Fist Overlord

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The protagonist's cousin was entangled by a dog. Instead of notifying his family, the protagonist practiced his boxing for a while. Then his cousin died, and the protagonist sighed, "He didn't die in vain." May everyone who defends this story be surrounded by people like the protagonist. And what's with this talk about time travel and unfamiliarity? Do you need to be familiar with them?

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Books with warped values ​​are not worth reading. Instead of reporting his cousin's unusual behavior, he was practicing martial arts stances. How big is his mind? Did he just transmigrate and not care about his family's well-being because he didn't have much affection for them? Those who are his family are truly unlucky.

I was thoroughly poisoned after reading more than ten chapters. If it were written in a dark fantasy style, the protagonist could exploit his cousin's death for personal gain. If it were written in a light novel style, he could just charge in headfirst, since he wouldn't die anyway. If it were a simple-minded style, the protagonist could do absolutely nothing, like in this book.

The first three chapters reveal the protagonist, or perhaps the author, to be a selfish, morally bankrupt individual. This is the worst protagonist I've read this year; even the most shameless scumbags in the underworld are more virtuous than him. Seriously, it's rare to see such a despicable protagonist these days.

Humanity is declining, demons are rampant, and you expect humans to establish a dynasty? Just like in modern times, humans are rampant, and cattle and sheep are declining, yet we haven't seen cattle and sheep establish a country.

Hehe He's only been reborn for a week. What secrets could a rich kid from a small town possibly know? What information could he possibly gather? And then he hears about the ghost stories and doesn't believe a word? You've been reborn, how could you not have some doubts? Author, you're really not suited to writing. Everyone should just give up; the logic is nonsensical. What's the point of reading this?

These kinds of novels all have a fatal flaw: they're incredibly rushed. They never allow the protagonist to focus on cultivation; it's just constant fighting, and then there's a 99% chance the story will crash and end.

Feel free to voice your dissatisfaction with this book here. Point out which chapter has reasonable requests and I will learn from them. Mindless criticism is also welcome. ┐('~`;)┌ I'm learning from this experience and gathering material for my next book! This is my first book this long, so there are bound to be problems. I'll just have to be more careful next time I write. With so many words, it's easy to revise!