The Dark Conspiracy at Hogwarts

The character of the protagonist is in conflict. On the one hand, he is afraid of trouble, and then he is curious. Finally, I can't figure out why he keeps a legendary item from an unknown organization in his hand.

Don't be a Veela as the heroine, she is a born bad woman with no morals and no moral values. The male protagonist is kidnapped from the beginning, used for human experiments, and fed with the blood of a cursed unicorn. Just like that, the male protagonist just slaps his ass and sues his parents, and then the whole thing is done. This is considered attempted murder, right? You can be sentenced. It would be really disgusting if they teamed up with CP later.

I sincerely hope the heroine is Luna

Is the author an old author? I feel that the writing is very good, not bragging or slanderous, and looks comfortable

Unicorn blood! That kind of thing that makes life worse than death after drinking it, it was almost force-fed! From what I've seen so far, this person poses a greater threat to the protagonist than Voldemort, right? I think normal people would think about how to kill her all day long, otherwise they would really have trouble sleeping and eating...

I can't stand it when I see the Sorting Hat's Legilimency here. The protagonist has always had excessive self-awareness. The author also described it as talking to himself, who cares about you? What's more, Dumbledore arranged that the Sorting Hat must go to Gryffindor and then the protagonist has to fight against its Legilimency? ? ? Do you want to blackmail all the characters? OOC is too serious.

This comment section... Is it really written so well that it can be considered a eunuch? ?

The character of Gwendelin is becoming more and more annoying. It's okay to say that he abused his talent to obtain potions at first, but the key point is that the person who was tricked was not a good person. Later, he was completely willful. When he was ordered to do things, he didn't explain what he was supposed to do. Instead, he attacked his own people. He asked the male protagonist to help him. If he felt unhappy, he would use charm. Instead of doing business, she only wants to harm others. Even though so many people are looking after her, her moral bottom line has not been raised even a little bit. She is simply a born bad person.

From 6 o'clock last night to 6 o'clock this morning, I read all the updates in one go, and posted a post to brag about it. The author is awesome, the power, and the plot concept are not written by a newbie at all. This is one of the most exciting HP fanfics I have ever seen. (In addition, I found, Maybe it's because the audience for HP fanfics is so small. Most wonderful fanfics can't escape the two vicious traps of being slow to update and easy to get into trouble. I hope this one can survive). I think there are basically no logical breakdowns in the book (if I'm not critical). The logic is rigorous and well-founded. The first volume (although it is basically (Only the first volume)), I personally feel that the various clues and details are in place, and the layers of foreshadowing are in place (but it feels a little less flavorful at the end, and it would definitely be better if the author could add more details mentioned later). In addition, as a reader who has already fallen into the trap, I would like to give some advice to readers who have not yet fallen into the trap. My suggestion is to keep it first, otherwise you will feel uncomfortable if the update is stuck like this. However, from the perspective of "hoping for more readers to give the author motivation to update", I think it would be better for this book to be read by more people, so I hope new readers will read these words of mine and then make your choice.

I finished the first volume in one go, and I can tell that I was writing it carefully. Both the layout and the foreshadowing give me the feeling of a wonderful revelation. There are only two things that are more surprising. First, in 1927, Nicolas Flamel was able to conduct multi-person video calls. I don't know why the Priory is so proud of that little invention The other is that Guruni only needs to pronounce a word (such as "wind", "water") to cast a spell. It feels like a joke. Ordinary casting requires a long incantation and correct wand gestures. If this Guruni spellcasting is so fast, there is no reason for it to be eliminated.