My Girlfriend Died in the Past

The first volume is very good. There is no doubt that if the whole book can maintain the level of the first volume, this book will be a classic online text. The quality of the second volume has indeed declined, and many book friends have said the same. The second volume has just begun. However, if the content is all about solving the problem of Shu Die in the Shadow World, although the content is not bad, it has become a side quest after all. Even if it is a side quest in the world, it is only a side quest after all. According to the summary of the first volume, the main line of this book should be the action of the protagonist's confidants to save the protagonist. This theme should be throughout the entire text. But the end of the first volume and the beginning of the second volume gave me the feeling that the main mission of saving the protagonist has been completed, and then I am doing the remaining side missions after defeating the demon king. This seems a bit unsatisfactory.

At first glance, there are obvious logical loopholes in the first scene. Why did kidnapping for ransom turn into silence? If it was just to have a reason to let Shu Die die, there were too many reasons to choose from, so why use this obviously wrong reason? After ruling out the possibility of the author's dishonesty, the only reasonable explanation is that there is something hidden in it. Viewed horizontally as a ridge and as a side as a peak, the author has only written about one side for the time being, but some people think that this side is the whole story. I rarely write comments, but after reading the posts, I found that some people really don't think about it at all. I was looking forward to this book and didn't want to see it half gone. The loudest people often account for the smallest proportion, and more people remain silent. Not everyone understands it, and not everyone can see it clearly. I don't comment because I never try to interfere with the author's control of the plot, but I have also seen too many books that ended miserably because they relied on the instructions of some readers. I hope the author can have more confidence in his own book. This is your world and no one else is allowed to dictate. Come on

As a time-traveling novel, this book is worth reading. The highlight of this book is that the protagonist can reverse the tragedy of the past under the change of the timeline, and strengthen himself as if he is on the phone and leveling up. In addition, the protagonist's decisive killing and rebirth-like entrepreneurship are also a refreshing point. The female supporting role is also well portrayed. I personally think Xiaodie is a very interesting girl, but in some timelines, she is too fond of the protagonist and the image is not as three-dimensional as Sister Taishi. But there are many problems. The first is the issue of football betting multiplier. It is easy to get rich by buying football lottery after knowing the score. The reason is mentioned by some book friends in the book reviews of some plots. Secondly, there are logical problems in many places, but they do not affect the overall reading experience. For example, if the school's secret room was built by Mr. Chen's father alone, it would be reasonable. But if it is An Lan, it seems less reasonable. An Lan's coming to be the principal is condescending. It is completely reasonable for her to want to have a private laboratory. It can even be arranged in her office. Her contribution and status do not mean that a laboratory has to be hidden under the cabinet in her apprentice's office. Otherwise, every time she goes to the laboratory, she has to open the cabinet and dig holes in the ground, and there is no ventilation. Can middle-aged and elderly people withstand such hardship? For another example, Teacher Chen's father chose to kill someone in order to keep a secret. Forget about a few students in his early years. At that time, surveillance coverage was low and there were accomplices. It's normal to keep a secret. The identity of Li Ming or Liu Lang (community police) was completely unjustifiable later on. One is that in today's society it is difficult to find dead soldiers to help you resist thunder and kill people. Secondly, is it necessary? At that time, Teacher Chen's father was already in the ICU and was still free to instruct a loyal killer to kill the people's police. In addition, the part where An Lan travels to the past to help the country feels a bit like the ancient aid to the Communist Party.

Reading this book has an animation style, whether it is Shu Die, a childhood sweetheart who relies on the protagonist, or Gu Shiyue, a genius scientist. The content of the first volume is very exciting, really exciting. The content of the second volume and the expansion of the world view are a bit difficult for me to accept. Generally speaking, it is too abrupt and not logically rigorous and progressive enough. And the technology (energy shield?) Shown in some details is not hard enough. This hardness actually refers to the combination of virtual and real, and the combination of virtual and real is the charm of science fiction.

I've read 78 chapters. This 2.0 Volume is really good. It's good to read. I'll give you a monthly pass. I'll give you more for more!

After reading the author's latest self-narration, I can understand the previous plot choices. Although it is not satisfactory and ideal, at least it is relatively feasible in the author's opinion, so that's it. My suggestion to new readers is that if you are not willing to accept a plot that is too coincidental, relies entirely on the characters' imagination, and has no room for mistakes, you can skip chapters 25-31 without affecting the plot. Let's talk about the subsequent plot. The author probably has an outline, so he can breathe a sigh of relief. The bigger problem is that according to the current plot timeline, it is pushed forward from back to front. The protagonist's modern plot will be affected by the plot of his childhood. Simply put, how to deal with the modern situation after rescuing his sister? Or should we simply abandon the modern timeline, push it all the way back to childhood, and then end up going back to the beginning? It depends on where the first flashback to high school goes next. Of course, we also have to consider how to get back the text message from our future self. I personally don't like the idea of ​​a random god changing the timeline in such a mess that an extra person comes out for no apparent reason and everyone's memory is correct. Let's see the follow-up plot.

Not much to say

Good books

Come on come on! I came over to visit the grave today and found out that I have published a new book. Sister Sichuan, we love your mouth and teeth!

I have a girlfriend who doesn't want a car, a house, or a bride price, and she doesn't want me either.

After reading it all, I suggest you stop at chapter 215, so that you will feel that this book is a masterpiece. If you want to continue reading, you can just read the subsequent chapters as parallel world extra chapters.

I'm tired. To put it bluntly, I just keep spinning in circles.

If the story ends at the "Never See You Again" point in An Lan's diary, then I think this novel, even if it cannot be said to be a masterpiece, is at least an important part of the Qidian Rebirth novel. It's a pity that the author insisted on letting Zhuang Xiao take it all, so he rounded it up, and the result was a big lump. If reality is a matrix designed for Zhuang Xiao alone, then everything An Lan has done for him to "live until 2025 in the virtual world" has become a joke.

I ordered all of it voluntarily, but you can't cheat the next one. The various rhythms and suspense at the beginning are quite good, but the ending is not satisfactory and is a big mess. Moreover, for some unknown reason, there is no added sweetness at all, and the energy report is negative. It was only after I read the book that I discovered that I had read the author's book before, but it might have been downloaded. It was a negative energy report. It looked like a harem, but readers couldn't even imagine the benefit. I doubt the author's mental state.

After reading ten chapters, I want to say, how much the universe loves you. Always asking you to go back in time🤭🤭🤭🤭 That's awesome

The plot went too fast in the early stage, and when the mystery was about to be revealed, the plot was extended to watery chapters. The feeling in these recent pictures is that the protagonist is mentally retarded.

The plot is good, but the emotional drama in this harem novel is a bit awkward as it was written by Chu Lan who has never held hands before.

It's so uncomfortable. I really can't. Give me your address and I'll send you some souvenirs.

It's really good. Keep it up. Book it all.

When I read the title, I suddenly thought of another healing masterpiece, My Girlfriend is from the Future, which is exactly the other way around.

It was too early to stir up the emotion, without any emotional foreshadowing. In order to catch up with the progress, I skipped many places that should be described in detail, such as the meeting with the eldest lady, the past and present of the two, the scene of the eldest lady's death, the impact on the male protagonist, the male protagonist's high-pressure state for several consecutive days, etc., All written in just a few strokes. The readers have not established enough emotional connections with the characters, so the sensationalism is very dry. After turning two pages, the eldest lady uses the lines of gay friends to sensationalize, which is very... On the other hand, when the male protagonist serves a few shrimp rice in one pot, the writing is so detailed, and the length of each character is not small This seems to be to retaliate against the three of them. This dish of jealousy, the eldest lady is dead. This dumpling meal is the same Or write it all seriously and slowly, the male and female protagonists emotionally recall the details of their relationship, what is a knife without sugar, just an indifferent passerby? If you want to keep up with the schedule, write it concisely, cut the knot quickly, and simply solve the three problems, and then talk about the details and foreshadowing It's boring to give the three shrimp rice rice so many routines and conspiracy plots, no one has posted these chapters to this chapter.

I voted a lot for the first volume, but I lost all interest in the shadow world setting of the second volume. It was a bunch of suffering Shu Dies, and it was very abrupt, like "the corpses can move." The latest chapter is still "The New Shadow World"... Just by looking at the chapter title, I have no desire to read it.

Do I have to write something that I am not good at? This reasoning simply cannot stand up to scrutiny. The description of the main character's thinking is also inexplicable. Especially when I am still practicing logic. I feel that there are logical loopholes in this book. This is not how transformation works. It is when you become good at it that you transform in this direction, rather than transforming and practicing first to become good at it.

Both of them went back to the past. Retrospection is equivalent to an opportunity for trial and error. Why do you still pretend to be elementary school students when you meet, instead of asking directly in person?

No. The author said before that he wanted to write a novel that was self-consistent and perfect in logic, but it turned out to be a big deal as soon as he subscribed. If you don't live anymore, why not just end the novel at the first storyline? What kind of genius girl can develop special medicines for difficult diseases that the whole world cannot solve in the high school chemistry laboratory? By the way, the first ending: If Xu is not the murderer of your genius girl, why can't he study the manuscript of this medicine openly? Do you have to study secretly in a basement with corpses? And killed several people for this inexplicable secret? 🤔🤔🤔 bro thinks the price of killing is higher than the price of taking a broken manuscript, right?

This is the reaction of readers when Kawako was mentioned in other comment areas. Kawako wrote well and brought back the criticism

It's a mess, the plot won't be rounded out later, and there are a lot of bugs.

After reading it, who is the girlfriend? Something about the shadow world feels very wrong. The story line behind Wei Rui is also very strange. It stands to reason that he doesn't know the outermost things. Shouldn't he be thinking about finding Dong Wei Rui and then going to the outer world?

The writing was pretty good, but it felt like it ended too quickly, and I felt like there were some unfinished plots.

I pray for novels of the same type that are constantly reborn to change the future or save the world.