You Can Become Stronger by Hanging up the God of Death

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ But what the hell is there in Chapter 110? The male protagonist had obviously just discovered that the leader of "Qian Zhong" and the people behind them came to Linyang City and said that he would notify the people of "Ye Ge". However, he held back for more than half a month before saying it. Not only did his aunt get caught off guard and put into danger (the male protagonist knew that the other party's actions were probably directed at his aunt and "Ye Ge" behind her), but also caused the other party's actions to affect him. No, author, are you so unscrupulous in order to cause conflict? Can you imagine this kind of groove plot? Another thing is that the author committed a big taboo in this kind of upgrading novel, that is, the male protagonist does not improve his strength for his own reasons, such as getting a better quality of life and seeing higher scenery, etc. I'm not saying there's absolutely no pressure at all, but I'm saying you can't be pushed around by things like the author wrote. For example, in "Water Monkey" next door, although the male protagonist is also facing the threat of Jianghuai Dragon King, it is more because the male protagonist wants to replace and become stronger, and the situation is not urgent. On the other hand, the male protagonist of this book always comes into conflict with other forces for no apparent reason. He has to become stronger just to survive. Moreover, every time he encounters opponents who are just right enough to deal with, he will not be defeated within a few seconds. The sense of immediateness in this novel is too unconcealed 😅...

I have one thing to say, this book is very good so far, especially the element of death, I love it But there is something poisonous about this, it is Ren Yanan's lucky element. When I see it, I feel that I should not get close to her, but the farther away, the better, right? Improving one's luck just makes the people around her unlucky, especially Ren Yanan's identity has caused her to have a lot of troubles. Hasn't the protagonist been cheated once now? This time the protagonist is strong enough and can't be beaten next time? The protagonist will become a scapegoat, right... But if the protagonist's power continues to increase at this speed and can solve the problem, then what's the use of getting close to Ren Yanan...

The writing is generally passable, but I read it from beginning to end and summarized 2 points... The author ignored two important situations The first: the author ignored the protagonist's own abilities. After all, what the system gives is the system's and not the protagonist's own... He has not awakened! Second: The author ignored the true characteristics of the Zanpakuto... Under this prompt, "the sword cuts the body, and the heart cuts the soul"! The most important word among the three words of Zanpakuto is soul... What is soul? Soul! So the Zanpakutō written by you, the author, is only on the surface... After reading the latest chapter, I will basically not read the rest.

Alas~ I've only read Chapter 12. I didn't want to complain at first, but the more I thought about it, the more angry I became, so I still felt relieved by letting it go. I came here from the author's previous book (although it was a limited edition + pirated version), but since I changed my mind and started reading the original version, I immediately added the author's new book, and I have great expectations for this one. Judging from the introduction, this book undoubtedly follows the "Gou Sheng style" and "anti-routine". After all, the word "hang up" can be immediately associated with "conongxin" (generally reckless people are the kind who add a little bit of style and get stronger as they fight). However, starting from the first chapter, this book has a "sense of déjà vu". It feels like you can find similar paragraphs no matter which paragraph you take out and change the name (duplication check rate is 99%🐶). Then there are plot routines. If nothing else, from this chapter, you can see that some book friends directly predicted the next plot, which is not wrong at all. There is also the problem of the author's writing style. I don't know how old the author is when he writes, after all, I just read his last book, but the writing style of this book is undoubtedly not enough in this era of online writing. As far as I'm concerned, there is one place that I really can't stand. Just in the first 12 chapters, a tattooed man said "secretly" on his front foot, but the protagonist "didn't answer" on his back foot... How do you "answer" this person's psychological activity? The last thing I want to complain about is the issue of style, which is the difference between "reckless man" and "gou sage" mentioned above. I believe that one of the steps for most book lovers to find a book is to read the introduction, and then roughly judge the style and plot of the book, and then decide whether to add it to the bookshelf. And this book is a typical introduction that does not match the style of the main text. The introduction is "Gou" and the main text is "Mang", so aren't you deceiving consumers (🐶 It doesn't count because I haven't seen the charging part yet)! That's it. I'm not poisonous enough to vomit. That's it, I'll come back to Shuhuang later to take a look.

My brother can write it, but I still have a few comments or questions, which I would like to mention here. First of all, there is the gang fight scene. There is a little too much nonsense. It is not impossible to say a few words at the beginning, but when you gradually gain the upper hand in the middle of the fight, suddenly stopping to taunt is a bit abrupt and procrastinating. Especially when the opponent is obviously still capable of fighting, it can be called a smart behavior. The ghost path is not described enough and is too powerful. You must know that practicing martial arts can increase the intensity of spiritual power. If the martial arts master is really as strong as you set, then the Dao Binding Block will never be able to be controlled. Bai Lei can't aim so accurately. After all, it's just a finger-thick lightning. Do you expect it to hit the head with one hit? You can write about the protagonist's feelings when Kidou is released for the first time. The spiritual power is mobilized and transformed to form Kidou's spiritual pressure and so on. It not only improves the word count but also looks smooth. Look, you are now in your early 2000s after a chapter, and you don't feel anything at all. You have to turn to the next chapter in less than two minutes. How uncomfortable is it? Finally, I personally recommend giving the Zanpakutō a shallow shot and designing its own abilities. It is rare to meet people who like the Grim Reaper. I wish you good luck.

I came in after reading the introduction. Well, I'm not criticizing the author, I'm just a little disappointed. After all, the author also wants to advance the plot. In the introduction, it is said that you will wait until you are invincible before you become a loser. It is really a waste of time. Before the 10th chapter, you are already doing all kinds of things, and there is a heroine right away. How can you not be a loser? As mentioned in the book review, how come this imitation has become something that must be exchanged? First of all, the problem of the gold finger not being fully opened is very annoying. Before wearing it, it was the GM version, but after wearing it, it became the Goosechang public beta version. It has become a traditional routine. How should I put it? With a strong wave, everyone just looks at it for fun. In the early stage, it was a direct GM version of Goldfinger, a gangster vendetta without any routine. As the number grew up, various plots gradually emerged, which made it more comfortable to watch. Think of this kind of time-traveling with a specific goal (a time-traveling identity that was beaten to death), and after a little bit of strength, he came to save the beauty (still the protagonist's deskmate), things come one after another, and there is a kind of rushing the protagonist to upgrade. After upgrading, the updated version will have a new boss. This is a bit like the routine of "Panlong" N years ago, although this routine is still there. . . . Looking at it makes me anxious, and I want to play through it quickly. Why: Bone King, One Punch, Rimuru, etc. Will be included 🔥, just because there are less routines and it makes me happy to watch. . . .

The main reason is that the time limit and spiritual power limit of the swastika are a bit comfortable, but it would be better if there were no restrictions on the beautiful game.

From the last book to this one, I have always ordered them all, and this B never breaks out. Sometimes I only get one sheet or something happens.

It's okay, it's a good way to kill time

Come on, author, the writing is good. There is no major plot to persuade people to quit.

Good, good, good, good, good.

{"NickName":"Cut Lemon","UserId":328633984} Can you please stop adding a moment? I'm going crazy!

This is good, I recommend it, keep it up

What can I say besides being short and weak and not enough to watch. Alas~

Updates are so slow😱, please give me a boost, the author

What can I say besides being short and weak and not enough to watch. Alas~

Okay, nothing to complain about. When an author writes a novel, he is creating a world on his own. And there are thousands of us readers, so the author can be said to have used the wisdom of one person to please all of us. There are 10,000 Hamlets in 10,000 people. How can everyone be satisfied? If you are not satisfied, there is no need to spray it. After seeing it, it greatly affects the reading experience. Human beings are creatures that are particularly susceptible to interference from external objects. Maybe some people have read it well before, but because of a bad sentence from you or a bad sentence from her, they give up on self-thinking and abandon the book every minute. When I read novels, I really like to read the comments in each chapter, but as soon as I opened it, there were many negative comments. It is not easy for authors to make a living while writing a book. Why do you want to destroy other people's jobs? Life is so stressful. I'm reading a novel, why do you give me a negative experience?

I think it's really good! The protagonist shares his golden finger with everyone, which is worth watching. Unlike some novels, one refuses to tell whether one is alive or dead.

Does the author of Like Gold Not Gold Understand? Zanpakutō is made of souls, and is it restrained by metal powers? Should I restrain you? Also, Zanpakuto's soul attack affects physics, right? You only have physics here? Could the author please put brackets in the second setting? Please explain, otherwise you are really poisonous!

One chapter is more poisonous than the other. It was fine at the beginning. Not to mention forcing the plot to reduce intelligence. Later, in order to show the new ability, the plot of the Zanpakutō being restrained by the metal manipulation ability came out. The most taboo thing for fans or derivatives is to forcibly belittle the ability of the original work for the sake of the plot. What you are doing is like some system novels where the body cannot be elementalized after eating the natural fruit, which leads to a large number of fans abandoning the book.

Overall, it's pretty good, but the author also made a mistake by giving abilities to others. Of course, this is just my personal feeling.

I thought it would be a good read, but it turned out not so good. And it is logical to say that it is easy to hang up the opportunity, but it turns out that the protagonist is not easy.

Another short chapter with 2 chapters, 9 recommendations every day, fixed subscription! Can the author give me some Lido?

The good Shinigami power was never enough to hit these shabby spiritual pressures. I was really vomiting and couldn't feel happy at all. The blunt way of slapping them in the face was even more cruel in the new chapter! 🙂🙂🙂🙂

After writing my complaints for a long time, I found that they are all redundant. Just one sentence: the plot routine is too old, and the pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine is embarrassing (you have absorbed the dregs of previous Internet articles)

Upgrade, save the heroine, upgrade, save the heroine, repeat the plot. There is no main plot, and the world view is vague. Dozens of chapters have passed and the Zanpakutō hasn't come out yet. It finally came out, but I could only use it twice due to kidney deficiency.

It's a good book. The protagonist selflessly shares his golden fingers with others for use. It's not like the protagonists of many books hiding it.

This book is very friendly to "Death" fans. The protagonist draws on the power system of "Death" and adds fantasy elements. Even those who have not read "Death" will not be affected by reading. Adding points and lottery draws make it more interesting. When the protagonist wears the "Xu Bai" vest, he feels like he can just pretend and run away, and you don't know who I am. Overall, it has no obvious flaws and is worth reading. Do you have sperm 😃

I read the book ten minutes ago, I was poisoned three minutes ago, and I left now. Promise me, this old bookworm, not to read Chapter 4.

The upgrade of pig's feet is inherently slow. You have to give your power to others and plan to cultivate a batch of them. It's poisonous, right? 😅 Upgrade yourself quickly, draw more knives, and get more God-turning bodies. The God-turning body does not consume pig's feet, and will continue to improve with the pig's feet, and will never betray you.