The Dark Conspiracy at Hogwarts

The protagonist's character is conflicted; on one hand, he's afraid of trouble and cowardly, and on the other hand, he's full of curiosity. In the end, I don't understand why he keeps the legendary item from the mysterious organization.

Please, please, don't let Veela be the female lead. She's a born villain, utterly immoral and devoid of values. She seduces the male lead from the very beginning, intending to use him for human experiments and feeding him cursed unicorn blood. And all he gets is a slap on the butt and a complaint to his parents, and that's it. But there's still a lot of back and forth afterwards.

I sincerely hope the female lead is Luna.

Is the author an experienced writer? I feel the writing style is very good; honestly, it's a comfortable read.

Unicorn blood! That stuff that makes you wish you were dead after drinking it—I was almost forced to drink it! From what we've seen so far, this person poses a much greater threat to the protagonist than Voldemort, right? I think any normal person would be thinking about how to kill her all the time, otherwise they'd be constantly worried…

I couldn't stand the part about the Sorting Hat and Legilimency. The protagonist is always overly self-aware, and the author writes him as if he's talking to himself. Who cares about him? And what's with the Sorting Hat being arranged by Dumbledore to go to Gryffindor and the protagonist having to fight against it and Legilimency? Are you trying to blacken all the characters? It's way too out of character.

This comment section... If it's really this well-written, why would it be abandoned?

Gwyndolin is becoming increasingly unlikeable. At first, it was one thing to abuse her talent to obtain potions, but the person she was tricked wasn't a good person either. Later, she became completely willful, doing tasks without giving proper instructions, even harming her own people, seeking the protagonist's help, and using charm at the slightest provocation.

I read all the updates in one go, from 6 PM last night to 6 AM this morning. I'm making this post to rave about it. The author is amazing! The writing skills and plot are incredible; it doesn't seem like something a novice would write. This is one of the most brilliant HP fanfictions I've ever read.

I read the first volume in one go. It's clear that the author took it seriously. The plot and foreshadowing are both very engaging and give you a sense of excitement as you uncover the mystery. There are only two things that are really jarring.