Harry Potter's Source of Magic

Everything was fine, except that the grass in the two trips was too poisonous, and it felt like I was force-feeding💩. Once the fish was swallowed, once stepped on, and still drank the elixir, the author looked at the original work to see if it was good. After Harry drank it, he was high-spirited and all his wishes came true. On the way to find it, it was fine, but when he found it, he suddenly...

Originally titled "Harry Potter: Absolute Control". I did something stupid. I read a post and canceled the starting number. Then I couldn't get it back, so I had to change it and resend it.

Apart from the attractive introduction, the content is not interesting at all. It keeps laying the groundwork, digging holes, digging holes, digging holes. I saw more than a hundred pictures of them all laying groundwork and digging holes, and they were laid out in such a logical and level manner that I dare not say that you are cheating on the word count. Are you going to make a movie? Does the protagonist have to be strong in the finale... It makes my head hurt to watch it. When I didn't know about Harry Potter, I said that the protagonist acted like a teenager, but after entering Hogwarts, he behaved like an indigenous boy who had never seen Harry Potter... I didn't mean to belittle it, but it just didn't suit me. Let me express it.

This original female character has too many roles, and judging from the description in the book, she is a very important plot character. It is normal for fan works to have original works. After all, you cannot follow the original work all the way. The problem lies in the combination of originality and original works. Harry Potter is a person's name. It can be said that any book with Harry Potter in the title has already determined the main plot from the beginning, otherwise it would not be a fanfic. Whether the character of Harry Potter is a supporting role, a buffoon, or a direct effeminate character, it is certain that the characters related to Harry Potter should not have too few appearances. But the original female character of Slytherin in this book feels like it has broken the balance point. This feeling is that there is too much originality and too little original work, and it is beyond the world view. This is the key point, she is too strong. This female character is basically a very important character from the very beginning of the description, and this character is also very strong! It is also related to the background and the main plot in the future, which is a bit uncomfortable. . . . . . The protagonist's roommate is handled very well. Although it is original, it does not give people a feeling of transcending the world view of "Harry Potter". Including the recently updated plot, although it has a strange feeling, it can still be understood as the plot of the "Harry Potter Prequel". Only this female character gives people an uncomfortable feeling, as if there is sand in the eyes (an exaggerated metaphor) I hope the author will think carefully about the future plot. If he wants to focus on the original work, then this character must be downplayed. If you want more original works, it is recommended to change the title of the book and add the Harry Potter world view in the introduction. Now this content can easily attract bad people. Generally speaking, it gives people the feeling of selling dog meat to others. . . . . . To be honest, I personally hope that there will be more original works. After all, it is an HP fan. If it is too original, it will not be an HP fan, but an HP world view fan.

Personal review: The book is pretty good, but the heroine's background is too arrogant and distracting. The introduction can easily make people mistake it for a cool novel, but the content is a bit deceptive to the protagonist. There is also nothing to say about returning to China. After all, it is basically a poisonous point for Western fan fiction.

Suggestion: Use magic power to create a cyclone in the body (if you want to release it) to drive the magic power from outside into the body and then compress it (golden elixir) to increase the magic power. It is similar to cultivation, fully automatic cultivation. This is just a personal suggestion.

Fuck, fuck, fuck, it turns out that the protagonist is called Myron... I thought the protagonist was Professor McGonagall. When I thought of Professor McGonagall saying to Harry Potter, "You are the illegitimate son of Voldemort," I felt unexpectedly emotional.

The station manager came to sign the contract today, and the contract will be sent tomorrow. Now the investment income is guaranteed, after all, there are still very few people.

This woman is a bit disgusting and abandoned. She feels like she has become a puppet of heaven. She is also observing the protagonist.

Well, I haven't read the book yet, but I think the introduction is quite interesting. I would like to ask you Shen Nong, is this book poisonous? 😃

You can just make do with the main text. If you can't understand it, read the introduction a few times to figure out the plot.

There is one story that I thought was very interesting, but he stopped writing it. For the first time, I experienced the pain of not filling in the gaps, which almost made me mad. I really hope the author can write this book down.

The prototype I imagined before was Rigel (◦˙▽˙◦)

The Chinese part is really poisonous. Since I write about the magical world, there is no need to consider realistic factors. It makes China even banned magic. I am speechless and have a lot of flaws.

This profile is so sexy hahaha 😃

I laughed out loud when I saw the introduction...

The introduction made me laugh, 666

So what, does the author have any rules for updating? It's not enough...

This introduction is really interesting🤭

The smart-aleck author thinks his writing is good but actually it is not so good. From the first chapter to more than 50 chapters, you can see that there are fewer and fewer text bubbles and barrages. What does it prove? There are fewer and fewer people reading the book. It is a pity that the author is immersed in his own world and does not know it.

I have to say you are very brave, author. It doesn't matter if you are not in the same class as Harry. After reading more than 50 chapters, I feel that I am still far away from the original plot. There are so many original plots 👍👍 What if most people can't read it because they lack a sense of immersion?

There are two things I don't understand. First, why did you write this travel sketch? Two hopes and two disappointments. The protagonist's hope of solving the magic problem was right in front of him, but he was ruined every time. I feel uncomfortable watching it. Otherwise, don't write it, and you will fail once you write it. Secondly, what was the purpose of writing these roommates who are as good as sand dollars? Is it to make the style of the novel more humorous? But I really felt like I couldn't eat it. I especially hate teammates who have no IQ. The above two points only represent personal opinions. Everyone has different preferences

I think this introduction is interesting. I haven't read it yet. I'm waiting for someone to try it.

He is about to die. Is he entering the palace? ?

Highly recommended, worth reading for fans who haven't followed Harry Potter's ass.

I have read more than 30 chapters, and the writing is too light. It's like the protagonist's golden finger doesn't exist.

Miss Stuart is very cute (*'▽'*)♪, the author writes it very well, and I don't think the pace is slow, but it would be better to change Harry Potter to Hogwarts (referring to the title). Really, what's so good about following the original work? This pace is very good (✪▽✪)

Let me ask a question. For example, writing this Harry Potter. After making money, how do you solve the copyright issue?

Introduction to Niubi🤭🤭

Why is this so similar to absolute control? Is this a trumpet?