Supernatural Machine City

When I first started reading it, until I saw the wilderness and met the princess, I thought I had finally found a book of fairy herbs. I thought it would be rated 90 or above out of 100. Unexpectedly, after meeting the princess and the vice-president of the chamber of commerce, it became very uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist seemed to be a fool who became mentally ill when he saw a woman. What a pity.

I feel that the author is not suitable for writing about power. Politics is a bit dull and childish. I have laid the groundwork for six to seven hundred thousand words and started writing about building a city, but it is boring. The same is true for the last book. Isn't it good to just write an adventure story honestly? Farming has been laid out for too long, but it's still a perfect start. Without the fun of farming from scratch, from small to big, it seems nondescript. It's not as good as the traditional cool writing routine, at least it's straightforward.

From the beginning, I felt that the subject matter was good, and there were points that attracted me, such as machinery, thread capabilities, doctors, etc. Later, the points that I liked did not develop in the direction I expected. Later, I read this book just out of habit, and then I stopped reading for a while to look for other books, and finally came back to read some. The subsequent plot🍌 was boring before, but your peers are really terrible. Another point is that the relationship between men and women you wrote is too explicit, nakedly sexual, without delicate emotions. The three female supporting characters who appear have ambiguous relationships with the protagonist, and even sexual commitments. It would be inappropriate to blame this on the world's gender concepts. The depiction of the villains in the work is not outstanding. There is a lack of charming villains and more of a bunch of idiots, making the protagonist feel like he has everything in the palm of his hand. For example, the genius fighter could have been written more brilliantly, instead of simply dying. 🐶The following is a nitpick: the protagonist always descends to earth to save people when characters and teams such as 👸, 🐺, 👧, 👴, 💁 are in dire straits. He is worthy of being the protagonist. . . I wish the author will write better and better. 🌹

The character is a little out of touch. He had obviously been training as a killer for a year. Whether it's character dialogue or behavior. I feel like a child

In fact, the protagonist's brain is the biggest bug. To learn mechanical knowledge, you first create a robot, or a mechanical arm, and then let it replicate itself. Then the machine provides you with resources for you to practice, experiment, build cities, etc. With a golden finger that is most suitable for developing science, you go the extraordinary route. It is completely the other way around. In the early stage, you can develop machinery or Biology, isn't it good to make cannon fodder tools to support yourself? Also, since the intelligent brain can quickly record, all knowledge can be stored first, and it is not said whether to learn or not. Once copied, it will be yours, and then create some infrastructure, and everything will be up. By then, whether you dominate the world or achieve extraordinary things, it will not be so difficult.

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Let me talk about my personal views on this novel. I think this book has great potential, but the title of the book will actually dissuade some people. I personally came in after seeing the setting points of "doctor" + "can fight and fight". At first, I felt that the book was lacking, and I didn't even read the title of the book carefully. After reading the chapters before it was put on the shelf, I carefully read the title of the book - "Super Mechanical City". The first is that the previous chapters did not allow me to connect the title of the book with the article. Naturally, the protagonist later joined others to build a mechanical city. But just when I wanted to fully comply with the theme, the protagonist became a hands-off shopkeeper again and ran out to practice and seek breakthroughs. The style changed again and became a novel of adventure + monster fighting + adventure + training. Emmm, now I feel that the plot is a little confusing. Then, I think the author's framework setting is still a little rough. For example, the setting of sequence levels is not rigorous and perfect enough. In terms of promotion, I thought it mainly relied on magic potions at first, but then I found that it started to change a little bit to fantasy routines, meridians and body refining methods. , And invincible at the same level. Of course, these things can be included, but the author may be deeply influenced by fantasy and immortals. When I wrote it, I felt that it was not very well contained in this novel, so it seems to have a strong sense of fantasy and immortality. , In the context of steampunk + the maturity of the scientific system and the promotion sequence of potions, this does not have a sense of substitution, and in a book full of Western names, the name of a skill such as "The Void Poisonous Hand" makes people feel like they are in a drama. I personally think that this kind of name can It's up to the protagonist, that is, Ren to get it, but it's best not to give it out directly. It can be said that he got an unknown secret book or skill. The protagonist made a big hit and named him "So-and-so Boxing Technique". I personally think that the sense of abruptness will be reduced, above.

In order to highlight the character traits of the supporting characters, the author has written out the characteristics of the protagonist. This author likes to slow down the breakthrough of the protagonist's realm in the early stage. He uses a lot of space to write about the supporting characters. After looking at the table of contents, when the supporting characters are finished writing, the protagonist suddenly becomes invincible. In the early stage, it is still steam. It has a bit of punk flavor, but in the middle and later stages it becomes fantasy like gods and goblins. It can be said that the protagonist does not have a big sense of existence in this world. It is all a struggle between the villain and the supporting characters. After watching it, I was moved and amazed by the supporting characters, but in the end I forgot about the protagonist!

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I don't understand why I keep writing about the upper level details, they have nothing to do with the protagonist? Anyway, the protagonist can't do much. Now that Mei's staff is annoying when he comes out. Is he the protagonist? He pretended to do everything, even slept with the queen, and was a winner in life compared to the protagonist.