1983: I Can Pick up Skill Books

The writing is so bad. Great author, your writing is better. This subject matter is also good 😂

It feels so childish. Tens of billionaires are reborn at every turn. The writing is very childish.

The subject matter of this novel is okay, but there are too many dialogues in it, one after another. . . The protagonist explains too much. No matter who questions it, the protagonist has to explain over and over again. It feels like the author is skimping on the word count. . . Don't write so much nonsense, write more affordable ones, and writing about skills is better than writing this nonsense.

According to the introduction of a certain episode, the 1980s literature was all about abandoning wives and children, cheating on sisters and brothers, and billionaires regretting it for the rest of their lives. Suddenly looking back, everything is desolate, waiting to warm up their wives and children, and confront the pacesetters.

Come on, I'm scared to read this introduction

There are too many skills, and they are all elementary. Upgrading is slow, making money is slow, and there are many locks. After reading dozens of chapters, it only talked about one thing, with too many details.

I don't know how the author got to the second level, but I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 19: it's all nonsense! Especially in chapter 19, just about introducing the work to the eldest sister, the dialogue alone takes almost a chapter: the mother asks, the eldest sister questions, the second sister questions, the younger sister interrupts, it's like a hundred ducks, it's a mess! What the hell did you write! The same is true for my little sister's illness. I told her once when I was reborn at the beginning, once when I saw my little sister recalling it, once when I returned to see my grandparents after making money for the first time, and once again when I returned home to keep the remaining money, and once again in front of my mother... What do you think of this book?

If a girl is sick, she knows how to make money by reading the skills book, but she doesn't touch medical skills. She's a talented person. There are so many conversations. I'm sorry.

I didn't want to read it after seeing the introduction. Internet writers who write chronicle articles all have a problem. They like to imitate real-life writers and arrange all kinds of troubles and hardships for the protagonist's family. The protagonist does not have a golden finger or a God's perspective, and can only rely on the hardships of life to improve his abilities. You are writing an online novel. The reborn protagonist has decades of foresight and a large amount of information received in the Internet age. It can be said that he is born with a golden finger. The protagonist should have more hard work and purpose than ordinary people. There is no need for those bad things to torment the protagonist and readers.

After reading Chapter 87, I really couldn't bear some of the words, so I learned how to make a blacksmith and made a good knife. The good knife was sold at a high price. Others questioned it, and then the protagonist explained that it was just such a small thing. It was nothing. I couldn't bear it. If someone came, I would doubt him, and then explain it from beginning to end, and it would be over in one or two words. Another person knew about this matter and explained it again, and passed it in one or two words. Another person comes, it's this time again, another explanation, another one or two passes. TMD I really can't bear it. I look really irritated and have the urge to smash my phone.

The entry-level skills he just learned are better than his grandfather's decades of experience? Is this called getting started?

A kitchen knife can write 800 chapters, and selling a kitchen knife can produce more than 3,000 chapters. . . . .

It's okay to be a good person who helps others, but don't be a bad person. Even novels must be logical. The salary of the mute brother is really indescribable. It's like hiring a cleaner with a monthly salary of 50,000 yuan, and talking about the pattern. The author's pattern is quite big.

Opening a blacksmith shop is a failure. It is not cost-effective at all. It is better to learn electrical repair. Blacksmithing is a real technical skill that requires time to accumulate. You only have skills but no physical strength. Do you want to be a good blacksmith? Hehe! The wisdom is too fake, this book is going to fall on my knees.

The anti-Japanese dramas are not bloody, and they are all trivial. Summary: 1: My writing skills are not good, describing one thing is too wordy and inaccurate. 2: The storyline is not good, it's all about family affairs, and it's too bloody. 3: The knowledge reserve is not good. I want to write some things but can't, and there is no logic when I write them.

Haven't watched it yet. But after reading the introduction, I had no desire to read any more. I don't understand why these authors who write chronicle stories have to arrange so many troubles for the protagonists in the early stage. Traditional writers write chronicle novels mainly because the protagonist is not a time traveler, and they don't have any golden fingers. They can only rely on the hardships of life to sharpen the protagonist. But now many authors who write online articles do the same thing. We Internet article readers only come to have fun when our work and life are not going well. When reading a novel, we have to watch the protagonist being entangled in a mess of thoughts, and we have no desire to continue reading.

When you see some billionaire reborn, just sneak away

The subject matter is very good, but there is too much nonsense. Things that can be said in one sentence cannot be finished in five or six sentences.

After reading the comments, I don't want to read this book, so as not to deceive people.

Why don't you learn medical skills? There is a very powerful old Chinese medicine doctor in the village. With upgraded skills, wouldn't it be better to heal the little girl?

I didn't want to read it after seeing the introduction. Internet writers who write chronicle articles all have a problem. They like to imitate real-life writers and arrange all kinds of troubles and hardships for the protagonist's family. The protagonist does not have a golden finger or a God's perspective, and can only rely on the hardships of life to improve his abilities. You are writing an online novel. The reborn protagonist has decades of foresight and a large amount of information received in the Internet age. It can be said that he is born with a golden finger. The protagonist should have more hard work and purpose than ordinary people. There is no need for those bad things to torment the protagonist and readers.

Can you change this constant "proud"? It's really inappropriate to use "proud" in some places. For example, when someone was robbed, when others asked how he knew who was robbed, the protagonist "proudly" said that he knew him. Does the author think it is appropriate?

The plot is okay, just a lot of nonsense. It doesn't look good, Sand Dollar. You can give it almost a chapter for one sentence.

You sold a kitchen knife and wrote hundreds of chapters, but you ended up unfinished?

In the first three chapters, I was successfully persuaded to quit, and the same thing was said over and over again.

This is the most annoying book I have ever read, The Water King

Originally, pastoral and rural novels were relatively plain, but they turned out to be extremely verbose. One thing could be written eight times, and the same thing was said over and over again in the dialogue. Pastoral novels instead gave off a sense of irritability.

I can handle a more vicious plot, but you are so long-winded. One thing can take as little as 3 chapters and as many as 7 or 8 chapters. Isn't it a cake?

Is the protagonist the evil star? This introduction introduces it. Don't dare to look.

Awesome, this thing must be running for 10,000 chapters! So poorly written