I Work Hard to Get Stronger Because I'm Afraid to Die

Is the protagonist's luck value a negative number? Although the protagonist did not suffer any loss, there were too many things happening and they happened too frequently. I met a wolf when I was resurrected. I went into a city and was blackmailed. I went to buy clothes and was tricked. I came out to eat and was tricked into cheating money. I went to practice martial arts and was blackmailed and tricked again. This protagonist must be poisonous. You won't meet a normal person wherever you go.

Author, have you become like this before it is published? I really can't stand it. The pig's feet are either stealing money or on the way to stealing money. Think about your writing.

Author, please change the title of the book to Let's Seek Death. Is the protagonist afraid of death?

More detailed descriptions can flesh out the characters and develop the plot in detail. The author wants to write cool articles for non-novices, but to be honest, this kind of book is not suitable for new authors. 1. Most new readers like to read Xiaobai Shuang's novels. They can't understand or appreciate the detailed characterization of your characters. Your rich descriptions of the environment are troublesome to them, and your complicated plots are a headache to them. In short, in the eyes of newcomers, you are just filling in the garbage. Old bookworms are generally older and have less time. They can't see that you are not famous. 2. More detailed descriptions require stronger skills. If you are not skilled enough, or the plot is awkward, or the plot is full of nonsense 3. Even if you are skilled enough, but there are too many detailed descriptions, the plot will be slow. If you follow it every day, the plot will not progress. Many people will choose to keep books, and they may be killed after finishing the book. . 4. Moreover, if you don't update enough, you will be criticized by others. In other words, if you want to write non-novice articles, you need to update 10,000 per day (but non-novices are more difficult to write than novices) As an old bookworm, I really hope to see more cool articles by non-novices, but for new authors, it is best not to touch them. Many plots are a bit awkward, for example, the protagonist takes 1 penny and throws it at the shopkeeper. . Unless you have foreshadowed it, this shopkeeper is greedy for money and will not let go of any money, otherwise it will be too embarrassing. You go to the store, take 10 yuan, and hit the hotel manager? 😥

To compare, is there a system? Or is it a time traveler, Ni Ma, who went to a clothing store to show off to a waiter?

The protagonist must at least have a soul for black boxing. Why is he so childish when things happen? He feels quite proud of being deceived. . .

This is too poorly written, and the story is so cliche. I wrote five pictures of a subplot about buying clothes. I even looked at your homepage. Another book of yours only had a recommendation of 10,000. No wonder it's so bad.

Every time you give me money, you have to say something like, "Check it out"... If it's "water", it doesn't matter, but if you write it like this, you'll feel like you're in poverty, and you'll feel like you're poor to the core.

Use 50 chapters to write the content of someone else's 10 chapters. It's already 50 chapters.

Don't read the one written by The Water King at the Starting Point. It's endless nonsense throughout the entire process, and it only barely includes the details of the protagonist going to the toilet.