
One Piece: Enel, Lord of Thunder
海贼之雷电法王艾尼路
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
418Chapters
1.9kRecommendations
8.9kFans
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I persevered and read 120 chapters of this book, and all I can say is that Whitebeard is the protagonist's grandfather, and Ace is the protagonist's father! The protagonist sacrifices his life to shine for them! I don't know what the author was thinking! The protagonist's goal is completely opposite to what he does; seeing him use his lifespan to save a complete stranger, someone who might even be a future enemy, is infuriating!
The fact that the Gum-Gum Fruit can control lightning is already a headache. What rubber can't evaporate in the instantaneous high temperature of lightning?
Respect the original work? That doesn't sound good.
The battle scenes were depicted in a very silly way.
So the protagonist of this book is none other than the famous Thunder King! My apologies. (I haven't even read the book; I just wanted to post this picture because I saw the name.)
The protagonist was so wronged in the first few chapters! He clearly had the ability to transform into an elemental being, but instead, the protagonist's halo made him get hit by Luffy and the Logia-type elemental transformation was completely wasted.
Author, I've seen many comments saying that Luffy's protagonist halo is bad. I think it would be better if you wrote that your protagonist wasn't strong enough at the time and was afraid of being defeated by Dragon, Garp, Ace, and Shanks, so you saw Luffy put on a good show.
Sigh, after looking at the comments, it seems the biggest issue is Luffy's "protagonist halo." But this isn't my original idea; it's how it is in the original work. After Enel met Luffy in the Skypiea arc, he never used teleportation or elemental transformation again. Do you think Oda forgot that elemental attacks are ineffective? Not at all.
Although the first few chapters were a bit toxic, and the protagonist's halo was really uncomfortable to watch, overall it was good, so I'll keep going.
Among countless protagonist halos, none have ever allowed themselves to be so easily defeated that the enemy couldn't move. Most are just incredibly lucky. At this point, there are countless ways to let Luffy go, yet the author chooses this most annoying method. The author is incredibly stubborn. Why not just run away and attack the other crew members instead of Luffy, using a few divine judgments to see if they survive? A super-long-range divine judgment can still produce miraculous results!