Celestial Being

I have also read the first few dozen chapters of this book to review them. On the way back from a mission in the Breath Realm, the protagonist showed his conscience and casually killed a child abuser to get the golden finger. Then, in order to win over a fox, he killed one of the gang members, injured one and ran away. During this period, the protagonist doesn't have much money but still cares about the beautiful woman in his dormitory. What's the point of borrowing money? The protagonist took the gold finger and the money obtained by chance from the fox and quickly went into seclusion to upgrade, otherwise he would have to be reduced to a handyman. Speaking of which, the golden finger and the property were both met by chance. If it were not for this protagonist, wouldn't he be bound to become a handyman? So the protagonist should have no plan for his future? After successfully upgrading, he suddenly became a middle-level person and took revenge. By the way, he took in the beauties in his dormitory, the chance spirit acupoint, and mastered the skills in a short period of time (the supporting characters naturally had to practice slowly). When he ran out of money, he took the task and went to fuck Gu Huo Bird with two idiots from the same family. Three people and horses couldn't beat Gu Huo Bird. In the end, they were all killed by the protagonist. In short, the supporting characters had unexpected things that the protagonist could not have... Summarizing the content of dozens of chapters, it can be seen that the author tried hard to create a dark fairy tale. The writing is good but the logic is confusing and random. Although it is a left-wing sect, it still has a certain degree of order. Casual killing among fellow sects has long been over. The protagonist is at the bottom of the fetal breath realm, has average qualifications, and has no background. How he can survive in this environment before getting the golden finger is a problem. It is difficult to be logically consistent in this kind of action. The mission was to eliminate demons, but the result was that all the members of the same clan died, and the whole family was also wiped out. This demon was eliminated so cleanly and so stupidly. Although this may be too harsh, as a starting point for immortality writing, it is still much better than pure novice Shuang writing, probably more than 80%. Xianxia novels can be imaginative, but the most important thing is that they are logically self-consistent. No matter what world, there is always an order and logic for its operation. Otherwise, this world cannot exist, even the world you imagine. The seemingly superior gods, ghosts, fairies and monsters have their own set of internal logic. They cannot be separated from the real society. They seem to be divorced from reality and far away from life, but they are definitely derived from real life. In the real world, all gods, ghosts, immortals, Buddhas, demons and monsters are far away from the human world, because their existence cannot be verified in reality, but the mortal world is full of their temples, statues, scriptures, legends, etc. In fact, all weird ghosts and gods are given by mortals, and they also have their own system or order whether they ascend to immortality, fall into hell, reincarnation, or jump out of the Five Elements. Regardless of mortals or gods and demons, a world without order cannot exist. A world without order will only be a realm of annihilation. Xianxia novels should not be too out of order, even if this order is set by the author, otherwise it will make people feel at a loss and make readers feel too self-contradictory. Of course, Xiaobai Wen Shuangwen does not fall into this category. Almost many fairy novels fail because they do whatever they want and abandon the logic and self-consistency, and slap the author's own settings in the face at any time. If you have poor aptitude, you can use golden fingers. If you have low level, you can use magic weapons and techniques. The adventures one after another are not bad. I'm afraid that the supporting characters are each described as geniuses, the backstage is so tough, the differences between realms are like an insurmountable chasm, the baby is so powerful... When it comes to the protagonist, all these settings of the author will definitely slap you in the face, and readers will feel embarrassed and feel pain in your face just looking at it!

This is a good book. Xianxia has been written by so many people for so many years, and it is quite difficult for this author to still be able to bring out the old and bring out the new. The only thing I'm worried about is that this guy can't keep writing. This kind of writing is too mentally consuming and it's not easy to stick to it. However, good books are not afraid of being slow. At that time, "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" was not updated every day, but Wangyu almost never updated it. He wrote for many years, and I followed him from high school until I graduated from college. After all these years, I still think it is Qidian's top work. Come on, author, I look forward to you creating another classic

This author has a weird outlook on life. You know it's a place that eats people, but you still put lovers there. How selfish are you? Don't read this kind of novel too much, it will affect your outlook on life.

Very good, fully booked. The best thing is the setting of transforming into a dragon. I particularly like Shenlong. Since you chose transforming into a dragon in this book, I will definitely order it all. No other reason than this.

I first got this novel from a recommendation. Because I like to read new books. There were hundreds if not thousands of books on the shelf. It can be said that he has read a lot of books, although he has not finished reading a few of them. Both old and new books are involved, and I have even read the four rumored most important books. Take a certain Dark Summoner as an example. I didn't feel the same way when I read this book. This book completely overturned my understanding of the evil ways in traditional leisure books. The whole book is filled with two words: cannibalism. Ethical principles are often completely and utterly subverted here. It's a world of cannibalistic immortality. Well, it can be said to be my personal feeling from the new books I have read in the past two months. A very good book. I have read relatively few traditional articles on immortality. However, the more famous mortals or Ziyang whose book title is not obvious, but is also a high-quality book. Wait, wait, I've seen it all. But this book opened up a whole new world of novels about cultivating immortals to me. It doesn't feel like the weird feeling of Ke-style cultivating immortality to me. What unfolds is a bizarre and bloody scene. A world where ants have no survival and only feed on blood, where everyone seeks profit and cultivates oneself, can still be seen. The shadow of traditional immortality. But there is also innovation in it. The promotion may be different, but there are also many immortality novels that proceed in an inhuman direction. Still acceptable. It's the scene of eating people. . . . . . . . I've been chasing it for the past two days. The recently updated chapters are also very tasteful, and I even doubted them for a while, and even feared that this book would be reported. Emmmm I can't stop watching it. I just want to say that I hope the author will stop writing soon. . . . . If I keep writing like this, if the taste remains the same. It can be ranked in the top ten of heavy taste since I read novels.

Did the author want eunuchs again?

🤣🤣🤣The author should be diligent, update two or three times a day, and then find some people to help recommend this book to you. It may be popular, although it may not be a big hit, but it will be a small hit, but it is still ok

I feel that the quality has declined very seriously. It no longer has the same feeling as at the beginning. I personally suggest that you would rather update less but ensure the quality, otherwise you will not be able to retain readers.

I once abandoned the book due to the author's hard work. I wonder if the update is normal now?

Keep updating twice a day (2000 words per chapter), and add one chapter once a week. Next month's monthly tickets will be among the top 100 😁😁😁 You can save enough for the wife book this year

Updates are really slow. I've lost all the chapters I've been saving for a long time.

Is this really eradicated? Pity

I can't add a few more chapters, it's not enough to read.

Come on, author. Not enough? ! ! !

Design a good anti-theft design, it looks so uncomfortable

I heard that you want to add more updates, so vote for my monthly vote to keep the stock at the bottom.

As of 2022.5.30

It's a pity. Originally, this book could go further. I thought that the novice village was a complete world of immortals and heroes, with good, evil and evil each leading the way. There are people who care about the common people, who seek their own way, and who are free and easy... In the end, a bunch of monsters and monsters were written, but they were still boring tricks like saving the world.

The subtlety of this book lies in its very subtle and three-dimensional description of the so-called "low martial arts" and "lower realm". Seeing the foundation building of the White Bone Temple even makes people feel a little shuddering, it is very concrete and vivid. The characteristics of Xiaobai's novels are often that they are weak and weak in the low realm, just like a blank slate online game, while the high realm is empty and pale, quite fake and empty. If the high realm is well written, I recommend this book first. Even further, why should there be a bigger "big sect" in this world? It can completely unfold in another overall plot, or even design an archaeological world view where the path has been cut off. You don't have to rush to find faults, just wait quietly for Bugu to open up a brand new world for you.

Only then did I discover the origin of the introduction to the work. Zhang Dai, a writer in the late Ming Dynasty (do you remember watching the snow in the Pavilion at the Heart of the Lake), wrote an article called "Self-Made Epitaph": "I was a dandy when I was young, and loved prosperity very much. I loved monasteries, beautiful maids, prostitutes, fresh clothes, good food, good horses, lanterns, and fireworks..."

I would like to give three suggestions to the author. 1) It is now at the stage of fighting with the Nascent Soul. Try to finish it within 3-5 chapters. According to the rhythm of one chapter a day, you can basically finish it within a week. It can be considered as a beginning and an end, so you can get together and relax...; 2) Professional writers are really not suitable for you who start at the beginning but end at the end. I suggest you find a full-time job because you have less money. Yes, but at least there won't be so many people scolding you behind your back. After all, too much negative energy has accumulated, and it won't do you any good; 3) Don't write books in the future. If you must write, don't change your pen name. At least I won't click on it if I see it is written by you. Benefit others and yourself, live in harmony, be calm and forget each other.

Only half of the updates are done every night, and everyone can't stand it. Only for Quanqin, don't blame the writer for being greedy. Writing at work and after get off work during the day, it is quite difficult to update every day. The world of mortals is full of trivial matters, and everything is trivial to do. Cuckoo, don't be impatient and slow to think about the plot carefully. Plow slowly and carefully to create a good product, write quickly and you will be ruined. Work hard to write a masterpiece, and you will be the starting point. Noji Bing'er's two-flying trip, wait for you to write and read it slowly.

I really regret booking it all. Look at Xiu Xian, you have created a demon path. The soul is implanted into the spiritual roots of ghosts, and the body is replaced with demon blood. What kind of immortal is this? Cultivation of demons is better than this thing.

Magic weapon: Orange Zhongmi, it looks like an orange on the outside, but there is a formation engraved on the white collateral part inside, which has the function of resolving siltation and turbidity, and suppressing bad qi. The orange petals can be filled with spiritual energy and spiritual stones to provide energy for the formation, and can also be used as a container to store bad and turbid air. If necessary, the entire orange can be detonated directly like a grenade. The molding method can be grown. The secret mantra for opening the array is: Take ten kilograms of Bailuo and make juice. Do not see any orange peel or flesh on it.

Born in a ghostly place like White Bone Temple, Pig Knuckles is also very sharp in his actions. He has already become a generation of trolls and has taken a step in the inhuman way. However, because the immortal fate is not weak and the immortal family's talisman is in hand, the path of pig's feet implies a turning point, and the heresy is also the path of immortality. Let's take a look at whether it will be a generation of troll ant Taoists who have just started to take off, or a side sect that is just starting out.

The writing is too complicated, and the progress is too slow. Practicing 4 paths at the same time, Immortal Way, Martial Arts, Gu Dao, Kendo, is meaningless. It is not a dark stream, but a profit stream at most. Moreover, sometimes the Holy Mother is decisive in killing, there are too many descriptions of the female supporting characters, and the plots are all the same.

It was still semi-updated before, but now I update it intermittently according to my mood. Four thousand words of bold words a day, but waiting for duck eggs to hurt people's hearts. A man's promise is worth a thousand pieces of gold, and he must not make fun of himself. It is not easy for a writer to become a god, but you must cherish it while doing it. Everything is not easy if it is successful, so don't be distracted even if there are chores. Set an example in Qidian. I praise you for insisting on updating daily.

This is what a banquet feels like

Fellow Taoists are willing to go to Wushan together｜21:57

I haven't read the novel yet, so it's probably not my favorite subject at the moment. But when I saw the introduction, I thought it looked familiar, so I clicked in. I wonder if it was a coincidence. This introduction should be an imitation of the epitaph written by Zhang Dai to himself, right? "Zhang Dai from Shu, whose nickname is Tao An. He was a son of a dandy when he was young. He loved prosperity very much, loved monasteries, beautiful maids, prostitutes, fresh clothes, delicious food, horses, lanterns, fireworks, pear orchards, advocacy, antiques, flowers and birds, and was fond of tea, oranges, and The bookworm, the poet, has worked hard for half his life, and everything has turned into a dream. When he was fifty years old, his country was ruined, and he lived in the mountains. The only thing left was a broken bed, a broken tripod, a few broken books, and an inkstone. Looking back on twenty years ago, it was like a lifetime ago.