I Only Want to Be a Shichibukai When I Have Bengyu

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Bengyu is an all-purpose machine that allows qualified people to skip the process and directly achieve their goals. For example, the protagonist wants to say swordsmanship and domineering. As long as the protagonist has that qualification, Bengyu has enough energy in Pirates, and he can directly conquer Chengdu.

If you traveled through the world of pirates, what would you do? Anyway, I don't want to change that world. I have no interest in overthrowing the Tianlong people or the world government. What I like is the scenery here, all kinds of fruits, all kinds of combat skills, all kinds of famous swords, all kinds of races, all kinds of beauties, thieves hahahahahahaha

What the hell? Inexplicably, the protagonist had been writing for so long and started to fight the King of the Deep. However, the result was that the protagonist was beaten by others at the beginning and the plot of the protagonist beating others was not written at all. It was directly transferred to the protagonist winning and being drunk. Could this be the protagonist's golden finger? As long as you survive the early stage and don't get beaten to death, can the protagonist activate the golden finger and directly adjust to the victory result?

Bengyu Xiaowu

I came here because I read the author's new book. To be honest, this book is very well written, without any poisonous points. The characters' personalities are very similar to the original, but I'm just not very lucky. Not famous. I have often read the book "One Piece Naruto" in Qidian, but I have never seen this book in the recommendations. This was so suppressed.

The fight scenes were so rubbishly written. He obviously has such a strong ability, but he doesn't know how to describe it. Pirate fighting is the key, and the battle between Black Wing Demon and Minotaur Xu is also particularly exciting, but it just shows off (ー_ー)!! Don't be like the protagonist of the Futian clan who lost his family and lost his dog. He doesn't know how to act cool but still acts awkwardly.

Try not to update new books without interruption. You can save some manuscripts for emergencies.

If you don't know how to write, don't write pretentious articles. You are mentally ill and the main plot of the battle description is the same as nothing else.

Such a good subject that you will be spoiled for writing

Broken jade? ,,, If the protagonist fights with Straw Hat, why do I feel that I will be killed by Silk Blood? After all, Straw Hat has a single-minded will to protect his companions. As long as the protagonist wavers for a moment, Bengyu will backstab him in minutes.

You have fallen, from a noble royal family to a bad, ugly and inferior pirate.

It was a confusing read. It pursued westernization too much. I couldn't remember any of the names given by the author to the supporting characters. I didn't know who they were. These names were completely nondescript.

The writing is good, but it always feels a bit awkward. The protagonist does not have an idea and goal of his own. In the words of the One Piece world, he has no dreams, which can also be called no ambition and no courage. Look at One Piece, Luffy wants to be the Pirate King, Ming Ge Kaido and they all want to be the Pirate King, Zoro wants to become the world's best swordsman, Kobi wants to become a general, and Ryuu wants to overthrow the world government. Everyone has their own dreams or ambitions, that's why they have their own courage, that's why they can gather their companions, and they can make others cry and follow them as soon as their tiger body shocks others. As for the protagonist of this book, I have now seen the current serialization part. To be honest, I don't see any ambitions or goals for the protagonist. The author seems to write wherever he thinks, and it is inexplicable to be the Shichibukai (although the book is called Shichibukai, but it is too abrupt). The main author, you are not originally describing the salty fish protagonist in the game world, it is not that style. Overall, the plot is pretty good and worth watching. But the writing power should be strengthened. Later, you can slowly set the protagonist's decision after a certain event.

Forced writing, farewell

According to the prophecy, Garp deceived the whole world, and the only one he didn't deceive was the red-haired one. He played a raccoon cat to change the prince, and Luffy was Roger's son.

Can the fight scenes be made more interesting? The lack of good writing in the fight scenes in the Hot Blood King manga is probably your biggest constraint right now. Every time the protagonist's fight scene is pretentious, it takes a whole chapter, and the fight is over in just a few sentences. It's very frustrating to watch, as if you've been watching the foreplay for a long time and skipped to the aftermath.

It's a bit too much to use this Bangyu on others.

There are too many names and they are too complicated to read.

The protagonist is well written at the beginning. In order to sublimate himself, he fills up Bengyu with his soul. This is regarded as having a subject in the early stage. As an extension, he has a style of behavior and reasons for doing things Why does the style change after the fifty or sixty chapters? From a lawful evil who kills 20,000 people just to fill up Bengyu, he suddenly becomes It has become an ideal to change the order and goodness of the world The ideal of changing the world does not mean that it cannot be done, but it is just laid out without any foreshadowing. The cause of the ideal of changing the world, the results of the change, etc., None of these Look at the protagonist created by the author, the country The prince of the family, the overlord of the new world, a villain who kills 20,000 people without any psychological burden. He has a free and loose personality and has no desire for power. Otherwise, he should have taken the throne long ago. This is a character who has a car and a house, surrounded by beautiful women, and is at the peak of his life. What such a vested interest character wants to do is actually give birth to change. The ideal of the world cannot be that everyone is equal. Equality for everyone with vested interests is a joke. Only poor people want equality for everyone If everyone is not equal, it cannot be to rule the world. The protagonist does not even want to take over as king, and it does not fit the character of a person who is greedy for power. Science and technology rejuvenate the country, steampunk leads the world, but I don't see the character designed by the author with this style of painting. In short, I feel that the idea of ​​this character changing the world is too abrupt, without any emotional foreshadowing, and it feels flashy In short, this sudden desire to change the world

What would you do if you traveled through the world of pirates? A group of minks fantasize about saving the world? Why kill the Draco? Without saying anything else, I just want to ask if you are afraid of pain? People nowadays have the character of squealing when they are slightly injured. How can you survive in a real fight with someone? How come the will to fight is so good? Not to mention the iron block and the color of the weapon, which of these two skills is not obtained by being beaten? If I passed, I would be embarrassed immediately. I would start with bandits to develop more powerful skills. Look at One Piece, all the people captured are pirates. Does anyone care about bandits? In addition, in the pirate world, women are generally good-looking, wouldn't it be a pleasure? Slowly developing is the way to go. There are so many top masters in the world of pirates. Isn't the world's ZF still standing? If it has some strength, it will expand. If you compare an individual to a world organization, is it too far away?

I've read dozens of chapters! So verbose! As a result, I am not in the mood to watch the plot!

Facing Luffy, he's like a nanny

Why is the eunuch written so well? .

To be honest, you can still watch it, but why do you want to be a Shichibukai? Originally, pirates can kill you, but because you are a member of the World Government, the navy and the World Government cannot kill you. Now if you become a pirate, the pirates can do it to you, and the government can do it to you. Are you not causing trouble for yourself?

The writing is okay, but it's a pity that he is a eunuch

Why! Pirate! A group of desperadoes forming a group is more verbose than a quarrel between market ladies. One of them babbles... Babbles... After finishing speaking, the other babbles... Babbles..., Party A finishes eating, Party B nags, Party B finishes eating, the third party starts again, and then starts nagging again. Chapters 4 and 5, more than 20,000 words, are not even finished! !

What does eunuch mean

Luo Liba is a bit disgusting.

Why haven't you updated it? It's very beautiful.