Mysterious Ruler

Translated Western fantasy has always been my favorite. I hope the author can maintain the level of background setting, environment foreshadowing, character creation, plot development, monster fighting and upgrading, step by step, don't worry, it doesn't have to be unfolded by God, it doesn't have to be invincible all the way, it doesn't have to be a series of adventures. The church and the gods can be rogue but not necessarily evil; the top officials and the villains can be talkative but not necessarily stupid; the strong elite can be proud but not necessarily domineering; there is no conflict between daily heartwarming comedy and hot-blooded epic battles; there is no conflict between cowardly and reckless people. In short, the story is exciting, unconventional, logically consistent, and both the main character and the cast are charming. Keep updated and look forward to the world you write!

I like the worldview and it's interesting, the protagonist's golden finger is also reasonable, and the battle of wits is well written. Here comes the key. There are no climaxes, just a pool of stagnant water. The powerful original scripture is used by the protagonist as a magic book that can only sing a few fixed spells. Sakura has more Clow cards than this! The protagonist's ability can make him a mobile library! It's a pity that the protagonist can only be delivered to the door through a clever "bump". Summary: It is of good quality, better than most, but the author is still too "young" and the writing is unsatisfactory. The subject matter is interesting and it is a hit. I hope the author will continue to work hard and learn from experience, so that he can continue to write on this subject matter.

It's a pity that this book has been on my bookshelf for a long time. The creativity of the book is very good, and the author's writing and character creation are also very good. It has the potential to become a masterpiece, but the pace is so slow that it almost drags the readers away...😅 Looking forward to the author's next book

The style dialogue smells like a two-dimensional thing. What is written is not a Western fantasy, but a Japanese novel with a skin.

I feel that the content of the maze is a bit boring. The protagonist has no sense of crisis after coming into contact with several great beings. I don't see his desire to become stronger.

The world view of the book feels good, but the writing is too flat, and the protagonist doesn't seem to be motivated.

I really can't stand it anymore, it's too bland.

The update is really slow. Does it need to be at the pace of a eunuch?

The biggest failure of this book is that the author chose the Divine Comedy as the core original text for the protagonist in the early stage. The translation of the Divine Comedy is not easy for Chinese people to read, not to mention the mysterious deconstruction of the novel. In the end, the author's deconstructive explanation of the characteristics of the original text through the description of the protagonist's ability to use the Divine Comedy became very vague and obscure. To be honest, it is better to set the early core original text for the protagonist to be a hundred thousand whys.

I feel that these original canons are really wasted by the protagonist. Other organizations have played with the original canons and wish they could divide them into chapters and sentences, but the protagonist is still using the original canons to release fireballs.

Hello everyone, this is the author himself who is not very good at writing novels~~ If you have any comments, you can leave them here! I definitely won't listen anyway————

It's a pity to throw away food if it's tasteless. I don't know if it's because the world view has not been fully developed. After reading more than 90 chapters, it was just mediocre, with no excitement or climax. After reading dozens of chapters, it was such a wonderful and mysterious world, and the protagonist had such a powerful "golden finger" (as a time traveler, he has the understanding of the original scriptures and the ability to read the original scriptures and the knowledge beyond ordinary people). However, the protagonist seemed to me to be a person without a spirit of exploration and curiosity. As I become stronger, I am always passively involved in events. The original scripture is very powerful and mysterious, but I didn't see the protagonist exploring, understanding and developing the original scripture that I got. It seems that getting an original scripture is just a few skills learned in the game, and the explanation of the original scripture in my hand is finished with a few comments. It doesn't make people see how powerful and mysterious it is. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist is using a machine gun as a mallet... The book is a good book and has the potential to become a god. However, it feels too bland and fails to grab readers. It makes me want to skip chapters while reading it. It does not affect reading. I hope the author will write more wonderfully and write better... 1000 reward, small support, see you again in the future.        ，， Also, I would like to ask book friends to recommend supernatural, mysterious and horror novels, thank you...

It's a big curse for the protagonist to give up the original text that is readily available every time. It's understandable if he doesn't take the initiative to search for it, but it's really disgusting if he doesn't take it when he has it at hand.

Pig's feet lack initiative. I really don't know what the pig's feet want. The readers are brought into the perspective of Pig's Feet. If Pig's Feet has no initiative and just follows the crowd, the readers will also feel that there is no main line. I saw chapter 500. Tell me how I feel. 1. The first is that there is no clear main line. I can't help but wonder, what on earth do pig's feet want to do? What do you want? As soon as Pigfoot traveled through time, he learned that this world had superpowers, and strange phenomena appeared in his town. He was afraid and ran away. It is said that pig's feet should be insecure, which is when they crave power. But when Pigfoot went after the Divine Comedy trilogy, he only wanted to complete it, not pursue power, because later when he clearly killed the owner of The Theory of Welfare, he didn't take it, and let the people from the Investigation Bureau take it, but he didn't want it. 2. Because pig's feet have no thoughts of their own, the development of the plot is driven by events. When there is nothing going on, Pig's Feet is fishing. When there is trouble, others come to Pig's Feet to participate or are forced to join. So what's the point of the author writing this story? 3. The author likes to omit plot. There are some plots, all arrived. The result is skipped directly, and the result is given directly in the middle of the next chapter. If you do this, sometimes you can't connect to the above, and you think you've skipped a chapter, and the only fun part is gone. (Although the author of this book marked it as a non-refreshing article, your general direction was already not a great read, but you eliminated the only interesting points. I want to ask the author, did you do it on purpose? Because your introduction marked it as a non-enjoyable article, you wanted to eliminate the remaining enjoyable points.) 4. It is still a problem, the main line, the main line, and the tm is the main line. This extraordinary system set up by the author is very interesting, which is why I was attracted to read it. But the upgrade path for this extraordinary system is unclear. What is the strength of a grimoire owner? Why don't non-grime casters go to grimoire owners. Is it because the owner of the grimoire can fully unleash the power of the grimoire's spells, while non- grimoire owners can only borrow them? Then why can Nicole use the power of the magic book owner's spell? Nicole's genius, where is the genius? Why can she do it? There are so many old pedantic researchers, but none of them are as good as Nicole? The Lord of Mysteries has a potion system that goes up step by step from 9 to 0. The reader has a goal. So what is the goal of your system, pig's feet? Just collecting grimoires? Then why didn't you take The Rich Country? If it focuses on spiritual music, then I haven't seen Pigfoot carefully studying the use of divine music? Every time I have a flash of inspiration during battle, I think of other ways to use it. Or is it that the author has omitted the process of thinking about and using the Divine Comedy? The author wants to create a super-powered system where logical thinking is greater than academic research. That is to say, no matter how much you study a superpower, it will not be as powerful as a logical genius who has a flash of inspiration. This book makes me feel bored. The more I look, the less I know the direction. I don't know what to do with pig's feet.

The protagonist seems to be drifting with the crowd and being led by various people.

Why do you give me the feeling that the subject matter is very good, but the author is not skilled enough and can't express it well?

It is better to feel first about yourself

There's nothing refreshing about it. It's okay to drink it just like boiled water, but if you have Coke, you'll definitely want to drink Coke. Although it's quite outdated to pretend to be a b-story, but it's quite bland if you don't pretend at all. It's quite interesting to write, but it doesn't make people feel like, wow, it's right here. It doesn't mean that you have to pretend to compete, but there must be a small climax. Now it seems to me that it feels like a farming novel, but a farming novel also has the excitement of a farming novel. For now, let's call it a mystery novel. It doesn't have the mind-twisting feeling of a mystery novel. I feel that if the plot is more interesting, it can be said to be one of the best novels I have read recently.

Same as above, the book is a good book, the creativity is very good, the power system is thoughtful, and the early writing is also good. But it fell apart in the later stages, especially when there were too many female supporting characters. One would appear every once in a while, and the female supporting characters kept leading the show, making the plot drag on.

Being able to read the original scriptures is such a huge advantage, but without using or developing the use of the original scriptures, I have been passively involved in various incidents so many times, but there has never been a sense of urgency. Stepping into the transcendental world is stepping into danger.

I searched for the signing list all night and finally found one that I can read

The book is a good book, it has seven or eight points of the skill of Lord of Mysteries, and the style is similar, but the power system should be the original system created by the author, which is very innovative. The only thing I don't like very much is the slight delay. The title of the book - the mysterious ruler is my favorite type, but the content is - the mysterious ruler, which I don't like. The setting is very novel, and the content level cannot keep up with the setting. It can be viewed at a glance, but it is a bit tasteless, tasteless, and a pity to discard.

The book was okay at the beginning, but not at all at the end. Especially after the maid shows up. To solve the forest problem, you need to find the last part of the original book. You have been grinding with the people from the Secret of Arcana. Who dares to oppose you if you just throw out three original books? It was the same after returning from the polar regions. The protagonist is so "righteous" that it makes people sick. You say that you are almost the most powerful person in the world, but you still have no money to stay in a hotel. In the face of the war against the rebels, although he showed his disgust for the war, he still had to save Phil and send people to a safe place. He could save people, but why did he only save that one person and keep her with him instead of placing him in the church? It can be seen that the author also knows the difference between users of the original code and ordinary people. What Raleye said when Raleye and Shitiel were fighting was relatively normal. When a person has power that far exceeds that of ordinary people, then he and ordinary people become completely different classes. But the author has to make the protagonist so "righteous". Although this is not impossible, as long as the writing is good enough, it can still reflect the personality of the protagonist. But it is obvious that the author does not have such ability. Generally speaking, you can give up after reading 800 chapters at most.

This book is indeed tasteless, and it is a pity to discard it. I have seen more than 200 main lines in the book, and I still don't know what they are. They have always been mediocre. There are countless female characters in it. They are extremely beautiful. They accompany me for walks at every turn, look shyly, and throw themselves into my arms. But the author emphasizes countless times that this is "friendship". I just want to ask the author, why don't you Write some male characters. The only male character who appears the most is not sure whether he is a boy or a girl. The idea of this book is indeed good, but the writing is really not good. You said that you write so many female characters and engage in ambiguity all day long. For an old bookworm, it is really unbearable. I feel that I will definitely start a harem later. If you want to read a book without a female protagonist, leave quickly! ! !

The writing fell apart at the end, the main character just went to different places, the transition of the plot was a bit inexplicable, and the combat power was also very strange. Basically, there was a source book and a deadlock, and then the tactics were used to win.

It's a really great creative setting, but there are some problems with the story content. The protagonist's character and handling of things are a bit unsatisfactory. For example, the Wealth of Nations. Most people would kill and seal it immediately and then save people. As a result, because they saved people first, The Wealth of Nations was taken away for study. Yes, if this conflicts with the Queen's camp in the future, it will be a major hidden danger. Also, can't the original canons suppress each other's effects? Why is The Wealth of Nations so buggy? One original canon forcibly balances the power of four original canons. If it is a level-based suppression, shouldn't it be more appropriate to divide the original canons into different levels?

Actually, I don't care if it's a cool article or not, but every time I see someone marking it as a non-pleasant article, I feel that this person is probably a literary youth. . . .

The author created a supernatural world, but kept expressing in the plot the idea that a supernatural world would be worse than no supernatural world at all. As a result, the world was created without charm. He used works from all walks of life as original sources, and as a result, the relationship between related events and the contents of these mechanically copied works is only a dime a dozen. The writing style is incomprehensible, and the way the plot advances is almost completely disconnected. I read other posts that the author didn't want to write a cool article, but what he wrote is not as logical as a cool article.

A book just goes silent, it falls into ashes when it is not popular, of course...

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