The Black Duke of Pirates

Sky Island also has a lot of potential seeds. For example, Zhan Gui feels that the potential is good and the willpower is very strong, but it has not been fully developed and grown.

The battle scenes in this book are very awkward, and they feel a little bit off. I may not have understood the first few pictures.

If a Pirates fan doesn't write a passionate plot, it's still boring.

The writing is okay and relatively refined, but unfortunately there are few interesting points. Of course, you can also call it a slow-burning article. But the key is to wait slowly until everyone disperses. Unless you, books can mesmerize others at a glance. But as far as the early stage is concerned, it is obvious that there is nothing exciting and nothing attractive. Although it's better in the later stage, you can't attract people in the front, and it's useless no matter how good you are in the later stage. It is impossible for others to read hundreds of thousands of words just for the pleasure of tens of thousands of words in your later period. So, this is the reason why it is not popular. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt a bit boring and didn't want to read the paid chapters. Some comments for the author! I hope the author can learn some experience from the next book. Take advantage of it. It's fun to read a book. Don't put it off vaguely, as it will be useless and won't attract people later. You have to know that you write books firstly for your hobbies and secondly to make money.

I gave up after reading the free chapter. Although there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people, they are so wise! He went to negotiate with Brother Ming with such low strength and looked down on him. He was really drunk. As far as the anime itself is concerned, Brother Ming is the most intelligent and second most powerful person in the original Shichibukai. How can a wine recipe threaten someone of this level to negotiate with you? ! ! ! Wake up!

I've always felt that it was ridiculous to promote revolution in a world with extraordinary powers. Because having strength means having foundation, which will breed ambition. The weak is eaten by the strong, which is the truth. Even if you are lucky enough to succeed, you will never be able to sustain it for long. Human hearts are complex. When people are weak, they long for the existence of peace, but when they are strong, they hope to break the balance of peace. No one likes and is willing to accommodate people who are weaker than themselves. Because it is unfair to the strong.

Is it possible to write characters like the Joker and the Laughing Bat from Watchmen and Batman? There is also "Vendetta". The strength of the protagonist does not need to be exaggerated. The major events can also be based on modern or ancient events in various countries (including the Soviet Union). The same goes for the characters. The description of the battle scenes must be very realistic.

There are not so many overlords, many novels exaggerate

"One Piece: Opening the Black Duke at 55", apart from full blood recovery, I don't know what the main character's fruit is for. A swordsman learns the Dragon Claw, and at first he said it has something to do with holding a sword... Damn it, he always fights with the Dragon Claw in his left hand and the sword in his right hand. What are you doing with these two swords? Are they used for cutting tsunamis? The key is to either open 55 to the opponent or be maimed so that the opponent can recognize you and then talk about business...

Chapters 74 and 75, why didn't Brother Dover Minglang kill the protagonist? In this way, we can get all the benefits, instead of being an agent of the new world. We are not being strict here. Dover Minglang's character will not cooperate with the weak. And there is still a chance to get all the benefits.

After reading too many One Piece fanfics, what I dislike the most is meeting key characters at the beginning, such as Robin, Nami, and Garp. More than 90% of the time, Robin and Nami are adopted at the beginning, either adopted by Garp, or the Luffy brothers. Everyone knows that King Luffy in One Piece has the strongest relationship. If you travel to the past, the protagonist will definitely become the strongest, but is he related to Luffy at the beginning? ? Do you think Luffy didn't do enough tricks? Are you going to give Luffy another role as a babysitter for someone called the protagonist?

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I recently fell in love with Doflamingo, so I imitated his steps, made Kizaru's expressions, smoked like Smoker, and said to everyone: Give me face and be my son. So I have the left hand of red hair, the calf of Aokiji, the front teeth of Blackbeard, and the eyes of Fujitora.

The traitor will be poisoned if he doesn't die. Don't let him be saved by Kizaru.

You are strong enough to fight Im in King form, why are you still afraid of dragons and Garp? Even if you chop off one of Luffy's hands, Long will still fall out with you. After I said that in your book, the protagonist you wrote is the father, okay, why do you have to lean on Luffy? I don't understand.

No one is innocent after going out to sea

I haven't read much, but I feel like this is a Machiavellian pirate fanfic. But the embarrassing thing is that the plot's plot is very... Weak. What's even more embarrassing is bragging crazily about how smart and powerful this is.

The traitor must die. I spent so much time training you, not to ask you to talk about some ideals for me.

If you want to ask who is the strongest in the East China Sea, it must be me, the King of the East China Sea. I bit off an arm of the Four Emperors and scared the future Pirate King to tears. I killed the Mountain Pirate King of the East China Sea. If it weren't for the domineering red hair, I would have finished playing One Piece in four episodes.

It's actually pretty good, but it's a pity that I really can't remember the names of so many Westerners, which makes me faint.

Yeah, Reinhardt (convinced)

To be honest, the writing is very average. The useless parts are described in large lengths, and the useful ones are mentioned in one stroke. I don't have any brains at all. If you don't believe me, just watch the early stage for yourself and you will be poisoned.

The One Piece novel is forcedly written as an ancient Chinese time travel novel. Except for the content, it is from One Piece, and it doesn't read like it at all.

In the first three chapters, you show your mother's heart and pretend to let the enemy go. It's disgusting.

After taking real poison and starting to dance without any strength, I am really not afraid of death. I don't know how to accumulate food and build walls to slowly become the king?

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I feel stupid when I see the construction of the sea train. In the face of absolute interests, if you build it, it is mine. The world news must be controlled by the world government. When you built it, they killed you and said that you built it yourself. Brother Ming would have been killed long ago if he had not mastered the secret of the Tianlong people. Also, it is obvious that the weapons of the revolutionary army were made by the protagonist's family, and they were given to the sand crocodiles and sold in the North Sea. Just by selling them in large quantities to the revolutionary army, it was enough reason to take action against you. There is also the use of the base camp in the West Sea. No matter how many clocks are used, the three generals guarding the ship will bombard the ship without interruption. How much time can you keep?

Pirates are not pirates, merchants are not merchants, nobles are not nobles, and the whole story is wrong. You either seek a country as a noble, get the throne, and develop your strength, or you directly become a pirate. In the end, you become an unworthy duke, and there is no enthusiasm at all in the early writing. You just sell wine to pay it back, and you use wine to make gold in the sky. 🤔 When can wine be used as hard currency? What the protagonist makes is just luxury goods at most, with no value at all. The Celestial Dragons are fools, but the World Government will not be fooled by you. Just a few bottles of wine can be worth 5 billion Baileys. It is really poisonous.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 10 chapters.