One Piece, the King of Style

I hope the author's golden fingers will not be too messy. The ability to write too much will look very messy.

After reading Chapter 35, I always felt that the pace of the plot was too slow and refreshing, or there were too few highlights, which made me very boring.

One Piece Chronicle

The protagonist can make Shanks feel the pressure at first, which means that he is also close to hundreds of millions in strength. There is a difference in strength, but it is not a huge difference. Later, after eating the devil fruit, his strength has made a qualitative leap through continuous training and development, not to mention that he is stronger than Shanks at the beginning. , Is not weaker than him. If you fight a 60 million pirate, you will be seriously injured and exhausted. If it is explained that the strength is not only 60 million, but also has a strength of hundreds of millions, the strength far exceeds the bounty, I can still understand it, but it is not explained. It means that there is no such strength. The author's definition of the protagonist's strength is vague at the beginning. I hope it will be clearer in the future. The author will continue to work hard and write hard.

Introduction to Yan Peacock

The author's writing is quite good, but I stopped reading when I saw the formation of an organization similar to the revolutionary army. If the protagonist wants to be a hero, in fact, such a chaotic world is more in line with the interests of the top people. If you want to be a top person and at the same time want to enlighten your mind, isn't this going against yourself?

What the hell is written in the previous chapters, especially the chapters after Roger's execution? A businessman is still afraid of being caught by the navy? Still need a breakout? Are you confused when writing 😅

The fruit is very fancy and has too many abilities, including swords, guns, shields, and hammers. It's better to just go into the peacock state. Moreover, it also strengthens physical skills, is strong, handsome, and refined. It has a bright spot in everything. Can't it be specialized in one? It's not like a strong physical artist, not like a swordsman, but also seems to be omnipotent. It can do a little bit of everything. It's like a hodgepodge.

According to this rhythm, let's get a nuclear warhead, or Transformers.

I haven't watched much yet. The protagonist should have a domineering look. Information about Emperor Kasihai should be there if he is an emperor! 😅😅

Since it is a modeling fruit, why don't you follow the legion style and have missile warships flying all over the sky? Sword, Shield, Hammer, Peacock. When I watched it, I really doubted whether the protagonist was a modern person. It was simply embarrassing for a time traveler. Some people say that the protagonist is not strong enough in the early stage, but the setting is completely dependent on the author, so it is not a problem to be happy at all. It's obviously a fic, but it looks very boring. The writing is obviously pretty good among Pirates, but in the end, you either rely on swords or shields to fight, and it looks really boring.

Written as if the Navy were idiots. You've already started killing the Vice Admiral. Aren't you going to get a reward? They will definitely send an army to kill him!

It's outrageous. The writing is so white. The author is very familiar with it, but it's not that white.

I just read the third chapter, and then I saw the two time-travelers in the latest chapter. How can I put it, this thing is a bonus for being well written, but if it is just a little bit worse, it is extremely poisonous, and it is still the male protagonist of the previous work. Is the author really sure? For example, Tang San appears in In Douluo II, the character suddenly became an ex. It felt like the double-traveling was either written with the protagonist, the two of them were written together, or they didn't appear very much. Occasionally, there were some clues left in the plot. If it was the kind that was against the protagonist, it couldn't be solved at all. . .

Garp has a chicken-feather overlord color, and only the Warring States Period has it in the navy.

After reading the first twenty chapters, the protagonist wants to be a businessman first, right? Being a businessman doesn't mean that you must have a good relationship with the navy, but you can't openly argue with them, right? It's understandable that you resist when you are caught stealing tribute. Use your abilities immediately and you won't be afraid of being recorded by the Navy and putting a bounty on you? It is a serious crime to steal the belongings of the Tianlong people, but also to fight against the navy. The same goes for the following. You, a businessman, follow the pirates to fight against the navy... Are you a slave to the navy? And the navy camp is a bit weak, after all, it was Roger who was executed

No wonder it's so boring, the protagonist's character is not likeable and the plot is boring

The latest chapter has the flavor of the Pirate Code. The protagonist eats the fruit at the beginning and has the strength of a lieutenant general. This is more exciting in the early stage, but it is difficult to write in a long way. I think if the author has not read the Pirate Code, he can refer to the part about developing the country and develop in the direction of half farming and military writing.

I just read a few chapters. The author's heresy is weird and the details are not in place. The first chapter attacked a ship of people and wiped them all out. The second chapter was about killing people for the first time. Then they said they didn't have enough physical strength and assassinated them one by one. Then they fought against Shanks and fought pirates. The pirate ship also turned into a merchant ship 😅😅

I have already written two books, still Qingshui. It can be said that my talent is really not that good.

Your last book was completed with more than 2 million words, and this book, do you know why your book is so less popular? First of all, your book title has failed.

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I just don't understand. Isn't the protagonist a taijutsu practitioner? What's the point of using the fruit to create a shape? It feels like it's useless. Someone who understands can explain it.