Gene Era

I saw more than fifty pictures, and I was probably poisoned five or six times, right? Inexplicable big teardrops, super embarrassing years to calmly move forward, stiff pretentious explanations, sudden pretentious slaps, the brainless villain setting routine a few years ago, daily writing is okay, but I was poisoned to death and can't read anymore. I thought that there would not be so many brainless pretentious slaps in the book in 2020. It seems that I was wrong. Objective evaluation thinks that what I said is wrong. You can read it first and then refute me. I have read 54 chapters so far. Abandon it.

I've read almost 900 chapters, and I feel like I'm exhausted from the end. There are too many traitors. When there are so many traitors, you have to wonder who is the traitor! The enemy boss beats the children at any time, while our boss is shopping. The emotional writing is also a bit confusing. I don't know whether I want to have a harem or a single heroine. I may still be wavering. Maybe it's just personal preference. I don't like the way it is written that before we fight foreigners, we must first settle our domestic affairs. Several giants are about to be beaten to death and they still don't unite. Then after the protagonist rescued him, they actually united and beat the protagonist to death. My mind was full of questions. Why did I have such awareness? Would you rather give it to a foreigner than a domestic slave? Foreign wars are for outsiders, but civil wars are fought at all costs!

The author is also convinced. In the early stage, I always wrote that fighting in the nest was linked to politics. I don't know what to think. Can't I distinguish the priorities? The world has become so big in the later period that any ethnic group has tens of millions of times the combat power or technological strength of Blue Star in high school. However, three ethnic groups have united to bully Blue Star, who is the only one from their hometown. Isn't this uncomfortable? Five times the siege, ten times the attack, this is a million-fold difference. We are still writing about the protagonist's ability, but now it all depends on the protagonist's aura. In order to highlight the protagonist's desperate efforts to dig holes, why don't we fill the holes left in the early stage? If we don't fill them in, the protagonist will not be able to survive.

When I saw Chapter 137, I couldn't stand it anymore. I think my drug resistance is quite high, and then I'll tell you why I can't stand it. 1. The combat power level was blurry, and I only figured it out after reading more than a hundred chapters 2. The plot of the attack on the way to school was too random, and it felt too disconnected from the subsequent story, and the forced sensationalism was too deadly and completely unrelatable 3. Yuan Shu, the Deng Wei incident was forcibly demoralized, and it felt like it was just for It was designed with a slap in the face just to show off, and I saw neither the growth of the protagonist nor the promotion of the main plot 4. (That is, the plot I am watching now) Not to mention the strange betting method of High Seas Fighting, the outrageous odds really felt like pressing me to the ground and rubbing me Above. There may be others, but these are the ones that offend me the most. Finally, I wish the author a prosperous literary career!

I've finished reading them all, and overall it's okay. It deserves its current ranking. The author's plot is very interesting. There are only one or two poisonous points. If you look carefully, you will find that the author has a lot of foreshadowing. I can only hope that the author can fill it in later with the twists and turns. Let's talk about the problem: The first 700 chapters: can be said to be the essence of this novel, especially the climax around chapter 700, which creates a series of characters: Xu Tui, An Xiaoxue, Wen Shao, Qu Qingshan, Yi Tiwei, Cai Shaochu. . . Chapter 700-900: It is more realistic, but the length of the supporting characters begins to decrease, and the halo of the protagonist is a bit too big. Overall, it's average, but there seems to be a lot of poisonous points. According to the author's writing style, it may be foreshadowing. I personally recommend subscribing here first. After Chapter 900: The writing style changed drastically. It began to build up combat power and reduce the description of characters to advance the plot. This may be because the author felt that the plot would collapse if it was delayed any longer. But the most attractive part of this book itself is the plot between Xu Tui and An Xiaoxue. An Xiaoxue's characteristics are obviously weakened here, and the transformation of the writing style is magically realized in more than 100 chapters. It's really tmdnb, and the character of Xu Tui, who complements An Xiaoxue, also collapses. If the author cannot adjust the plot quickly, it may be a better choice to end it as soon as possible. After all, in the process of shaping Xu Tui's character, An Xiaoxue and the plot linked to An Xiaoxue accounted for at least 70%. Judging from the current pace, if this rhythm continues, it may become a short story like the male protagonist Long Aotian. The plot of the first seven hundred chapters made me have high expectations for the whole book, but the latter part was disappointing. I hope to find the essence, but I have spent a lot of votes so that I can see my point of view when the author recovers. 🤔🙂😅🥺

Can we not do it as an afterthought? After sending a skill, we have to explain hundreds of words, and after the battle, we have to explain hundreds of words. If the captive is killed, he must be killed, controlled, or interrogated with skills. What the hell is it that you have to torture and talk nonsense to the prisoner? Wouldn't it be better to express your determination during the conversation? Which one should I yell at? Also, can there not be too much inner monologue? Do you only focus on the word count of water? What was supposed to be the climax was made tasteless by your water.

Quite disappointed. After Xu Tui broke through to the planet level, he felt that his combat power had collapsed. In the past, it was the same as playing in cross-level battles, but now the actual combat power is not as good as other planet-levels? The Quasi-Planet can almost kill the Five Guardians, but after jumping to two and three Guardians, it can only kill the Sixth Guardian when all its cards are used? Shouldn't the Planetary Level be a big change? And it is still a ninth-level catastrophe. After surviving this kind of catastrophe, the planet-level combat power is not as amazing as before? Is it because the planet-level protagonist has been upgraded too quickly and the combat power is suppressed? It is really speechless The most important thing is that it is really water. I frequently ask for leave, rarely update, and then I read that most of these thousands of words are nonsense. Some things are repeated once or twice and forget it. It keeps repeating and there is no new progress in the plot. Is it really interesting to just write nonsense about my inner thoughts? I don't do this when dealing with readers, alas.

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and half of the 200 words are too small, with a lot of meaningless nonsense: 10ms is only 10ms better than 20ms! But, think about it another way. This is a 2 times difference! For expert combatants, a 10ms neural reaction speed is enough to determine life or death! In other words, just like you can take one shot in 5ms, your reaction speed of 10ms is enough to take 2 more shots than the opponent! The damage here is extremely different! I don't want to read this kind of nonsense at all, I can also write it. When I see the exclamation mark! I knew it was just nonsense and a rubbish book, so how about just advancing the plot? A piece of nonsense that can convey hundreds of words, I'm convinced👎 The plot is: college entrance examination + escort accident + university research group, it's very familiar. I won't say who I imitated, after all, the novels are very similar.

I've been diving and I read a lot of comments today and couldn't help but say a few words. Really tireless in destroying food and grass. The genetic setting of this book is actually not new, but it is the deepest in depth. I even flipped through the book about those professional terms, and it seems to be the same thing. Pig should have simplified some very convoluted genetic knowledge. I feel that the background should be very grand. Think about the ten million words of Zhushangzhiwangzhiwang. This book, at least a few million words, is no problem. It is very interesting. Mutation, mutation, carrier, generational inheritance, etc. I feel like this is a hard science fiction book, but why is it classified as fantasy? There is indeed something inappropriate. The conflict between entering the school and that Yuan Shu feels very blunt. But after this point, I feel like the more I watch it, the more I like it, and the more I watch it, the better it becomes. From the current perspective, the extraterrestrial battlefield should be more than just an invasion. Zhu mentioned in the book more than once that the Huaxia District has gained a lot of benefits from the extraterrestrial war, and even the research equipment seems to have been obtained from extraterrestrial war. The reason for the commotion in the Yinlian District is that a large number of extraterrestrial battlefield interests were lost. Really looking forward to this. It's probably not an old joke about alien invasion as originally thought. Worth looking forward to it! It's very tiring to type by hand, so let's do this for now and update the book review slowly. In addition, there are many jokes about the protagonist being used as bait, which I personally feel is quite acceptable. Follow the trend and play the long game to catch the big fish. It is only because the traitor organization is eyeing the protagonist that they use the protagonist as bait. Instead of directly pushing the protagonist out to become a bait. I think it's okay. I don't know why so many people want to spray.

After reading Chapter 195, the biggest feeling is paddling, endless introduction and explanation

I saw this book on Shuhuangsou. Com and thought it was pretty good before it was put on the shelf. Although Zuo Qingqing's Pearl was a bit ridiculous, I overall thought it was OK. Then I clicked and subscribed to all the books. As a result, starting from the 500-plus chapters, I said to myself, you subscribed yourself, and you had to finish it on your knees. After seeing more than 1,000 chapters, I said to myself, don't make it difficult for yourself, just delete it from the bookshelf and that's it. . .

Some suggestions from a reader's perspective: 1. The protagonist grows too fast and lacks necessary pressure. The protagonist is almost completely in an ivory tower, and his cultivation is smooth. With the bug of virtual internal vision, there is no bottleneck, and there are no barriers in any aspect. In theory, he is a monster that can smoothly and quickly reach the boss level in any aspect, without any flaws; in terms of environment and resources, various buffs accumulate. As a person from the lower middle class, in the top universities of Blue Star, no one has special buffs than him. Where are the second generation of genetic new humans? What about the second generation of the powerful class? Is there anyone who can be special and open the gene point earlier? Or is there anyone who can train in a special way from an early age and quickly activate the gene point after being able to activate it? Mythical organizations have special items that can help quickly open gene points. Will the second generation of powerful people not have them? Or will the descendants of planet-level powerhouses have some special buffs? Bring in some geniuses and put some pressure on the protagonist. Or the special background of the era, or the special background of the environment, it is okay to put some pressure on the protagonist. In addition to the university system, there should be other systems in China, such as the military system, where some special geniuses can act as rivals for the protagonist and sympathize with each other. Please ask Zhu San to give other geniuses some way to survive, so that they can become better in certain aspects, or give the protagonist a debuff. 2. One person is struggling, not a group of people. The protagonist progresses so fast that almost none of his teammates can keep up, making it too one-sided and one-sided. I think Heizi, Zuo Qingqing, Gong Ling, Chai Ge, and Murong can all develop into strong players in some aspects and make up for the protagonist's shortcomings. As for Heizi, his powerful digestion ability has developed into a human shield with thick blood. Zuo Qingqing, Grand Master Gong Ling, Brother Chai can develop professions such as equipment, and Murong Guwu warrior. Otherwise, it will lack some fun if you venture alone in the later stage, and the protagonist will be a bit too lonely. "Eternal Night King" is very good, with a straight male protagonist, the smart, cunning and graceful Song Zining, the cool, strong, passionate and proud Zhao Si, and the upright and naive Wei Potian. The characters have distinct personalities and have been growing up with the protagonist, making up for it in some aspects. 3. Give the protagonist a back figure to chase. Every time the back figure appears, it will make people feel awesome. For example, in "Eternal Night King", Lin Xitang secretly plotted with his family, country and world in mind but succeeded and died without leaving a trace; Lin Xitang was an enemy on the surface but was actually a close friend, the brave and courageous Qingyang King Zhang Boqian. Zhou Dufu, Chen Xuanba, the unruly and eccentric Su Li, the domineering and sinister Queen, and the benevolent Pope in "The Book of Destiny". 4. It is strongly recommended that Xiaoxue should become the heroine, play more roles, and show some possessiveness to the protagonist. She should have some special emotional fluctuations after such a long time! The setting of the novel is quite interesting, but the sense of technology is still lacking. It would be more interesting to add some laser weapons and other equipment specifically for the strong. Finally, I hope that after the extraterrestrial world spreads, it will be broad enough and exciting enough.

Man is the spirit of all things and the leader of all beasts; man can conquer nature, transform nature, and use water, wood, fish, and insects for his own use; man can go to heaven and earth, explore the mysteries of nature, and create miracles; man is omnipotent, but he cannot control his own destiny. Earthquakes, tsunamis, hurricanes, volcanic eruptions; heavy rains, heavy snows, droughts, sandstorms, landslides, mudslides; floods, epidemics, car accidents, fires, explosions, nuclear releases... Can devour human lives at any time. Human beings cannot control or predict natural and man-made disasters. The beautiful life and lives that people have fought for and created by Schinle instantly disappeared, allowing people to witness the incomparable majesty and powerful power of nature at all times. In this sense, human beings are insignificant. They are really just a drop in the ocean and a dust in the vast desert. Tao follows nature. Only by conforming to nature and obeying the laws of nature can human beings utilize nature, transform nature, and make nature serve mankind. Strictly speaking, humans will never conquer nature. The so-called "conquest" is nothing more than a short-term, small-scale transformation, and this kind of transformation may cause long-term and large-scale negative consequences. "Man can conquer heaven" is just a dreamy cry from a conceited and arrogant person, and God will sneer at it. No matter how careful your plans are, no matter how many dreams you have, the calculations of man are not as good as those of heaven. If the black robe of fate is lifted just a little, everything will come to naught, or even be shattered into pieces. But we will definitely become the race at the top of the new food chain again. Our will is indestructible, and our spirit will be remembered forever!

A good book. Except for some power systems that were not explained clearly in the early stages, there are no major flaws. It's underestimated. The monthly ticket only costs so much.

The progress is very slow. I haven't read the author's previous books and I don't know whether it's because it's not good enough or it's intentional. The same thing is written from the perspective of different characters. I also added a mental description, which was too procrastinating. There are too many psychological descriptions but they cannot fully match the character's personality and status, which shows that the author's own experience can meet the requirements of this writing method. The protagonist's character sometimes compromises for the advancement of the plot, and sometimes seems inconsistent, which makes readers who are introduced to the protagonist feel uncomfortable and even discourage them from quitting. The subject matter is very close to my personal taste, and there are few similar books recently. It's not bad for those who are younger in reading, but for old bookworms, it will be difficult to stick to it. It is a pity

The author is so lazy. My body has been recovering for so long, and I still update every day. I have the energy to drink, and I don't spend much time updating to prepare for the finale. Decisively abandon the book!

The author is more generous, the same universe, the same dream! Since we are in the age of genes, what about your research on genes? The Zhuxian Sword can also be geneticized, and the country advocates harmony! Why are the genes of the Daxi people so powerful? How powerful are the Eldar genes? Why can't we cooperate? The protagonist catches the Daxi tribe and breeds some broken spirits? What a waste! The spirit race's ability to reproduce spirits is hundreds of times that of the human race. After all, they are called the "spirit" race! Have you ever thought about it, Daxi can be strong in the body, the spirit race is strong in the soul, the human race is average, or there may be other advantages. The three complement each other, and the three merge into one to break out of the universe! This kind of thing is called high-dimensionality. This kind of cooperation, the leaders of the Spirit Clan and Daxi Clan are absolutely happy to see it happen! Also: How will the coming of Zi from the Spirit Clan end? According to the author's urinary nature, after using it, I have to write it down! Don't be responsible, man. An Xiaoxue is your weakness and weakness in life. Just be a mascot (let you write it as a burden). An Xiaoxue must not go out to fight. It is really tiring to watch. It would be great to cook at home and take care of children. A book must have a soul. Of course, if you only write about the concept of the universe, there must be villains in the solar system and outside the solar system. Can factions be divided? Just write these, I hope it will help the author's ideas.

Why is it classified as science fiction? Shouldn't this book be classified as fantasy? These days

The Three Golden Chapters are quite interesting, so I'd like to order them all. But there is room for adjustment and improvement in settings. No matter what genre, time, place and characters are the basic logical elements. Time and place are equivalent to a specific time and space, and its political, economic, technological, cultural, and moral backgrounds all belong to the framework. The objectivity of subjective factors such as the character's personality, IQ, EQ, outlook on life, etc. All should be consistent, and some unique features should be reasonably explained. Gene Awakening Potions, in addition to death, also have adverse effects, latent adverse effects. One thousandth is too big. How big of a crisis does it take for the people to choose? If the crisis is too great, they will take it voluntarily. That seems contradictory. The name of the genetic awakening in 2037 is definitely not the college entrance examination. Who takes the work seriously. Readers will repay whoever is serious. Many novices are accustomed to performing well with their own subjective and constant character settings. The subjective and objective consistency within the story is often ignored and deviated from logic. This is also the reason why online writing has long been called white writing. Three don't come on.

How can I put it this way? The writing is quite good. From the perspective of the protagonist, the supporting characters are very distinct. It can be said to be a very good and refreshing novel. The plot has a lot of twists and turns for the sake of fun, and it is very emotionally arousing. If you meet a character you like, it will be quite painful. In the later period, the pace obviously accelerated, and it was a bit uncomfortable to watch, even if it was a little bit of criticism and encouragement 🙂🙂🙂

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I have read Chapter 248. One is planet level, and the other is quasi-planet level. One time it is about planet-level creatures being destroyed and losing source crystals. The next time it is about quasi-planet-level creatures being destroyed. The next time it is about the Indonesian hero with quasi-planet level strength who destroyed planet-level creatures. The next time it is about planet-level creatures being destroyed. It was the protagonist with the strength of the SS Gene Liberator who beat the Gene Evolver to death. I almost drooled when I saw it. I made a typo and read it, but I really couldn't understand the summary. Since killing enemies is not based on class, why are you describing so many classes? Also, the protagonist is a college student. , How could he suddenly be so awesome without any training and suddenly kill people without batting an eyelid, and then his brain would be like a fool again, being with a quasi-planetary strongman, talking to a strong person who is familiar with him and disrespecting him, I am number one in the science fiction list, and I want to see what book is so awesome, after reading this Zhang can't help it. There aren't many people who read science fiction. If many people are persuaded to leave by the first list, fewer people will read science fiction in the future. Then if no one reads science fiction, there will be fewer people writing science fiction. People who really like science fiction will not read any books, so I have to comment, bad review!

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I can't read anymore. I'm so gay in the gay world. The security guy and the Hanfu guy are poisoning me to death. I call men "brother" when I see them. Is the main character gay? A male protagonist in a video book always calls other male characters "little brother". Is this ridiculous?

After reading Chapter 11, I felt that the poison resistance was not high enough to survive. I don't know what the author was thinking? Is it a lack of understanding of Chinese soldiers, or is it a deliberate attempt to discredit them? Or is it just to forcefully create conflict? A senior colonel officer used a high school graduate as bait. How nonsense is this? A decoy that has no understanding of the plan is a huge uncertainty for both the enemy and ourselves. Will a carefully studied plan allow the decoy that is the core of the plan to be an uncertainty? The direction of the plan is completely uncontrollable. How high is the success rate of such a plan? Secondly, the person who made such a plan still wants to be promoted to general? Go to court martial! Whether it is near, the Wenchuan earthquake disaster relief, or far away, the war to resist U. S. Aggression and aid Korea. When very dangerous tasks need to be carried out, they must be notified of the danger in advance, obtain consent, be mobilized and write a suicide note before carrying out the task. The unity and mutual trust between officers and soldiers are important factors that enable the Chinese People's Liberation Army to have strong combat effectiveness. As for the plan in the book that uses an ordinary citizen as bait, it will not pass at all. Not to mention the execution. Otherwise, everyone who agrees will have to go to a military court, and those who object but do not report the knowledge will not be punished lightly.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I found that the author has a very serious problem: he is "childish and market-minded". Many characters act smarter and lower their prices. There is a sense of absurdity like "Nicholas Zhao Si got up from his 300-square-meter Simmons bed". It's not exciting but it's embarrassing.

I just saw Xu Tui and An Xiaoxue going to the Sun Temple in India to steal things. When I wrote about the poisoning, I thought it would be enough to poison the guards to make them lose their fighting ability. However, they poisoned and then started massacring. Is this really correct? The guards were reasonable and didn't do anything. They were not alien forces. They were just guarding the temple and were going to be killed? Is this kind of robbery really good? And I wrote hundreds of chapters, most of which were spent fighting in a nest. To be honest, the plot of fighting in a nest is not interesting at all. Also, why is the planet-level powerhouse behind this temple the mastermind behind Xu Tie? You don't want to cause trouble for other people's planet-level powerhouses. Why are you here causing trouble to a group of people who have never troubled you?

After reading Chapter 300, I just want to say that the author should go into the factory to screw screws. What a rubbish novel.

This book is a bit poisonous. The people of Blue Star are working with traitors and aliens to destroy Blue Star's own planet. What good will it do to him? Except for some good people in the main camp, there are no good people in other districts, so Blue Star has been destroyed long ago. It's like a country filled with hundreds of civil and military officials, but only one ninth-grade sesame official is loyal to the court. It can't be seen.