I Am Generous and Generous in the World of Cultivating Immortals

The plot is broken, the main character is abused, the main character is abused, the logic is irrational, the plot is disgusting, disgusting, and the author does not respect the protagonist. The author should be insulted, insulted and punished. The author should be criticized. ,, The author you wrote very badly, the author you did it very badly. The author, your writing is very, very bad. Author, your plot is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. The author, your writing is too bad. The author you wrote is not good. (This message rebounds all attacks)

If it's boring, just find a girl somewhere else, and the cycle goes on and on. You have to write interesting things. It's fine if you treat the protagonist as a normal person, but if you write it as a genius turned waste, it's really boring. I don't know how many times I've seen this kind of thing, something that doesn't restore the cultivation level, and then other people don't react much after the restoration of the cultivation level.

My evaluation is that this book will not be popular because the writing is too naive and the plot is too blunt.

It's very well written, don't write it next time. You clearly portray the protagonist as being very aloof and insisting on dealing with women every time.

I came in just to see if there were any posts, but there really weren't any.

Delete the comment. It's the fairy version of a domineering president. He delivers things everywhere. Once or twice is okay, but I'm tired of seeing it too many times.

Trust me, don't read this book~ It's so simple

Isn't this just a name change? I can't understand even if I copy it. . . . . .

This book is really miserable. I can't find a few copies of it all over Qidian. It's so funny.

The idea is good, but this little white text is too plain and too blunt. It is recommended that the author improve his writing style before publishing the book.

I'm very curious about the protagonist's killing method. Even if there is a monster spawning machine, I can't do it repeatedly like the protagonist.

The layout is very problematic. Secondly, the plot is blunt, the wording is dramatic, and there is no sense of substitution. The author's writing is too abstract and wordy.

Isn't it really necessary to write so much? 'Ah, isn't it embarrassing?

I really can't stand it anymore. The introduction is a bit attractive, but the main text is like this. I can only say that all my thoughts are spent on thinking of novel settings, and the content is really thought up with my butt.

Awesome, all squirted

This book is really miserable... I have written three hundred chapters eloquently, and there are only a few comments in the comment section, and half of them are full of scoldings. The author is really good at persisting till now.