The Sword Immortal's Path Begins in Infancy

From the introduction, it seems that the protagonist's father's divorce letter has something to do with the protagonist! It has nothing to do with his grandparents! This only has something to do with the protagonist's mother! His father had to be a prostitute and then abandon his wife and children. If he didn't support his parents, his father wouldn't be able to become an official!

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Author, how long do you plan to stay in the infancy? From the perspective of a bystander, few people may like to watch this kind of protagonist. I hope the infancy period can be shortened, which may be better.

Are you stupid? The divorce letter has something to do with the protagonist's grandparents? With such a big loophole and handle, the censor slaps the label of unfilial piety on his head. How can you be an official? Can you walk around in the court?

No wonder no one read it, the writing is not bad. Waiting for it to learn the Fa at the age of five, but after more than 100 chapters, it is still a baby. Is it addicted to sucking milk?

More than 400 photos are still babies🤡I will be a baby for the rest of my life, right?

From when he got the gift of crawling, when he crawled for the first time and was discovered by his grandma who had just walked in, to when his grandma rushed to catch him, I wrote a whole ten chapters with just these few actions, tmd. I wrote about the time, place, environment, characters, background, various memories, and future prospects. I scrolled down, and my hands became soft, and then I came to the sentence "My grandson can crawl?", It's so meow, the sea is full of water. . . . . Yu Baihu gave him a book of Sword Jue and gave it to his mother to read to him. Ten chapters passed between "Ding, Sword Jue (Introduction)". Hu Jianbai took out a crystal ball to test the spiritual roots, and wrote five chapters from when he stretched out his chubby little hand to "How could it be a low-grade five spiritual roots". . . . . . . . Water, water, real water

The writing is too tedious. You have to ramble on about something that can be said in one sentence. How can any serious person write a novel like this?

As for the first one, who else will? Let's not talk about the writing style and character. Where is the logic?

It's a complete mess, so just prepare to stay in a childish state until you finish the book. What the hell are you writing? You're still a baby for more than 400 chapters, and all kinds of opportunities have brought you here. You can't be invincible as soon as you're born. Just write it, the combat power system will definitely collapse.