The Legend of Hogwarts' Top Student

Although this book has a mediocre monthly rating, it is undoubtedly written with great care by the author. Nothing poisonous. The writing is excellent. The protagonist is brave and resourceful, and the supporting characters are flesh and blood. It can be said that the author has a very good grasp of the original characters and objectively portrays each original character. No clues in the whole process. It is not the kind of HP fan that is invincible at the beginning (this is especially rare, many HP fans set the protagonist's magic ability to be very strong in order to reduce the difficulty of writing, so that they can write less about cleverness). The emotional lines are written very delicately and realistically. The main plot is very cleverly conceived, the logic is highly self-consistent, and the plot advances naturally and smoothly. The author has a good grasp of the plot, and there is no sign of collapse. With this level of writing and the ability to re-create the original work, if the writing is not a mixed niche like HP fan fiction, I should be able to get good monthly votes. Of course, readers who like the kind of books where the whole school is crazy about being in the first or second grade may not be able to adapt to the weak setting of the protagonist in the early stage. But I still have to say that the standard of this book is still stable among the top five HP fans in Qidian (it has to be said that many old HP fans with great achievements are too outdated. The standards of HP fans a few years ago were too low, and they did not have basic writing and plot control skills. The articles they wrote repeatedly poisoned the readers), so you might as well read it slowly and feel the charm of the author's story.

For ordinary HP fans, by the time they write the fourth or fifth volume, basically both the power system and the plot have collapsed. When I saw Goblet of Fire feigning death at the end, I thought the book had collapsed. After reading it for a while, I finished reading it in a few days. To be honest, the author's series of sexy moves really impressed me. Whether it is working as an undercover agent and the boss of a group of small Death Eaters, or acting as a lackey to a toad, or pretending to be a great prophet or a magic stick. These tricks have never been seen by other HP fans, and they are really interesting and reasonable. Actually, it's quite normal. Generally, by the fifth part, the character of the protagonist has already been formed... The only thing that can be done is to follow the routine, join the Order of the Phoenix, and fight toads with the DA. There is nothing new at all. Or start a bunch of branch lines that deviate from the plot, which is boring to death. This book would have been like this originally, but after the last wave of fake death in Goblet of Fire, in Order of the Phoenix, I can completely let myself go, write new ideas, and play to my heart's content. No bragging, no slander, except for the Goblet of Fire plot, the plots of Chamber of Secrets, Azkaban and Order of the Phoenix are among the best among HP fans.

·I believe that most book lovers - even those who can't forget Natalie's twelve words, and Nishihara who covets his mother-in-law's beauty - cannot deny the fact that Astoria is the one responsible for the popularity of this book. ·The reason Astoria has become popular is not just because of her appearance. It's more because Astoria reminds us of the first time we felt love. ·At the beginning of the story, the relationship between Astoria and Jon develops like thousands of ordinary young lovers, ordinary but ups and downs. From "first acquaintance" to "quarrel", from "cold war" to "reconciliation", it is neither like the princess and prince in fairy tales nor the separation and death in Qiong Yao's novels. Their love, like our love, is filled in every trivial daily life. The whispers between Jon and Astoria in class... The love chocolates Astoria gave to Jon... The tacit cooperation between Jon and Astoria in Potions class... The tears in Astoria's eyes when she was jealous of Jon... The deepest impression was still in three years. In the first Care of Magical Creatures class of the class, Astoria and Jon sat silently together under the willow tree in Lake Hogsmeade, recalling the scene of their first meeting, and the words "It's really a pleasure to meet you" ·These scenes are just like the love we have experienced in the school days, sweet and pure. Astoria also has the shadow of the person we all yearned for back then. ·Nowadays, we are under various pressures such as exams, work, car and house loans, money, rice, oil and salt, etc. But even if we are forced by pressure, deep down in our hearts we must still yearn for the beauty we had at the beginning. And Astoria gave us silent comfort in this materialistic world, silently filling up the regrets we had. ·We don't love Astoria, but each of us loves Astoria.

The idea is very good. I just saw the part about suspended animation. To be honest, I was very fascinated by the previous scenes, but I really didn't like this part. Since you have decided to fake your own death to escape, why do you have to form so many bonds in the future? Even if you are cowardly, that's not how you don't take the initiative to cause trouble. To be honest I was disappointed to see this. And when he was fully prepared and determined to escape, yes, escape from the academy, he was tempted by Dumbledore? Forgive me, this is not a temptation at all! I feel that the author forcibly retained the setting that the protagonist is a coward and asked him to return to the academy. This lack of determination and wavering was in stark contrast to his determination to plan the entire Triwizard Tournament to escape Hogwarts. Since you were so determined to run away at all costs, but in the end you told me that you wanted to come back because of your bond and being tempted by Dumbledore (haha)? What did you do early? Where did your bond go when planning the Final Three? And the most important thing is! He didn't even consider the feelings of the people around him, those who loved him and those he loved! This is the hardest thing for me to accept. To be honest, I don't want to subscribe anymore. The rest of the plot is nothing more than him coming back with a different identity and attracting the heroine, causing the heroine's relationship to become intensely conflicted. Or maybe downplay the emotional line and focus on the plot and the battle of wits. But I can't even get interested. Maybe for me, this fake death is the biggest failure. Thank you to the author for bringing me so many wonderful things. Now, I have decided to say goodbye for now. Maybe I will continue to subscribe when my mood recovers in the future. 🙏

This book has a male protagonist who specializes in resourcefulness and a single female protagonist, and the characterization is very good. The author has obviously done in-depth research and thinking on the original books and movies (including "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them"), such as the past between Snape and Lily, the love and death of Dumbledore and Grindelwald, etc. The author flexibly strings them into the plot and integrates them into the protagonist's life. Secondly, the writing is great, and the various cool points are compactly arranged. ps: Personally, I think the author did a great job filling in the pitfalls in the Prisoner of Azkaban plot.

The description of Daphne in this book is too short (in fact, I think Astoria is not enough), and many things are not very clear and need to be supplemented by the reader's imagination. What follows is my imagination. It is known that the Greengrass family is basically a single-parent family with two children, an older sister and a younger sister (the younger brother in Heaven has no role 555). The life of a single mother is very difficult, especially in pure-blood circles. It can be boldly speculated that Diana was often unable to take care of her family and work perfectly, and many times it was Daphne who took care of Astoria. I would like to make a bold assumption here, and this is what I came to think about after reading the chapter on the breakup, that is, Daphne is not a perfect sister. Daphne, who has been given the responsibility of taking care of her sister since she was a child, is actually equivalent to establishing an authority since she was a child. The real Daphne is actually very strong. When she was raising Astoria, she actually didn't care about Astoria's feelings many times (it was obvious that she didn't care about Astoria's opinion when she first appeared to keep her away from Jon, including the breakup chapter where Daphne snatched Astoria's things when she was a child). Daphne definitely has a sense of responsibility for Astoria, but many times she will forcefully make decisions for Astoria "for Astoria's own good" or even just out of pure selfishness. Don't think this is a conflict. There is no conflict at all between you caring about someone and being so tough sometimes that you don't care about her feelings. Astoria's feelings for her sister are actually a bit complicated. First of all, I must be in awe of such an authoritative image of a sister who raised me since childhood. After Jon was scolded by Daphne at first, Astoria even felt that Jon was making a fuss out of a molehill. These are the shadows left behind when we were young. As Astoria grew older, she became less and less dependent on her sister. Perhaps at this time, Daphne began to worry about gains and losses. Before you can see the Goblet of Fire plot, Daphne's attitude towards Jon was very indifferent, even a bit deliberately ignoring. Of course there is a reason why Daphne, who was harmed by Jon when she first entered school, was punished, but it is also one of the reasons why Astoria became less and less dependent on her sister and more and more clinging to Jon. Perhaps in Daphne's view, Jon is the reason why Astoria is becoming less and less like the follower she was when she was a child. After the Goblet of Fire is a huge turning point. Jon's handsome performance on the field not only made Daphne recognize Astoria's little boyfriend, but it may have also caused a little ripple in her heart. When Daphne comforted Astoria that Jon would be fine, she might also be worried about Jon. From this point on Daphne began to become more and more interested in Jon until Jon died and then Patrick appeared. I have always felt that this section lacks psychological description of Daphne, because it is obvious that Daphne's anger when she found out that Jon pretended to be Patrick and survived, and Astoria knew it but did not tell her, was a bit out of line. What she said to Astoria was too harsh, which can only be explained by the fact that Daphne already liked Patrick in her heart at that time and even liked Jon before. It's a pity that Daphne's psychology was not written much in this section. The peak of Daphne's feelings for Jon occurred in the middle and late stages of the Blood Curse volume. Her mother's imprisonment and the family's suffering brought the originally glamorous eldest daughter back to her original shape in an instant. She had to consider both family matters and her studies. It must have been a very difficult time. Only when Miss Daphne's halo faded away could she discover the importance of Jon, whether it was in his sister's blood curse or in helping the Greengrass family. In a sense, I have always felt that Daphne and Jon actually resonated more with each other, because during the most difficult moments, both parties were working hard to survive and face various difficulties. And Astoria at that time was more about the difficulty itself than being able to help anyone. After the Blood Curse volume, Astoria can be said to have completely gotten rid of her dependence on her sister and turned to dependence on Jon (although this does not feel very healthy, hahaha). Jon's never abandoning or giving up and finally going through many difficulties and solving all the problems like a god coming to earth made Astoria take Jon seriously, and it can even be said to be a bit yandere. Before the Blood Curse volume, Mao Mei was so green tea. In the end, Astoria could still talk and laugh with Mao Mei, but in the later period, Jon, who was straightforward, said that he hated Hermione (Hermione was indeed a bit too much). In this case, Astoria felt Daphne's feelings for Jon, and her first reaction was definitely to be wary, afraid that the powerful sister would take everything away again, but after all, she was her biological sister who had always taken care of her, and she still had family ties, which was very confusing. The above are all personal speculations, and everything is subject to Lao Hei's explanation.

Harry Potter: The Legend of the Academic Master (×) Harry Potter: The Legend of the Best Actor (√) Hermione and her two useless men (×) Detective Granger (√) The Dark Lord and his loyal Death Eaters (×) Tom Riddle and his winery (√) Voldemort: Dumbledore is dead! (×) Silly Tom: I was played again! (√) Lao Fu: Who played me? And who did I kill?

The overall concept is great, especially the part before the end. It has a novel angle and outstanding features. It is different from other fan fictions. The content is as real as possible, and the content is well connected with the original work. However, it is a pity that the later narration is too hasty and the ending is not perfect. There is not much description of how magic and Muggles get along harmoniously and how to solve some fundamental problems. It cannot reflect the reason why Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry chose Jon as the successor principal. How to lead the wizarding world has become an unclear suspense, which is a bit regretful. Perhaps the author has limited time and cannot guarantee updates. The long-term discontinuation of updates has affected the creative ideas and passion, leading to an awkward ending😳 In addition, the emotional scenes are a bit jerky, mainly reflected in the awkwardness when trying to show that many people like Jon. However, the heroine is the bright spot. Through the description, she is a very likable character.

In a certain chapter, I discussed with someone whether the hostile behavior between Snape and the Potter quartet was considered school violence. Personally, I think it's best to ask Snape's opinion on this matter, so I conducted the following interview: Reporter: Professor Snape, do you think you were subjected to school violence by the James Potter quartet when you were in school? Snape: What is school violence? Reporter: According to the Encyclopedia of Women, the main manifestation of school violence is that physically strong students bully weak students, causing them to feel mental and physical pain. Usually, the bully does not feel that there is anything wrong with him, and the victim is afraid of trouble and suffers in silence without daring to resist and report the bully. Snape: ... Afraid of trouble? Don't dare to resist? ! (ㅍ_ㅍ)/(Raises the wand) Reporter: Uh⊙∀⊙! I'm not talking about you! This is what the encyclopedia says! ! Snape: (waving his wand and casting a spell) Get out! ! ! The reporter was blown away and the interview ended...

As far as the protagonist's performance is concerned, he really doesn't know how to be a master of academics. It doesn't feel like the kind of novel about academics he wants to read.

There seems to be a monthly ticket war at the end of the month. I will give you four more tickets then, so please add them first.

Suggested change to: Who is the Best Actor in Harry Potter?

Next year's Tomb Sweeping Day, my Harry Potter: The Legend of the Academic Master will be fattened for 50 chapters. You are welcome to come here and slaughter them when the time comes. Then, burn the paper and slaughter the two flowers!

Dumbledore is not a god. Although he is smart, he is not omniscient and omnipotent. Due to the information he receives and other reasons, Dumbledore cannot know and see all the conspiracies. This is made very clear in the novel. But I don't know who gave it a conspiracy theory setting, describing Dumbledore as a god and everything was his plan. Many fan fiction writers took it seriously. This kind of thinking is the same as those on the Internet who say that Sun Wukong was actually killed by Buddha, and that the six-eared macaque took Sun Wukong's place to obtain scriptures. It cannot withstand scrutiny and is caused by some people's excessive imagination. If the author really thought so, he would have written it directly. Where did so many conspiracy theories come from. It is because of this premise that Dumbledore has come up with many unreasonable plots. For example, Harold was deliberately invited by Dumbledore to play the buffoon. The basilisk was already under control, but Harry Potter was actually asked to kill the dying basilisk alone, which was called exercise. There is also the idea that the death of Harry Potter's parents was the plan of Harry's father. First of all, the reason why this love spell became a legend is because everyone is not sure whether it is true. Harry's father cannot experiment on others in matters of life and death. If the curse that led to Voldemort was really just a rumor, then either the whole family would die in vain, or they would all die in vain. Moreover, after Voldemort killed so many people, there must have been a whole family. However, the spell was not triggered, but Harry Potter was lucky enough to trigger it. This shows that there must be some unknown secret factors for this magic to be effective. There was no way Harry's parents could have planned this, let alone asked Peter to reveal a member of the Order of the Phoenix and cause the family to die tragically in order to gain Voldemort's trust. Try it as a premise that Dumbledore knows almost everything. The whole plot will naturally be twisted, and the author will naturally get stuck. Because a strange brain hole requires a lot of strange logic to fill in, the author will not be able to let the plot proceed as normal, and naturally it will get stuck.

What I wrote above is quite satisfactory, similar to other Harry Potter fans. From the moment Goblet of Fire fakes his death, the plot has its ups and downs and is very comfortable.

Seeing this, to be honest, I am a little disappointed. This book is called The Legend of the Academic Master, but so far, apart from the halo of the protagonist, I have not seen many academic masters in pig's feet (almost never touched it). Many of the main storylines seem to have nothing to do with pig's feet. It's like a person playing a single-player game. Except that the background is Harry Potter, the plot follows the original work, but the process is a bit anticlimactic (the protagonist is almost not involved, and even if he is, it is just going through the motions, which completely weakens the protagonist's sense of existence, as if it is the same with or without him). Especially for Blake, Pig's Foot has not had any intersection with him so far. Since there is no intersection, why are you writing about him? It would be great to create your own plot. It is obviously the main plot, but the protagonist is kept out of it. This is very uncomfortable to watch! It's completely like listening to a person reading Harry Potter books, lacking a sense of substitution! The same goes for Quidditch. Every time there is a game, nothing happens to the protagonist. He doesn't even go to watch the game. The description is just a brushstroke. So why are you writing about him? It's meaningless! I have said so much, just some of my personal thoughts after reading it. I am not criticizing this book, I am just giving my personal opinion. I write this because I sincerely hope that this book will continue to be popular. If you don't want to follow the original plot, you can create your own plot. Also, we need to interact more with the three original pig trotters. At least the roles of the three of them can be increased as appropriate. I think most people who read Harry Potter fan fiction come here for these three people, and then bring themselves into the role of the protagonist. If you don't like some immature suggestions, don't comment!

It's a seedling, nothing has unfolded, but is there still a choice between magic and science? Of course I want them all~ Only children make choices. Wouldn't it be nice to be like Elena and Zhang Xu next door? Also, come on, author, I feel like the future will be exciting. Finally, I would like to give it to the protagonist, just stay here and don't wander around~

Great author, come on, I like your books very much. I came here from a pirated website. Since I came here, I have subscribed to you. Forgive me because I am a student and I can't subscribe to you all, but I really like your books. Come on.

One chapter per week 🤐

To be honest, in terms of personal taste, you are much more pleasing to the eye than the legendary student next door. I've booked them all. Please don't enter the palace.

Isn't it going to be TJ? No

Hey, hey, Mythra? It's a bit of a drama! It must be Merlin, trying to fool my handsome Malfoy again.

Why do some people always think that the age of the protagonist in rebirth novels is the sum of his two lives? Mental age is related to experience. If he was a primary school student in the first life and still a primary school student in the second life, then he is actually a primary school student. I think the protagonist's actual age is an uncle Are you kidding me?

This book is much better than those fans who treat readers as fools. The details are handled very well. I have read a book where the protagonist of Harry Potter made a lot of money by using the conversion of gold galleons and pounds. In this book, you fixed the bugs. I felt very comfortable reading it. One monthly pass every day, all for you. I hope I can give you the essence.

My favorite is the plot where Jon designs Umbridge and helps the Order of the Phoenix win the battle in the Department of Mysteries. I feel it is the male protagonist's crowning moment in the book. It's really rare. After writing 600,000 words, the plot is still high. What was particularly moving was Jon telling Hermione that everything was for the greater good. I was still young when I read the original book, but I still felt very sorry for Dumbledore. He seemed to have lived for others all his life. He turned against his lover and separated from his family for the sake of the wizarding world. He spent his whole life protecting Hogwarts, and in the end even gave his life. Later, I read a lot of fans, and many of them criticized Dumbledore. I felt an indescribable sadness. In Dumbledore's plan to defeat Voldemort, Snape and Harry were indeed sacrificed (Harry succeeded in the end), but wasn't he the first to sacrifice himself? He is not a god and cannot predict things in advance. What he does is his ultimate. Isn't that enough? It feels very comforting to see that someone finally understands and inherits Dumbledore's mission.

It's a very good Harper fan. The finished book definitely has the potential to be a masterpiece. I personally think it is much better than the book on the list that says HP fans despise wizards and magic, and don't even understand some basic settings. The only dissatisfaction I have is that the protagonist repeatedly emphasizes that he is in his forties, and his behavior seems childish, especially in the quarrel with Artolis, which is inexplicably bloody.

The day when the author made a steady update was when pork prices dropped across the country. Now, in addition to reading books, we have one more thing to look forward to 😏. Brother Meng, for the sake of pork and reading, go up to me...

The hp fandoms that I think are in the top three so far

Why do some people write HP fanfics and call Dumbledore a faggot? It's really speechless. If you dislike this, then don't write fanfics. It stinks.

I feel that this book is very well written, the plot is logically reasonable, the characters have distinct personalities, and there is a sense of counter-convention everywhere, and it even helps the original author fill in some pitfalls! This is definitely one of the best HP fics. The only thing is that I feel that 500,000 words is only 5 or 6 years old, so it won't be finished soon 😭