The Sword Master of the Moonlight Family

A strong man from the Moonlight Clan? Are you... "Yes! I am the great pirate Moonlight Moria!" (ಡωಡ)

The plot and writing are pretty good, but the author is still more skilled. I didn't expect that I would be persuaded to quit by Goldfinger.

This system fixes all the sword moves. If you really use the sword moves like in the game, you won't even know how to die. After fixing the moves and shouting out the names, I just need to spend some money to get all of them. I know the relationship between the names and the moves, and I can accurately calculate them. Do you really think that other people are idiots? And the sword moves also have CDs

Poisonous, not extremely toxic, but not recommended. Originally, it was good to just write about swordsmanship, but suddenly a system came up in the middle and gave me the skills of a sword master. The result is a weakened version of Translucent Escape, a weakened version of Clone Technique, a weakened version of Monster Power, a long CD, and insufficient mana. Even learning ninjutsu is better than this.

🤔 World War II hadn't even started yet, but when Tobirama died, Asuma was already two years old? So Kushina is at least twelve or thirteen years old, right? How did the Uzumaki Kingdom get exterminated while Tobirama was still alive?

The setting is too NB, delete the book and leave

I don't understand why you like to write about political intrigues so much. I came here to read this?

Goldfinger's bunch of English is really unfriendly to outsiders

Does the Juggernaut give you only his physique and skills? What about his swordsmanship knowledge? How did he develop these skills? ? ?

To be honest, I don't know much about this golden finger at all, it's a bit embarrassing

Danzo didn't go dark so early. The second generation Danzo had just died and he definitely had the same heart as Sarutobi. They had been teammates for so many years. Danzo didn't hate Sarutobi, they just had political disagreements from now on.

Your sudden appearance of the system successfully persuaded me to quit.

The cooldown period for this golden finger is really to persuade people to quit, so what's the use?

There is really no need to slow down the protagonist's growth in strength. Do you think his golden finger is very strong? Wind Step: A weakened version of Translucent Escape. Critical blow: Not as powerful as Tsunade, a super weakened version. Mirror Image: A weakened version of the Elephant Turn Jutsu, which cannot release Ninjutsu yet. Blade Storm: Normal barrage ninjutsu attack. Looking at it this way, is the protagonist Goldfinger very strong? Anyway, I don't think it's very strong, it's just a normal ninjutsu.

And generally speaking, upgrading doesn't increase personal attributes, health bars, blue bars, and defense. Nothing is written here.

Moonlight's sword master has become a sage seeker🤫🤫

I feel that the protagonist in your book has too few roles, and they are basically talking about other things. It is clumsy and slows down the pace, and the tasks assigned to them are not humane at all. Every time they are sent to do other tasks as soon as they return, they are A-level and S-level every time. When did these things need to be done by genin 😅? Is it possible that the people in power don't know that the protagonists are elite members and need more time to practice? Moreover, the eldest son of the third generation is still here, so it is unreasonable to carry out whatever tasks are dangerous.

To write a Naruto story, you need to use the system... The first part is pretty good, but when it comes to the system part, I'm speechless.

This system, this plot~~~ I really can't stand it anymore, author, come on 😰😰

This junk plug-in is worse than nothing. No matter how good your skills are, without the power of chakra, it will just be like that! Do you still want to play wave-ryu in the ninja world? There is no such thing as seeking death.

I really vomited, another novel about persecution and paranoia

Doesn't it conflict with your own training ability that you have a system? Why do all abilities depend on the system! The system allows you to become a sword master. Doesn't this conflict with your ability to refine chakra and practice ninjutsu? I started to think it was pure kendo! After working on it for a long time, we have a system! Doesn't having a system conflict with your ability to exercise, right? I thought I was so amazing that I was a slave to the system! You can obviously train your chakra and practice ninjutsu by yourself, isn't it good to add this to the system? Don't just rely on the system!

The level of writing routine is okay. However, the level of story conception is really limited, so I advise you to be cautious.

Goldfinger advises you to quit and add one. It will be okay if you practice later, but it would be too low if the system gives it directly.

Your Naruto timeline made me feel like I was about to fall out of the circle. I just couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. .

It turned out that there was a system, and I felt comfortable, but now I am disgusted by the bunch of Hokages who forcefully install their writing without plug-ins. What I can't stand the most is that these writings use other people in the Hokage as a staff, and they keep showing off the protagonist's IQ, and they call this IQ online. There is no cheat in Naruto. The time traveler reaches Danzo if he can survive, let alone Jiraiya.

It's not a problem with the system. The main timeline is confused. The protagonist is five years old and Asuma is two years old. At this time, the third generation came to power. The three ninjas are only in their teens. They are about eleven or twelve years old from the protagonist. Please tell me if you have a girl named Yong. Shouldn't the protagonist be the same age? Yong Daimei must have been a teenager when she took Kakashi as her disciple! Kakashi and Asuma are the same generation? ? ?

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Why is this timeline so messed up?