Transcendent Martial Saint

Add some flair. It's not suitable for romance. It should be all-consuming and domineering. The protagonist should be rational and intelligent, especially considering his age in his previous life. He wouldn't seem mindless. Now, ten years have passed in this life. His personality should be mature and stable. That would be more enjoyable to read. It's best to avoid depicting romance.

It feels like unless you can evolve your body to achieve effects like a steel body, biofield, energy shield, fist intent, or sword intent that make you unafraid of firearms, you can't match the computer analysis of someone else even if you use your skills to the fullest.

Muscular old man

Dear viewers, please take a look. The second round of recommended spots is already gone. The author hopes you can help out. 🥺

The Black Wolf Gang storyline is terrible. They threaten others to deal with the Black Wolf Gang problem, then immediately become their henchmen, taking care of everything themselves and even demanding tributes. It's ridiculous.

Save the children!!!

I just wanted to ask the author, is there a female lead? (Just asking, I haven't read it yet, please don't be offended, thank you)

The book's title should be changed; the first impression is "Yakuza Martial Arts." There's no rush now; the author should continue updating and building a readership. Subscribe to all copies after it's released.

It looks alright so far, keep it up!

One chapter a day won't work; there's no motivation to keep reading, so I'm letting you languish. At least two chapters of 6,000 words each are needed.