Apostleship Begins with Pirates

As a bookworm for eight years, the book is good, the setting is novel, the content and story are interesting, and the power system is also quite stable. It is invincible but does not collapse. To be precise, it is just right. It's just that the content has become more and more watery recently. Simple little things can fill a whole chapter. For example, before and during the Great Emperor's call, there is a lot of nonsense (note that there is a lot of nonsense). The most uncomfortable thing is that during the fight, a lot of (note that there is a lot of) off-site content (nonsense) has to be inserted. I hope the author will pay attention to this, because usually once this situation starts, it means that the book begins to go downhill. As a reader, I don't want to see this situation, because I like this book very much, so I request the author to write this book seriously.

Can any book friends tell me that the protagonist is a pirate? Or the Navy?

The plot is average, the characters are ordinary, the setting is not strict, the protagonist cuts all the way through, and the cautious killing style of the novel is mindless. It is recommended that you read it without thinking, and don't think about what is unreasonable. It will be fun after watching it for a few seconds. It mainly depends on the author's large amount of content, otherwise it will be boring and boring. Evaluation: tasteless (tasteless to eat, a pity to throw away) Watchable, but not interesting. Generally includes the following tags, Zhutianliu, anime fans, dnf, Douluo, killing system, killing the Lord through time... Etc.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of the third world, straight to Curry, really can't stand it, a female character appears out of nowhere, inexplicably gets better, looking at you like this, will you take her through time together in the future? If you are really lonely on the journey, I suggest you write an elf character. Don't you think it would be inconvenient to have a DNF-like pet with the entire heroine? PS: I really want to start complaining, but years of training have made me hold back.

It feels like the protagonist is a robot at the end, without emotions, and has an attitude towards everything. Regarding the changes to the Naruto world, I just kill them directly and don't give any suggestions. He is as indifferent to other people and things as the Terminator and follows the program without any interaction. He talks to the top management throughout the whole process, shows his strength, kills, talks, and the next one. Reading fatigue

It looks really awkward ever since the girl hope Muxue appeared.

I'll wait for the author to finish writing the next world.

I feel that the setting of Destiny Child denies everything about the protagonist. If you just make a great wish, you can become stronger than the protagonist. If you make a great wish that transcends everything, wouldn't you be invincible?

The new ones are not going to be about the old plot of a hero saving a beauty and then committing himself to it! Even if it's about a female protagonist, the foreshadowing is too stiff! Originally, the protagonist's emotions were suppressed, and the Valkyrie was written to be passive and awesome, but now a heroine who endures pain has failed! It feels so silly! I think it is the first time for an author to write a novel. If the writing is not very good, it is best not to read it twice. Otherwise, you can kill it invincibly like in the pirate world, or you can cooperate with those who want to see the harem! Trying it twice will get you nothing! ! !

I read Chapter 142, and I always feel that humanity is gone, and men's instinct for women is gone. Even if you just play with a few women in the passing world, or write yourself as a bad guy, it is better than having no sense of humanity, and you can't get into it. It doesn't matter whether you do whatever you want or stick to whatever you want, but don't lose your humanity. People are reading your book, not anything else. It feels like you, the author, can hardly understand what you are writing about? ? ?

She is most likely to be the heroine. . But author, you really don't want to change the settings of your fateful person? It's equivalent to the protagonist's efforts in the future. No matter how much resources are used, no matter how big the trick is, the buff of this fateful person will put her on the same level as the protagonist, and she is still a ghost. . Although they are all cheating, it is obvious that the heroine's cheating is better than that of the male protagonist.

How should I put it,,, after reading it, I feel that it is a bit too belittling the fighting power of One Piece,,,, the rest is fine

How should I put it, in my eyes, ever since the protagonist was able to destroy the world of pirates, I feel more and more that the protagonist is no longer a human being, and his indifferent attitude towards everything has completely turned into a robot. But now I see Naruto. I hope that the original world can at least make the protagonist more humane...

Why don't you get the Eye of Darkness to become a man and become immortal and invincible?

The author obviously wants to go to the fantasy fairy tale area for the next book, but with all due respect, the third copy you wrote is far inferior to the first and second copy. To be precise, one copy is worse than the other.

The second dimension is just the second dimension. What kind of fantasy are you doing? If I continue to write, I will delete the book.

To be honest, if there is not a single sign of a demon, is it still a demon? The redhead doesn't have pointy ears either. He's not tall enough to be a demon. Pig head, idiot, none of these.

This is to let the protagonist get killed in the pirate world. In order to improve the strength, there is no bottom line.

Let's finish the third world as soon as possible and see what the fourth one says. Otherwise, consider this as original and write a new book. It feels very strange to suddenly add such a world here.

Are you still writing the third volume? Forget it, I can't hold on anymore, goodbye

It was killing and killing from the beginning to the end, and the protagonist kept saying it indifferently. The whole story was about the system issuing a mission to kill someone, and then the protagonist went to kill someone, from the place of birth to the Shampoo Tunnel, and probably to the new world later. Apart from killing the mission target, there was no other plot.

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 10. Roger's son should die? Sitting together, right? Even if Roger's crimes were heinous and Garp caught him, protecting a baby would count as harboring a crime? The protagonist's thoughts are the same as those of the five old stars, so Robin can't live anymore, so Luffy should be killed as soon as possible. After all, he is the son of the leader of the revolutionary army, and so is Luo. Go kneel down and lick Brother Ming. After all, the Tianlong people are not excessive according to the protagonist's ideas. And if you really want to be evil about Garp, he did not take the initiative to kill Ace in order to bear his own justice. Is it a crime to protect the baby?

A good anime fanfic is written as fantasy, and the span is a bit too big. It feels like the third volume was written by a different person. I started to suspect that the author ran away after finishing the second volume. The plot behind it is so watery that one pound can be filled into thirty pounds.

To be honest, the protagonist is a bit unconscionable for power.

The protagonist feels that he has lost his humanity after going to sea

It's gone, it's gone, it's just selling people like sheep. More than 400 fantasy chapters follow directly from there.

Good guy, more than 500 chapters have been completed. There are more than 400 chapters in the third world. Only the first two worlds are interesting.

The pirate chapter was good, but then it fell apart

I don't comment on the values ​​​​of the original characters. After all, different people have different tastes. But the plot still has to have its ups and downs. You can't say that a cool story is just "I got up, I made it in seconds, what's there to say?" And you still change the map and repeat this routine. . . Kill all the way

This book should be renamed from Pirate Killer to Zhutian Killing Everyone But Commoners