I Play DOTA in Naruto

After reading it, I found that the writing is not actually poisonous. The protagonist has a strong human touch, and the jokes are not awkward. If you are 1. The original work pays attention to the party, 2. I hope the protagonist will kill decisively, 3. Readers who like to watch the Invincible series, it is recommended not to read it. It will not only make you unhappy, but also leave negative comments and affect the book. It is purely harmful to others and not to yourself. I hope the author can finish it... Don't let it be a bad ending...

I can't stand it after reading thirty chapters! The protagonist really feels that if he wants to live, he must ensure the life of the Thousand-Armed Rope Tree. Isn't this nonsense? People only care about the Senju clan's schoolgirls. Who cares about you, a commoner, risking so much just to prove that you are a good dog, kneeling down and licking the Senju family, and the Will of Galaxy Fire finally magnified your goals in the eyes of the Third Generation Monkey and Danzo? Everyone can die on the battlefield. If a crowd breaks up and the rope tree dies, what does it have to do with me?

The author probably hasn't read the original work. If you've already killed Hanzo yourself, why would you still be apprenticed to Jiraiya? You must know that the Sannin and a dozen Anbu were all overturned by Hanzo at his peak. It didn't take long for you to be apprenticed to Jiraiya and you could kill Hanzo, so why would you be apprenticed to him? And read more information. The Book of Masters says that Hanzo's strongest ability is Water Release. No one can match it. At least it is at the level of the Second Hokage's Water Release.

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The equipment problem is serious The Midas can't be developed, people die every day but no ashes are produced, it's just a life without the Blood Essence Holy Sword, it doesn't make sense You might as well set it so that the early equipment system is not turned on, and you can only use skills. It's time to bleed Essence Stones into the Power Strike Society. After a war, you can't have hundreds of levels? Even if you are killed (beheaded), you will die. This recovery alone is enough for you to practice with a large number of multiple shadow clones. If you don't want to become invincible too quickly, you can But you have to extend the life of the story logically, rather than being selectively blind. It's not difficult to change the setting

Can you please stop insulting Dota? Don't even think that the protagonist has any brains if he doesn't even know about the Ashes of Blood Dragon Heart.

Although it is said to be a fan, you should respect the original work. I don't know. When I play as a fan, first of all, everyone hopes to re-read the familiar plot and familiar things, and then fill in the regrets based on these things. Then in the future, the author will have any new and interesting ideas. The opening chapter has been changed beyond recognition, not to mention adding a lot of random names and skills. The original version has a strange smell. It describes a world full of darkness and struggle. It has a protagonist with a hint of Madonna, which is very poisonous and makes people uncomfortable. When Jiraiya lives, Tsunade, one of the three ninjas, comes up and asks others about the secrets of ninjutsu. Jiraiya discusses the philosophy of war, bala bala, which makes people feel very strange. Is this game about the famous non-talking friendship supposed to be a hot-blooded comic? I said before that I should be careful to stay away from people who are evil and deceitful, but then I immediately changed my mind and wanted to lick them. I also explained seriously that I was not licking, but that I was being exposed. I couldn't help it. I couldn't say that it was wrong, it was just uncomfortable to watch. One mouthful opened up a world of darkness, people's hearts are old, pornography, gambling, drugs, etc. Then lick them and accept me as your disciple. . .

It took the protagonist several years to get started just by being popular. Could it be that the protagonist just relied on being popular to conquer the world? Then the other hundreds of heroes just take advantage of it? Is your book label still invincible? I want to ask where is Invincible?

It's so disgustingly written. Generally speaking, the protagonist is betrayed and framed, the protagonist saves himself, and then the protagonist forgives. All villains are given another chance, and there is no price for failure. The protagonist, including the protagonist, will choose to forgive. In the end, the protagonist returned to being so moved by himself. All are themselves lovers of justice and peace.

Personally, if I am a member of the Senju Clan, I just don't express it. The disbandment is unreasonable. Why don't other clans disband? The Thousand-Year Clan will disband if they say it is disbanded. It doesn't make sense to just disband the Senju Clan. Theatrical version Konohamaru wears a scarf and tells Naruto that he is a high-end product of the Senju clan. According to the official novel, most of the Senju clan are in the education department, and some are in the ANBU. This shows that the Senju clan is doing well. Moreover, in the manga, the battlefield was being cleaned, and Fushu was beside Orochimaru. When he saw a seriously injured person, he went to rescue him. As soon as Orochimaru stopped him, he was hit and died. There was no conspiracy at all, it was just a plot kill.

My mother, the rope tree that was searched by a large number of people in the original book has become an orphan that no one wants, and no one comes except Tsunade. After getting the unusual movements of Sagakure and Amegakure, even if someone deceived Orochimaru, they should know about it. It will end in a few chapters after you find the allies who are still in Yuyin The stuff gives you the feeling of seeking scriptures in the west

I was wrong, I only knew it was poisonous, but I didn't expect there to be such a poisonous book! This author is really amazing! How could he write such a poisonous book? And there are lots of poisonous spots, big and small, it's really powerful! If anyone can finish 20 chapters in one go, I would call him the strongest! ! !

Holy Mother, let's not talk about it. Others have betrayed you and cost your life. Why are you showing such mercy? You can't crush others with your strength. Are you still pretending to be a bigot? Still a licking dog, I took this drag bottle to lick for a long time

There's nothing exciting about this book. It's the author's self-promotional work, and he doesn't care about the readers' feelings. If you're not bored, don't read it and make yourself angry.

Daily poisoning is well-deserved, and I don't even dare to speak after reading the comments. The author also has a good attitude. You say what you say, and I write mine. Hey, it's just for fun!

I regret that I ordered all of them. The original timeline was going well, but I had to travel back to the original timeline just to follow the plot.

If you don't have that idea, don't do the Dota mall cheat. Let's have a Dota lottery cheat. Direct backend control. I can't draw it without gold, and I can't draw it if I don't buy equipment. It's all about luck. Instead of looking for lame excuses, buy popular sentiments, buy equipment to be afraid of Danzo, and borrow Dota's reputation, so don't insult the readers' IQ, okay?

This is a really poisonous point. I have never played Data, but I am an old LOL player. I spent two thousand gold coins to become a disciple and expected to lose an unknown amount of money from a hero. Why not buy equipment? Even if you don't buy equipment, wouldn't adding two thousand more be enough to unlock the next hero? Moreover, the origin of the equipment cannot be explained clearly. If the explanation is not clear, the pot king will find an excuse. I can never imagine how the protagonist does this kind of operation? Is this what the author is trying to do? Reduce IQ to limit the protagonist? I haven't seen the rest yet, so I don't know if this is a hole dug, but this operation made me involuntarily take off half of my brain.

Stopping at Chapter 26, why do they always like to write about the person the protagonist saves being stronger than the protagonist, and why do they still want to get to the bottom of it and ask the protagonist for his secret? Does this mean not to save people? That is in line with the current social situation where you cannot help others at will.        ，

There is a reason why this book does not do well. At the beginning, the Rope Tree is extremely poisonous, and then Kai Ren is also extremely poisonous. If you can resist it, there will be an even more poisonous plot. . . My poison resistance is so high that I even think about giving up the book.

In the original work, Hanzo's comprehensive combat power reaches the Kage level, Jiraiya is as powerful as an elite Jonin, and he even becomes a disciple.

Just reading the book will tell you how low the author is.

The plot of each character who appears becomes more and more vicious, and the plot is like a child playing house. . .

The author has never watched Naruto and has definitely never played Dota.

Originally everything was fine up to this point, but I had to fix it in the world line.

I just read the comments and found that someone was trolling the author, saying that he made Hanzo look too retarded, and that Shadow of a Village could not be so stupid. I just want to say this: Jealousy changes people beyond recognition. The history recognized by ninjas is that Princess Kaguya came to the ninja world with the sacred tree thousands of years ago, and history began from then on. Princess Kaguya ruled the ninja world for more than a hundred years, and then the ninja sect overtook it. Then came the Warring States Period, which lasted hundreds of years, and the ninja village era had just begun. For a country that spent most of its time at war, it would be impossible to record its history in detail. Therefore, ninjas do not have more than 5,000 years of history to learn and understand so many conspiracies like us, and it is impossible to remember some things without experiencing them. Secondly, for a country where personal force is paramount, it is impossible for everyone to engage in conspiracy, so the development of strategies is not so prosperous. But it is impossible to be that stupid. It can be said that the top leader of a village must be an extremely intelligent person. It may not be comprehensive, but there must be something special about him. There are also people who criticize the setting of the original work and the settings of other fan novels. I just want to say: the most important thing for a fan novel is to justify it. Maybe you can use your own theory to interpret the plot of the original work. The rest is just icing on the cake. As long as it is written according to the current level, it will be good, as long as there are no obvious poisonous points.

Chapter 145: Return to the Blood Mist. How long ago did that happen? After Obito turned black, the little sun hadn't even become famous yet. Obito started to control the Mizukage, and he was fooling around.

The main character's name is really... Peaks and troughs (I thought of this as soon as I saw it). What a show...

This novel should be called "Self-cultivation as a Dog"

The middle part is too disconnected, I just abandon the ongoing plot and run to another time, and the ending is also inexplicable. After watching it for a long time, I didn't expect it to be like this 😭