it is just passive defense. You can resist only when you have to... When I write about this topic... There should be quite a lot of people with different facial features.