From NPC to Mastermind

To put it simply, it is very interesting, but the author still tries to avoid describing women, which is a bit embarrassing. The characters of the devil and Yan Xiaopi are actually not likable. Some people may like this kind of contrasting heroine (partner), but the author's skills seem to be a little worse, and the characters are not distinctive enough. It's easy to forget, and the female devil gives people the impression of being a bit frivolous. She seems to be good-looking, so of course a female supporting role is fine. If she really makes the heroine, I hope the author will think twice. Yan Xiaopi seems to have a lot of pages, but there are no memorable points. There is only one useless name. The whole person feels insignificant to me. There is a problem with the setting of players and NPCs. The template NPC has the functions of the player and the memory of the previous life. It seems to be very interesting, but the author should tell the difference between the functions of the player and the NPC. When I looked at it, I always felt that there was something wrong with the setting of double experience. It was vague. I hope it can be more clear later. The character of the protagonist makes me a little confused. Does he dislike women or is he serious and dull? The above are all my personal opinions. They only represent my personal opinions. If you don't like them, please don't criticize them. I wish the author will write better and better, I like this book very much ❤️

Nice! As long as you don't write badly, your grades will definitely be good later on.

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How should I put it, I feel that the author's writing is a bit messy. The attributes of the protagonist at level 10 are similar to the attributes of the player at level 1. Is the average attribute of a player more than 40 when he comes in? The protagonist's level attributes at level 14 are only 40. I feel that it is wrong and the writing is not rigorous at all.

I don't know how to comfort the author. This number of subscriptions is probably not enough to exchange for a pack of Honghe. If you rely on writing books to support your family, I suggest you end the plot as soon as possible, start a new book and try to recommend a new book. For the sake of love, just pretend that I didn't say it...

More updates, don't worry, I will continue reading even if you don't sign the contract

The author should update quickly. I was recommended here.

Is it a bit similar to this account? The character design is basically the same... If there are methods to improve qualifications in the early stage, you should use them first. A few points difference is still bad. You haven't encountered life danger yet. You don't have to blindly pursue the level. Obsessive-compulsive disorder means it is uncomfortable.

Second Senior Sister

How can you become a mastermind behind the scenes after becoming a disciple?