You Call Him a Demon Giant?

The author must insist on it. There are more than a hundred comments in the comment section of this pineapple bun book, and most of them are scolding, so that he can write it down. We must learn this spirit and never give up 😆

Something is wrong, very wrong. How come this novel has such low popularity? In my opinion, the quality is already on the upper side, and it belongs to the gold-mining level in 💩. Is it because the publicity is not enough? 😥

It's good-looking, but there are too many female protagonists 😚😚😚

Stupid and cool article, I will withdraw it first.

The first few times I changed pills were too blunt, and the people around me didn't have much IQ. Brainless and not fun enough

Basically every chapter has typos and illogical sentences. It seems that the dissuading effect is too strong.

Like the title, she seems to have no brain. When I saw Li Nanxun in the latest chapter and asked her if she wanted to live forever, she directly said, what if I fall in love with someone one day? When I left, I was thinking, "I actually get along with him." Okay, okay, this is the third-level top master who is rare in the entire world, the mysterious witch that even the elders of Chunyang Sect have headaches and fear, and she is also a sweetheart. Are you sure she is not a love brain? This is the only way female characters can be written, right? There are quite a lot of female characters appearing in this book so far, but the others are all about the same, so you can make your own decision. I can't stand it any more, so I'll take my leave.

Jiang Chi: Xiao Deng, don't take that fw pill. After saying that, he was full of momentum, shocking the opponent, and snatched the third-grade white jade pill from the Caimao young man's hand, and threw a splendid box on him. A small crack was exposed in the box, and a strange fragrance floated out. Caimao opened the box and was shocked to find that it was a fourth-grade white jade pill-blood jade pill!

To be honest, this book always makes me feel awkward, that kind of indescribable discomfort hidden in the narration and the inner description of the protagonist, but the main plot line is good. If I just glanced at it, this book would be very good, but I still hope that the author can improve his writing style.

Mainly because I'm most annoyed by this pretentious and bitchy person. Either you are really a demon, but what happens in the end result? The protagonist becomes the light of the righteous path? Give me a plug-in for the Demonic Patriarch? Are you serious? ? If he really walked the devil's path, wouldn't the protagonist be very nice and exciting? You have to be a hypocrite...

The current level is quite high. I guess I can stick with it for at least another 100 chapters, but I don't want to lean that way. It's a rare positive Jianghu novel, and the progress is slightly faster. I feel that if you finish 300 chapters, it will be a top-notch novel. But if you want to slow down the progress, I suggest you write a few chapters. The score may be lowered once you write about chasing relatives, but I still look forward to the highlights. This book actually should have a lot of comments in many places, but no one, come on.

Isn't this almost over? ?

The idea is good, but the plot may need to be sorted out and the writing style improved. It can be two or three daily chapters + one main chapter, so that the number of words will be larger and the combat effectiveness will not be too low.

Okay, okay, I can finish it in one afternoon, it's great!

In Li Xianzi's emotional drama, everything was too sudden! 😰😰

I also read the author's last book, and I feel that both books have a problem, that is, the protagonist's strength is a bit inexplicable, and it is far beyond ordinary people. It's like where the protagonist kills an immortal, and I can't figure out why the protagonist is so strong physically.

It was good before it was put on the shelves, but it fell apart after it was put on the shelves.

...(*￣0￣)ノ[Wait for me…I…I………]

No, bro, your plot is too outrageous. You really just want to write about seeking longevity, right? After ascending, my wife and daughter were dead and missing.