Fairy Family

This made Xie's daughter forcefully open the Tianmiao. If I had to co-op with the protagonist later on, the book would be too rigid and cliched. I guess there are a lot of them in the Tianmiao at the back and they're not worth the money.

The author's writing is really good, short and easy to understand. I recommend a novel of the same type. Please save it and take a look. It's really too busy now

The previous book is actually finished. The early part of the previous book was like fairy grass, but I just wanted to get a drunkard to get the master drunk and then fuck the master, which ruined my popularity. It's a pity. I haven't even read this book. I know it. The early part is attractive, the middle part is a stud, and the later part is unfinished.

Looking at the novels you have written, it seems that you are just like the poor and rotten scholar in ancient times. You are a scholar but you don't know how to flatter, you can't be an official and you don't know how to make a living. You are poor and have a few ounces of water in your stomach. I make a living by using clichés, but I can't let go of my airs. Every article is filled with pointers and moral judgments. I open and shut about this generation, this generation, this woman, this person, this person is a beautiful maid and a cheap maid. I look down on all living beings from a high position. I have a rather arrogant and conceited arrogance and a depressed mood of not being recognized for my talents. I have shit in my rice.

Author, can you please write well? Everyone pays money to watch the art of cultivating immortality with the trick. Instead of "Palace Fighting Drama". That Huangshan fifth-grade master looks like Jiang Lozhi. The protagonist is like a magnet. He will be hated wherever he goes. First he sends soldiers... Then to elites, and keeps sending experience😒 If I were from Huangshan Mountain, I would just kill anyone who offends.

Partridge Sky·Xidu Song Dynasty·Zhu Dunru I am Shanshui Lang of Qingdu. Tianjiao's distribution and sparseness. I was granted coupons for rain and wind, and I borrowed monthly stamps from clouds. Thousands of poems, Thousands of wines. How many times have I set my sights on the king? The Jade Tower and the Golden Tower go back lazily, and put plum blossoms to drunken Luoyang.

I am a living ghost in the mountains, born to be loose and half crazy. I once criticized Qing Ci and changed it to Huang Biao, and he became drunk and became the king of hell in the underworld. There are thousands of techniques and ten thousand chapters of Dharma, why should we humble ourselves to serve God? Calling ghosts and attracting monsters who refuse to return, and burning immortals to eat moonlight.

I am a Shanshui Lang from Qingdu. I am a disciple of Heavenly Cult and Shu Kuang. I once granted coupons for rain and wind, and borrowed monthly stamps from clouds when I was tired. Thousands of poems and thousands of cups of wine. How many times have you set your sights on a prince? Returning lazily from the Jade Tower and Golden Tower, Luoyang is intoxicated by placing plum blossoms.

Cuckoo Liao: Currently a lv5 writer of China Literature Group, he has authored three excellent works: "Xian Pao", "Xian Pao" and "Xian Pao".

Some readers started turning off the water supply when they were 40 years old. When they saw a harem plot, they scolded it. Didn't you enjoy watching it when you were in your teens and 20s? I used to rush too much when I was a kid, and now I can't do it anymore. It started.

The author has not made much progress. This book still suffers from the problems of the previous two books. Nine levels of practice. You have used 400,000 words for one level of nine. What will you do next? Can you still write 5 million words? You can't write 5 million words in the three books together I don't think you can change your old habits. You know your shortcomings and don't change them just by talking about them. The low-level writing in the early stage is wonderful, but the middle level is a bit empty, and it basically falls apart in the later stage. It's not good at all. Are you going to end this book like Immortal Lu and Immortal Cage?

I hope this book won't open up a harem. The first and middle stages of his book are particularly good, but you can't stand it when you start a harem and accept others.

The plot is a bit tiring. As soon as the protagonist makes a breakthrough, a villain suddenly appears who doesn't like the protagonist, and then the protagonist kills him. The cycle goes on and on, which is not interesting.

Exorcising ghosts and refining ghosts seems to be the mainstream in this world, and there are even special schools, exams, and grading. Then why is this happening? What about the Five Elements cultivators in the classic world of immortality? What about the beast tamers? Where is the sword cultivator? Of course it can be simply said that the world is like this. But If we say that this world has reached the end of the Dharma era, resources and spiritual energy have been exhausted and collapsed, humanity has declined, and ghosts are everywhere. The only common and easy-to-obtain materials are human beings and ghosts, then it makes sense.

If this guy could maintain the level of his first two books, he would be a great writer. Why did it collapse in the middle and later stages? I don't understand. . .

It seems that it is about to end. I went to the fairy mountain, and the rhythm collapsed. The speed of light was unimaginable and became the most awesome number one in this book.

Eunuchs will also become a habit😄

The recent plot is really hard to describe. In reality, I have studied both Orthodoxy and Dharma. When I read your novel, it was very novel and I felt good about it at first. But now it feels more and more ordinary, like an ordinary cultivator. I hope the author will react! ! It's also difficult to advance the plot. I'm always at level 9. I don't practice well. I rely on the potential of the Tianmiao every day to make the big boss slightly shocked... With this kind of strength, he should be beaten into a dog or make medicine in the novel, and it is the protagonist's turn to play a game of checks and balances? Your 9th-grade master can't even leave the wild, he has been turned into a ghost long ago... Hey, there is also a villain who forcibly subdues his intelligence and launches a counterattack. Now I feel like vomiting when I read this kind of plot.

Can anyone tell me what this book is like? I was scared by his previous two books and didn't dare to read them.

The setting is really good, the writing is fierce but not sinister, ruthless but not slippery. Although there are some minor flaws, the author is obviously very ambitious. The world view and power system are developed quickly and steadily, which is very attractive. But the proportion of various elements in the plot is really wrong. After escaping from Huangshan for the first time, the author obviously couldn't grasp it with one hand. The noble and important training master mentioned earlier has no expressive power except for the water training and fire training in the exam. For such an important profession, even the leader of the old guild has no social status. People of the same level are not looked down upon, and they can use it to shine shoes. The ritual altar used in preparing for the exam was originally a very unique development, and there was not even a fart afterward. The Five Temple Zhengfa is not very expressive. The Yama Temple has trained a team of horse and monkey cavalry, which is said to have deep ghost power and can leapfrog. However, it has not been mentioned whether there are any abilities, and whether there is any miraculous effect in the combination of arms. It seems that just having a large number of ghosts and strong power can win by addition and subtraction. The wild power system unfolded by Fang Mulian has no trace at all. I don't know whether it is a full forehead shot or a repeated plot. For example, the Huangshan Army's dispatch of troops was clearly to fight the high-level and long-standing evil sects in the wild. In the end, it turned into a plot of beating old men and eating old men that has been repeated twice, and there is no description in the whole plot to reflect the author's previous foreshadowing of the dangers and harshness of the wild. It is no different from walking in the city. The incident with the Huangshan female general was so blinding that I thought I was in a trance and traveled ten years ago. The plot of the career was reached by force. According to the author's previous foreshadowing, this was a major turning point in the plot's mid-term development. The result was that the form was not as good as the county school examination, and the plot was once again the old man plot. Obviously it should be interspersed in the plot of the big exam to foreshadow the fact that the old men cannibalize people regardless of whether they are masters or apprentices. However, it turned out to be a big test between the old men eating people. If the big test is really just a comma footnote about the old men eating people to let the protagonist realize the existence of the big picture, it is just a foreshadowing that the old men want to eat people. The main subject is still the big test. This can only be described as poor. I just can't stand it anymore after my career ended. It's a pity that the author's descriptions are different from other ghost stories. Compared with the gloomy horror and helpless despair of ordinary ghost stories, the author instead focuses on describing people's ruthless determination to survive and practice in a bad world regardless of the enemy or the enemy. However, the author seems to be unaware that while the setting is so excellent, the plot also falls into the trap of ordinary ghost stories. The protagonist keeps running away, the author keeps foreshadowing the old men who want to eat people, and the experience keeps repeating that they happen to meet the old cannibals. The protagonist never has a central idea or belief, which makes people feel tired. It's a pity that such an easy-to-expand power system setting and unique writing style are paired with this kind of plot. It's like a bowl of noodles that is obviously full of color, flavor and flavor, but the soup is soaked in tap water. It's such a pity

Did this book do well? I wrote it in a petty way, for fear of making money for myself.

The problem now is that the protagonist is too weak. He is involved in a struggle between the sixth and seventh grades when he is only at the ninth grade. The impression is very bad.

The beginning of this book is well written. It focuses on raising ghosts, incense, and tempering. The setting is novel and interesting, and the details are rich. It has the flavor of Gu Zhenren. Although it is a niche setting, the author makes the niche not niche, which shows Cuckoo's talent. I have a feeling that there will be novels that will learn from this book. Unfortunately, there is a problem with the setting. In the early stage, the realm is divided too finely and the improvement is too slow. After the foundation stage, the realm is increased too fast, and the power is seriously expanded, making the same mistakes as the first two books. In other books, Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, and transformation into gods are all the same. There are still several realms to reach the immortal. In his book, the golden elixir dares to be called loose immortal, and the Yuanying dares to be called true immortal. The writing before Jiedan was very good. After Jiedan, his power expanded rapidly. But in the eyes of readers who are used to traditional immortality novels, aren't you just a Jiedan? Why are you called an immortal and have such great power?

Welcome everyone! Warmly welcome!

It's not enough to watch, can there be more 🤫

Damn it, every book is like this. It looks good in the early stage, but sucks in the later stage! Is this all you need to support? ? ? So uncomfortable

If the protagonist reaches the Heavenly Temple, the Heavenly Temple will no longer be valuable. If he gets the true inheritance, the true inheritance will be ruined.

You can always only watch the beginning, the middle and the last are always a mess

Should the protagonist refine a natal treasure? 😁 Advantages: It can protect the body, avoid death and prolong life, and keep the vitality. Disadvantages: Once the natal treasure is damaged, it may be seriously injured, or the life span and vitality will be reduced. Unless the natal treasure can be repaired or the natal treasure is transferred by a different method, the natal treasure will be destroyed. Recommendation for the natal treasure: Soul Hooking Rope : Can seduce souls with a whip, Soul-falling banner: Can cast away souls, Seven-star evil sword: Can use the power of seven stars to destroy evil and eliminate filth, Money-killing whip: Can fight ghosts and evil spirits to separate their form and spirit, Taibai Yellow Yue: Can kill on behalf of the sky without being affected by cause and effect, Leiding: Can gather the thunder of yin and yang from heaven and earth, and can turn into a thunder pool when refined to the extreme,

I'm coming, baby, one mouth 😘