Star-Sweeping Expedition

The subject matter of this book is still very good, but there are very big problems in the character relationships and plot handling. 1. A couple in name only after getting married less than half a year ago. Logically speaking, I haven't had much contact with her, and I don't have much affection. I mentioned in the previous article that I was "even a little afraid of her", but then I looked like I cared about her and directly called her my wife? Just kiss someone's sister directly? Including later saying that my sister's talent is not good, and a few chapters later saying that she was given potions, and it is not difficult to break through with her talent (it was mentioned before that talent has little effect on breaking through the first level), it is inconsistent again. I don't know what the meaning of the character sister is. 2. My wife's father said, "My daughter is so talented that she can't get married and let her get married!", And reluctantly explained the reason why the protagonist got married (in fact, the daughter with high talent will not be in a hurry to get married, and he also said that women will get married before breaking through the first level) It will have an impact. To say the least, even if you want to find someone to marry, with Luo's talent and the background of the Luo family, it won't be difficult to find someone with better talent? Do you have to find someone with no status in the family and low talent like the protagonist? ), I saw that Sanyang Body directly agreed to the marriage. 3. It is said that the uncle's family is very good to the protagonist, but the uncle's family are not mentioned many times in the whole text. He treats his wife's sister and her friends, whom he has known for less than half a year, better than his uncle. In fact, it doesn't matter if you don't write about the uncle's family. Then please don't give your sister so much plot. Later, in the coastal city plot, he just made a phone call to inform his uncle, and rushed to protect his sister in person. In the protagonist's heart, his uncle's family is not as good to him as a person he has known for about three and a half years? 4. It is said that the protagonist's brother's family has great power, but the brother is not taken seriously. Why and how can he join the mysterious organization where he found it? 5. Why is Su so nice to the protagonist? The protagonist is just an apprentice. Even if the protagonist is asked to help her fight for resources, it can be regarded as a transaction. There is no need to be so nice to him. Not to mention that the protagonist has an affinity with the thunder attribute. She can ask Master Stargrabber to rescue the protagonist. How difficult is it to find someone with the thunder attribute? Since the protagonist has borrowed the high-grade star stones to buy things to improve his strength, why not go directly to Su's small vault to get those good thunder-attribute items. They will pay them back later anyway, and this period of improving his strength is particularly good. 6. The plots of the female characters are all weird. Why do they have to block attacks for the Holy Maiden of the Phoenix? Why did you save her before? Emotional scenes are written in a mess. If you don't have the ability to write a harem, don't write one. Write one first. This book can be read by skipping the emotional description. The author should write less about women in subsequent chapters and focus more on improving the protagonist's strength.

After seeing 50, if I accept this kind of husband and wife relationship, it is simply very toxic. I am most afraid of the kind of relationship that usually means no contact, and will try my best to save someone if something happens, and then they will look at each other. It is super disgusting and outrageous. This book looks very good, a bit depressing, but it shows the helplessness of little people. Reading different books at different times will have different feelings. If it was before, I would feel aggrieved, but now I can only say that it is okay and acceptable.

This book is a bit like mortals. Mortals are mediocre in the early stage, but start to exert their strength and become gods in the middle stage. The difference is that the early stage of this book is very encouraging, and the subject matter is easy to retain. From the middle stage, it is extremely exciting, and it is obvious that the author's strength is getting better and better.

One person wrote a letter in blood requesting to suppress his ex-wife's family. This cuckold can't stand it.

The out-of-circle index is so low, highly recommended

The front is not very good, but the back looks pretty good after not licking the dog.

Can anyone tell me, after reading a few chapters, it was said that Level 2 can make you invincible in coastal cities, but within a few chapters Level 2 can only be used as an escort on the train? There are still 3 copper coins for a day's living expenses for a family, and a mobile phone of 299 copper coins... Is this already broken...

There are many ways to eliminate the woman named Luo. Why do you use this method? This will really disgust the readers 😥

The subject matter is good, the first part is pretty good, but the second part is not so good. I join forces in a daze without knowing anything. At least you need to know what price you have to pay and what you can get. There is also a protagonist who really can't make friends like this. He doesn't even ask the protagonist about his wishes. He just introduces the situation and directly makes the decision for the protagonist to join the force. Even if he is a good friend, he has made decisions for his friends without authorization many times. Those who disrespect their friends like this will sooner or later turn against each other and become enemies. Withdraw first!

The front part doesn't look good, but the back part is very good. I will keep following it. The author just needs to maintain his level and update more.