I Will Sweep Across This World

Please note that the content of this book is seriously inconsistent with the title. The author crazily suppresses the protagonist and makes various poisonous points.

Seeing that the protagonist's character and outlook on the character have been distorted, it is almost like a ghost or a cult. The pursuit was in vain. Breaking one's word and using people as sacrifices. Almost like a foreigner. Kill all the powerful people, ghosts and strangers. I feel like a person who is about to go crazy. It's just another deceptive path, and I feel like I have gradually lost my humanity.

After seeing 36 photos, I can't stand it anymore. How can I put it this way? The protagonist is a genre that I quite like, and the plot is also okay. But the overall situation is too unbalanced, which seriously affects the sense of reading. There are still many loopholes 1. As mentioned in the first chapter, "modification" cannot be done overnight, and it cannot directly transform the whole body. But whenever the plot was "slow" later, it was all directly transformed. In the second chapter, I wrote dot + dot, which is to restore the body's energy and blood. After clicking, click on the modified martial arts. There are two steps. But later, it is done in one step, and the + point directly replaces "modify". What are you doing? Then why do you still set + this setting? The previous settings were completely abandoned, and one of the remaining "modify or +" settings is even more redundant and useless. In the first few chapters, martial arts are "modified" by relying on Qi and blood. You can take tonic medicine to restore Qi and blood. If there is a Yin source in the future, why not rely on taking tonic drugs instead of "restoring Qi and blood"? It's understandable that I don't have money, but it seems that the money will come quickly later. Why use Yin source when things can be solved with money? Don't use the money that comes from convenience and safety, but use Yin source in exchange for danger? By the way, the two settings of the black powder and collection after the death of the "monster" in Chapter 2 have also disappeared later. The author of the first two chapters is not the same person as the one who follows? 2. The city is cleaned every day, and there are so many monsters and monsters? I just want to ask if there are any living people outside the city? Can villages and the like still exist? So many people die every night, how can we give birth to and raise children in time? According to the death rate in the plot, the entire city should have perished long ago. There is no danger at all during the day, but people go crazy and die at night. Why do you dare to sleep at night? In other words, I would rather sleep during the day than not sleep at night. I just can't figure out why they can sleep so naturally and are not afraid of death? To put it simply, the entire world view is "extremely unbalanced". I can see that the author obviously wants to use this broad-based approach to describe the danger of the entire world. But the way I wrote it was counterproductive. Instead, I felt like "painting a tiger will not turn out to be a dog". 3. Exaggerate the power of "foreigners" too much, or let them enter the game "too early". It is obvious that they do not meet the standards of this novice village at all Their premature entry has actually lowered the protagonist's sense of existence as a martial arts force Obviously, the "martial arts master" should be the top force in the novice village, but because of the premature appearance of the "extraordinary person". Became too marginalized and dispensable. For example, in Chapter 35, the low-ranking and weird person in the inn is cannon fodder that can be killed by third-rate warriors. Even those who have suddenly become powerful martial artists dare not fight against them (don't forget that in the second chapter, the protagonist killed one when he was just third-rate) To put it simply, it is to set off the wild monsters in the high-level area, so it can only forcibly limit the strength of the NPCs in the novice village. 4. I see that the author has been emphasizing "speeding up the plot" in the comment area. Does the author think that "the plot is too slow to watch?" I want to say "this is obviously not a problem that the plot should be sped up, but should be slowed down." 1. For example, the force of "Alien" should not enter the market early. 2. Because "strangers" cannot enter the field early, the strength and number of "monsters" should be reduced. 3. There should be fewer "monsters" in the city, because they are weak and can only appear at night. 4. The entire plot of Novice Village should be written around the martial artist, and the strength of the martial artist must be written. 5. Slow down the pace and don't write world plots that exceed your capabilities at the time.

It was also said at the beginning that martial arts is not popular, and the world is dominated by foreigners. There is a specific realm of cultivation. The skills at each stage have not been lost. There are masters of martial arts at every stage. Why do foreigners look down on martial artists? Why do they look so superior? At the beginning, I was introduced to a kind of decline of martial arts. The protagonist relies on plug-ins to become a unique school. He uses force to survive and crush everything. In the end, he is invincible. What is the result? What is the difference between this and ordinary fantasy?

This is the first time I heard that the root bones and the constitution are calculated separately. Isn't it true that the better the root bones, the better the body's physique? The better the physique, the better the root bones.

After reading Chapter 200, I didn't see where the horizontal push was. . . Moreover, the protagonist cheats so hard, and is at the limit of internal strength, horizontal training, and physical skills, but the result is nothing.

The first book is very well written like this. The character creation (Yakuza style) and data in the early stage are slightly lacking, but I am willing to listen to the readers' reasonable opinions and make revisions, which makes the writing better and better. 👍👍👍

The second time I read this book, I still couldn't make it past chapter 10. The pig horns are really brainless. After using the panel, I will be depleted of energy and blood. I used the pig horns twice in a row without any preparation and almost died. If this pig horns were not the protagonist, he would not survive more than 5 chapters (he would have died in the original chapter 5). The pig horns were persuaded to quit at the beginning. Moreover, I either feel warm towards Master Qi, or my kindness will always be remembered in my heart. It has appeared several times in less than 10 chapters. Can this be considered a dark wind?

I have read quite a few novels of this type, and the main characters are almost always doormats. You, a cheater, are still a doormat. Why do you want your cheaters? ? ?

Well written, please keep updating!