Hogwarts from Another World

Regarding some logical flaws in the latest chapter First of all, the author's writing is getting better, which is worthy of celebration But in the chapter "This is Our World", Grindelwald cleared the centaurs, elves, and the Order of the Phoenix before launching the Uma War he dreamed of It can be seen that the group led by Grindelwald has the shadow of fascism, and the willingness to launch this war is also very strong. Although I can understand the author's intention to express that peace must be established before resisting foreigners, when will the Order of the Phoenix be eliminated? It is an uncontrollable factor. Will the Order of the Phoenix not start a war if it is not eliminated? And compared to the forces led by Grindelwald, crickets without Dumbledore's Order of the Phoenix are really not good enough. There were so many anti-war organizations in the early days of the Vietnam War in the United States, wouldn't they still be unable to affect the general direction of launching the war? Therefore, it is too far-fetched to say that one must first seize the enemy in order to fight against foreign aggression. I hope the author can fill in the gaps as to why Grindelwald must clear out the Order of the Phoenix in order to start the Umma War This is a very wonderful work. It can be seen that the author has great ambitions. I hope the author's book will be newer and better ❤️

The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that the eunuch is a eunuch I don't know if the author forgot or couldn't write it down and the plot collapsed (I think this possibility is quite high) Now it feels like the protagonist's growth rate is too slow (compared to Ge Huang's actions), and there are no foreign aids or companions. I didn't include Neville and Hermione because they didn't know what the protagonist was going to do, and they were too weak. They could barely be considered companions, but they couldn't bring any help. At present, it seems that although we know what the book is and that it may bring hope, it is almost impossible for the protagonist to defeat Grindelwald's forces in the near future, and he has no idea how to deal with the aftermath of breaking the secrecy law and starting a war. The overall feeling is that the background setting of The Man in the High Castle is very interesting, the character development and plot writing are very good, but the protagonist is not very active, or it gives me the feeling that a little person just wants to live a good life in the new world. Let me make it clear that this does not mean that the protagonist must actively fight bosses to carry out reforms and reshape the wizarding world, but this must be combined with the plot and background. In the peaceful wizarding world, there is no problem with daily relaxation and suspense decryption, but there is a problem in the entire wizarding society. The protagonist must eventually overthrow the current ruler of the wizarding society, have positive ideas about changing the wizarding society, and need to find companions or establish his own power. But now that Grindelwald has launched a war against Muggle society, the protagonist only has a Goldfinger book and two weak little wizards around him, and there is no way to contact the Order of the Phoenix. It feels like it will be too difficult to come back later. I really like this setting and story. I hope the author will remember to finally explain the ending, even if it doesn't happen again.

Xiancao, subscribed. The author's rhythm is good, you can keep it up. Don't listen to those who ask for cool articles and cheats. Those are basically looking for you to raise money to make trouble. According to what they say, 9 out of 10 articles will fail. The selling point of this book lies in the freshness after the HP flip and the pleasure of reasonable results obtained by the protagonist's rational decision-making, as well as the expectations for the fate of each familiar character after the world view is flipped So if the author really changed it to Shuangwen and Goldfinger, it would be a waste of time. After all, he was in the first grade. You can learn advanced magic spells and defeat the boss at the end of the level. Then who will care about how cautiously and rationally your characters are portrayed. Instead, they will only ask you to write more enjoyable, such as learning all the powerful spells, collecting a big harem, defeating all the characters who are unhappy with it, and stepping on the original protagonist. So what do you think is the difference between this kind of work and other crappy ones? I hope the author will think twice before acting

Shen Nong's Test of Poison, a non-poisonous masterpiece I feel that this book has the potential to become a god. First of all, the author has a very clear mind. He is not a literary youth, but he has ideas. Second, his writing power is sufficient In fact, most fan fictions die suddenly for three reasons The first is literary youth. They think they have written a good plot, but it is actually a silly plot. Put aside the narcissism. Of course, the writer's requirements for readers are in the middle of a plot. You don't need to pay too much attention to it, because you will mess up the outline, but you must not be in a situation where I am God, I dominate everything in my book, and I forcefully write the plot, just like God. If I want light, there must be light. Books that violate logic and are self-absorbed are the most poisonous, unless you write them yourself and read them yourself. How many books about pirates and teenagers punching the Yonko and kicking the navy have achieved results? This book didn't have this tendency until the beginning of the second part. It was very stable, so it went very smoothly Third, the kind where everyone is drunk and I am alone, uses the boss of NT to praise the protagonist's wit, and uses the viciousness of the enemy to praise the protagonist's kindness. To put it bluntly, it is the protagonist who is eleven or twelve years old. Now, that is at the level of a primary school graduate, and then save Save this, save that, haha, that was Qidian Long Aotian's novel template ten years ago, who is still interested in that now This book does not have the above three poisonous points, at least not until the 40th chapter on the shelves. It has all the necessary IQ. The biggest problem of this book is that the story context is very strong, and it will be very difficult to follow. I am just after the end of the first part , I won't read it anymore, I will save more than 100 chapters before reading this book. I dare to say that if I don't make mistakes, my grades will be very good. At least it will not be weaker than the secret treasure of the year. It will not kneel and lick the protagonist. It is a new story, rather than modifying the original story, and it does not use the original routine. The one in the fanfic that calmly drinks black tea, isn't it just relying on the Basilisk article to improve the grades? Yes, this book currently has no trace of the original routine. It was written by the author himself. It is very innovative. The second part is to kill the basilisk, and the third part is a time-turner novel. Because I have read it too many, and the difference from the original work is to add a person and a plot. I personally have no idea. Finally, I wish the author will get richer as he writes more.

I have nearly 10 Harry Potter fan books on my bookshelf, and seeing this one finally made my eyes light up. The last time I felt this way was the book about the fat chicken with a round face. The recommendation has been voted in. If there is no accident, I will subscribe. I just have a little doubt, so the protagonist's setting is to fully accept the change of the world line, right? Because so far I haven't seen him think anything about it.

After reading the first volume, feel free to share your thoughts. The setting of The Man in the High Castle has been mentioned by many book friends, so I won't go into details. It is a very novel setting. It can be seen that the author tried to restore the original work in the layout and writing of this volume. There are two main problems in the first volume: 1. The protagonist's participation in the decryption is low, 2. The boss in the final reversal has a low participation in the plot The first problem is that the protagonist seems to be involved in the plot, but does not say anything, which makes the actual plot advancement separate from the protagonist, and the reader's reaction is, The protagonist has no sense of participation and substitution, and finally has to rely on Hermione's reckless push. When we look at the original Philosopher's Stone, first of all, Harry and Hagrid didn't know anything when they went to get the Philosopher's Stone. But unlike the protagonist in the article, every time the plot progresses, such as going to the library to check Nick's information, etc., The previous wave of foreshadowing will be revealed from Harry's perspective, and then the next wave of foreshadowing will be laid. On the other hand, in this article, I buried a foreshadowing, and then another, and then another, without revealing it where it should be revealed. It appeared that the protagonist actually participated in the plot, but it gave the reader the feeling that he had done nothing. This question is actually understandable, because for most readers, there are no big mysteries in the HP world unless it completely breaks out of the seven-part framework. Therefore, if the author wants to write a good reversal, he must introduce a new boss, which leads to the second problem. The boss has low participation in the plot. In the original Philosopher's Stone, Lao Fu appears throughout the entire novel. Although he himself appears at the end, the side descriptions throughout the previous novel make readers guess who the real Lao Fu is. Looking back at this article, the foreshadowing of Morgana only includes a few occasional setting explanations and a lesson on the history of magic. Harry himself did not participate in the plot. It should be that the treatment of Ginny in the second part was adopted. However, due to the lack of description of Morgana, the final reversal and reasoning lacked a sense of climax, which made Lao Ge's whole trap seem fussy. After watching it, people felt like Lao Deng that "that's it." Go to bed after writing and read the second volume tomorrow.

This is really a fanfic that focuses entirely on my G-spot, why is it only so much! ! The author's logic is really good, and the foreshadowing and other arrangements are also very good. Although some people always say in the comments that it is not satisfactory, I really think it is very good. The plot development will surprise me instead of being a cliché. This is really rare! ! ! The author's writing is also very fluent, and you can clearly see what he wants to write. Personally, I hope that the author can write completely at his own pace. That's what I want to see most. And finally, I feel that if the author continues to maintain this stable level of progress, he will be able to create a great original piece by himself in the next article, and I am looking forward to it!

The author's writing skills are really good, but this book is not my cup of tea. I hope the author can one day create a fantasy world of his own to express his creativity freely. Come on 👍👍👍

It seems that the author is describing the protagonist's college life and resolving the incident just like the first part of the original book. It is good to have a bit of suspense. It can be seen that the author has an outline and the foreshadowing of several lines is in progress. However, due to the author's update speed, the protagonist does not take the initiative to stand up like Harry. Because the author is slow to update, this book is not suitable for updating at this time. It is recommended that you wait until the author has finished writing the entire volume and read it in one go. Just vote for recommendations every day.

Regarding house elves, whether in Wikipedia, Baidu, or the original book, there is no evidence that they are a race that was enslaved after the defeat of the war. On the contrary, there is a lot of evidence that they are man-made. Coupled with Rowling's oral account, the origin of house elves should not be controversial. Since it is man-made, it is much easier to explain. They are also man-made things. You will not sympathize with whether mobile phones and computers can withstand high-intensity use, nor will you sympathize with the electrical appliances in your home that work 24 hours a day. What about house elves? Wizards created them, and they were born to serve wizards. This is their instinct, their survival instinct. They are really a tool for wizards, a relatively cherished and practical tool. Hermione's pity for them stems from the kindness in Hermione's heart, just like occasionally some people pity the animals that we eat. But that doesn't change anything. Yes, this is slave labor, but it is the voluntary labor of slaves. Don't try to wake up a lazy person. Although you do it for his own good, he won't. He thinks you are harming him. He will complain about you and hate you. But you get nothing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Why do you all think I'm talking to house elves? ? ! I'm criticizing Hermione's behavior! House elves are created by people to work, and they are happy to work. If some holy mothers really want to liberate them, can they listen to their opinions first? If they don't want to be liberated, why don't you give a damn!

My impression after reading this novel is that it restores the writing technique of Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone, which is to induce the protagonist and readers to misunderstand the professor, the vampire professor, the chicken, the rabbit, the unicorn, and the vice-principal's black tea just like the original novel. There will definitely be a big reversal in the end, just like when Harry thought Professor Snape was the mastermind, it will all be reversal later.

Don't panic, everyone, a similar situation occurred in the last book, and it took almost a month to resume updating. When Lao Hei had a private chat with me before, I noticed that he usually had a very hard schedule and was busy with work and updates. I left the lab just after one o'clock in the evening to prepare for the update, and without saving the manuscript, it took several hours to go from thinking to writing and even revising. The increase in typos in the later period of the old book may be due to insufficient rest time. Of course, I'm definitely still very angry😡Save it up and wait for him to come back this time to criticize him, don't let this guy get away easily

Personally speaking (emphasis on the first 6 words), this fanfic is much more interesting than other similar works, and it is not so cookie-cutter.

It feels like it's not working. This is actually a race war. From a wizard's point of view, although Lao Ge's method is a little extreme, it is the right path. However, the thinking of Lao Deng and his Order of the Phoenix is ​​a bit like a wizard's rape. . . Especially when Laoge has started a war and controlled most of the heads of government, he still wants to overthrow Laoge's position. . . Do they hope to help mankind defeat Lao Ge and then say sorry and return everything to the way it was before? . . Driven by the sense of tear caused by the absolute gap between ordinary people and wizards and the fear that wizards can easily control humans, it will only develop into another witch-hunting movement. And this time it is not a small-scale incident limited to a certain country or region, but a global, large-scale event with the participation of the military. . . Even if all wizards are elite Aurors who can fight one against ten or one against a hundred, it is impossible to win this war. . . Not to mention various weapons of mass destruction. . . As for what public opinion is leading people to aspire to become wizards. . . Magic materials are limited. . . Regardless of whether there is such a potion, even without considering the cost of research or the success rate of alchemy, it cannot be provided to everyone. As long as wizards cannot become a common majority, the sense of identity tearing will always exist. . . In the face of this threat, the attitude of both the heads of the authorities and ordinary people must be to eliminate or eliminate their abilities. Either way is a disaster for the wizard. . .

Hermione is actually pretty good, I don't want a tool heroine

There hasn't been an update for a year... Let's visit the grave again! (Let's just say, why are there still people giving likes to this chapter of mine?)

The author has reached a point of no return. Under the current setting, there is no turning point... You cannot expect to rescue Dumbledore, liberate Azkaban, or unite with the Muggle mechanized forces to push Grindelwald flat. Grindelwald is not the most troublesome. The most troublesome thing is that the world of Muggles and wizards has been broken. If Grindelwald cannot kill the Muggles, the Muggles will definitely kill the wizards.

Bored and random thoughts: The world line changed due to the melee between the Deng brothers and Getler in Godric's Hollow. The result was different: Ariana's sister was not dead. This resulted in no complete break between Lao Deng and Lao Gai. This paved the way for Lao Gai's later stabbing in the back. So in 1945, Deng lost the battle in Berlin and imprisoned himself in Godric's Hollow. But the family is still together, and in a sense they are doing well. Lao Gai followed the path of Slytherin, but made different choices in dealing with Muggle wizards. Slytherin believed that Muggle wizards should not be admitted because of possible betrayal; while Guy chose to accept, but he could not have contact with Muggle relatives until he reached adulthood. Other than that, Guy and Slytherin are no different. They both want wizards to be better hidden in normal society. This can be reflected in the equal treatment of all wizards and the treatment of squibs who may expose the wizarding world. It can be said to be political correctness in the wizarding world. As for Tom, due to normal enrollment, the Slytherin Academy in this world line no longer has the concept of superiority and inferiority of pure blood, so Tom, who was born in a mixed race, may not have the extreme ideas of the original world line, and is just an ambitious, ambitious and capable young man. Probably Minister Riddle at the Ministry of Magic now. Dog head. Then when it comes to Porter, it is possible that his surname is no longer Porter. Lily and Snape go to school normally, and James is no longer welcome in other houses due to his birth in Gryffindor, so his original arrogant character may be further amplified. It is even more impossible for Snape to say the mudblood words to Lily in the context of political correctness. It's very possible for them to get together. So naturally, the book mentions that Gryffindor has a dark wizard. I guess what these people did went against the greatest political correctness at the moment. For example, he shouted the slogan that Muggle lives are precious, liked to deal with Muggles, and promoted that Muggles should know about the existence of wizards. This is similar to the Eighth Route Army guerrillas. Then Aurors are similar to the anti-guerrilla National Party. Radicals and conservatives, haha. I felt sick to my stomach at night and couldn't sleep, and I was talking nonsense. 😰

The author went to Azkaban? ? ? Revealed the existence of magical society? ? ?

To be honest, as a wizard, why should the protagonist resist Grindelwald? I'm not saying that, as far as the bad behavior of people on earth is concerned, we know that there is a magic world, and magicians are a new kind of human beings in a sense. They are few in number and may do some disgusting things. After all, the persecution of minorities has always been a proud tradition of mankind on your planet. Only by completely shaping wizards into the ruling class like Grindelwald can wizards be truly safe, just like after the Jews ruled the United States through financial means and indirectly ruled the world, there was no more persecution of Jews. So the people in the Order of the Phoenix are completely witch traitors. I hope the protagonist will quickly defect to the principal and join the glorious evolution.

So in Lao Deng, Lao Ge, Lao Fu. . Be a principal. Which Hogwarts will you go to. . Please explain why.

No, is this a eunuch? Because I didn't look at the starting point for the postgraduate entrance examination for four months, the results were gone. I think this novel is very interesting. It's such a pity that the eunuch is the eunuch.

After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the author has made a misunderstanding. Although the initial setting is very attractive, the writing so far has been boring. Even after finishing the first story in the first grade, there was a so-called reversal in the ending. But when you look at it, you're like: Oh, that's it. Like words without emotion, you read like a bystander, with a sense of isolation. I can't feel the fantasy of the Harry Potter world, nor can I feel the emotions expressed, or the sense of satisfaction. Dry

Forget it, forget it, let's break up. The world of Grindelwald is such a good idea. When I stopped updating it, I still thought that it wouldn't be used to write a new book and it hasn't been updated yet. Sure enough, my worries have become a reality.

Book friends behind, please don't read it, the author ran away, this book will not be updated, it's the same as the previous one!

Awesome, the introduction caught me right away. It's been a long time since I've seen such a unique HP fanfic. Finally, it's not about Harry kicking Ron and fucking Hermione. I am very moved. I happened to see Swarovski releasing HP fan peripherals today. This is God's will!

This book has already written more than twenty chapters. Generally speaking, the heroine has already appeared, but Lao Hei has not yet announced it, so I will combine the content of this book to analyze who the heroine is more likely to be. Up to now, the main female characters appearing in the book are Hermione Granger and the little girl Lestrange, and the secondary female characters include Rosier, Penelo, Gamaffari and Daphne. I personally think that the role of Hermione is impossible. The reasons are complicated. I will talk about it when I have the opportunity in the future. I think there is more hope for the role of Agnes, because Lao Hei has the most detailed description of her appearance, even more than Matthew. (But so far, he has not appeared much) Among the secondary characters, Ignoring the professors, the one who is slightly possible is Daphne. In the last book, the first female character (Jon's mother) did not become the heroine, the second female character (Mrs. Weasley) did not, and the third (Ginny) still did not become the heroine. In addition, Lao Hei seems to have a special emotion for sister-brother love, so... In addition, I have to mention Lao Hei's sexy operation. Our protagonist, Matthew, dedicated his first Potions class operation to Neville! ! ! The last person to receive such treatment has become a female protagonist. Is Lao Hei going to boldly try BL? Ahem, just kidding, if Lao Hei dares to write, I will become the next Saiyuan! Finally, I still want to say that I side with Malfoy.

Analysis of the Black and White Demon: 1. Voldemort Division: Far Right Guiding Ideology: Pure Blood Supremacy Representative Force: Death Eaters Guiding Ideology for Muggles: Massacre + Slavery Guiding Ideology for Muggle Wizards: Massacre + Slavery Guiding ideology for pure blood: win over + shock Guiding ideology for the Ministry of Magic: infiltration + control Level of killing: enjoy this 2. Greenwald Division: right wing Guiding ideology: wizard supremacy Representative force: Witch Cult The Party Guiding ideology for Muggles: Isolation + Slavery Guiding ideology for Muggle wizards: Winning + Unity Guiding ideology for the Ministry of Magic: Infiltration + Control Level of killing: unscrupulous 3. Dumbledore Division: White👈Meda Faction Guiding ideology: Universal values Representative force: Order of the Phoenix Guiding ideology for Muggles: Isolation + Appeasement Guiding ideology for Muggle wizards: Winning + Unity Guiding ideology for the Ministry of Magic: Infiltration + Unity Level of killing: targeting the enemy

(Lao Hei, please write with your own outline. If the guesses in this post overlap with the outline... Feel free...) The beginning of this book tells us directly that this world has nothing to do with silly baby Potter! When we saw the Headmaster of Hogwarts, we knew that the Wizarding War ended with Gellert Grindelwald's victory, but it always felt like he signed some agreement with Albus Dumbledore, and Dumbledore might have done it to get their The relationship eased and a compromise was made, that is, at the cost of Dumbledore's active defeat, which resulted in his reputation being the same as that of Grindelwald in the original world line, in exchange for the wizarding world not being exposed to Muggles (after all, it feels like Grindelwald's actions now are not like Yazi who wants to be exposed). However, it seems that Dumbledore still had a hand in cursing the position of Professor of Transfiguration (the current world line is unknown, but Dumbledore should have been Professor of Transfiguration before he was defeated). Then there is Tom Riddle (Voldemort). If there are no major changes in the end of the war and the previous world line (that is, the resignation of Armando Dippet due to the Chamber of Secrets incident in 1943), then Voldemort's movement may have formed a certain scale, but the purpose may have changed, that is, to defeat Grindelwald, and then rescued Dumbledore (the reason may be due to conscience discovery or Grindelwald caused him so much harm that he wanted Dumbledore to become the main force in control of the wizarding world, at least to check Grindelwald). Because Lily Evans is officially defined as a dark wizard, it is impossible for Voldemort to engage in pure-blood sports. Voldemort's goal is to create a magical world that he and Dumbledore want to become (they can seek common ground while reserving differences). There is also the biggest boss in this book. I don't think so. Judging from the previous book, some characters may have to be given the best ending. So if I had to have one, it would probably be Gellert Grindelwald. As for the protagonist's ultimate goal, I personally think it may be to integrate with the Muggle world. In the last book, Jon Hart's final plan was to combine magic with technology, so it might seem a bit cliche for this book to end in this way. Finally, let's talk about the heroine's guess. From the current point of view, I personally think it is one of the sister-in-law or Lestrange (definitely not Hermione Granger, if so, I would have dinner with Lao Hei and Lao Ba once). I personally invest in Lestrange shares first, and then go bankrupt in the sister-in-law shares. If my sister-in-law can't win again... Sawamura Eri Spencer, understand? 😏 The above is just a personal guess. Now Lao Hei urgently needs to complete the world view of the current world, so let us wait and see!

The content written by the author recently seems to be quite controversial, so I will briefly share my own views. First of all, I think the protagonist, as a wizard, has the following two important bottom lines as a human being with a not too broken outlook: 1. The wizard cannot be completely enslaved and become a white mouse. 2. Ordinary people cannot be genocide, similar to the Jews. Next, let me deal with some strange data: 1. There are about 66 million people in the UK, of which about 12 million are between school age 10-24. 2. There are about 1,000 students in Hogwarts. Among them, those whose parents are Muggles seem to be a minority, but it is conservatively estimated to be between 500+-400. Similarly, those whose parents are wizards are also 500+-400 3. There are very few Squibs, and the probability of birth is estimated to be less than 10%. 4. If the population structure of the wizarding world and the Muggle world are similar, then there are about 600-6,000 wizards, and the probability of Muggles giving birth to wizards is about 0.004% This gives us an order of magnitude understanding of wizards. Let me discuss the old part first. Lao Ge basically does whatever it takes to benefit the overall wizards. Let's assume that he sincerely thinks so and his ideals will not change. I have seen that many book friends believe that after Lao Ge rules the world, he will leave Muggles behind so that Muggles can produce wizards. However, I believe that comparing the above data, you will find that wizards can indeed exist independently of Muggles. Most wizards are born in wizard families, and wizard families rarely have squibs. In other words, for the benefit of the so-called wizards, the most perfect solution is not to enslave Muggles and cause a series of social and institutional problems, but to truly exterminate Muggles and allow wizards to have more offspring, perhaps until there are about 10 million wizards, and then implement eugenics policies. And this does not meet the second bottom line. As for Lao Deng, he is also in terrible trouble. If there is no preparation in advance for the war, then the first bottom line is basically a certain outcome. If you think about the fact that some wizards have Muggle families, there are really very few Muggles who have wizard family members. Except for those who really care about human rights, who would care about the life and death of wizards, a race that once wanted to exterminate the human race? But procrastination will never work. What Lao Ge said is not unreasonable. Our technology will only become more and more powerful, and wizards are even worse with each generation. The longer the first bottom line is delayed, the greater the possibility. Personally, I still support Lao Deng. I think it is impossible to achieve just results through unjust means, but after all, this is a complex and dilemma problem (well done, author). Various ideas are possible, but some naive and cruel ideas are really unbrained and intimidating.