King of Nine Seas

The writing is good, but there are too many flaws that make me unhappy. The part about Spy Frey is too unreasonable. First of all, as a spy, he has no sense of tracking and his whereabouts are easily discovered, which exposes his weakness. The second time you were an undercover agent, you actually let your wife and children stay so close to each other and visit you every month. Are you afraid that others won't find out? This was the first time I saw an undercover agent with such a big heart. Which of the other undercover agents didn't try their best to avoid their family members? The third protagonist actually only relies on verbal threats to Frey's family to force him to help him. He doesn't kidnap his relatives or send someone to keep a lookout. How do you have confidence that people will listen to you? Frey can just wait for the protagonist to leave his house and report the protagonist's plan secretly. The navy will definitely send people to protect his family. The reason for helping the protagonist is completely untenable. The fourth author let his wife get into trouble in order for Rafrey to get on the ship and then asked the protagonist to save her, but the reason was completely untenable. Please, you coerced him to help instead of asking him to help. Is this acceptable? You two are not grudges but have enmity, right? He does it as if the protagonist owes him, but in fact it makes more sense to kill Frey and Eloquence here. And it was okay to promise him to let his wife go, but it was ridiculous to provoke a big shot for his wife. It was obvious that the author forcibly created an enemy character for the protagonist to promote the plot, which can be said to be very blunt. It's quite comfortable to watch from the front, but this section is too dense with poisonous spots. I can't stand it anymore. Let's wait until I calm down and watch it again

I believed you and thought it was an authentic pirate novel. The writing gets younger and younger, the protagonist becomes more like a virgin, and the plot becomes more like a cartoon. King of the Nine Seas is like a summer camp in the Nine Seas... Just like a Luffy fanfic in One Piece 😅

Kill the undercover Feyre, including his wife and daughter, and eradicate the roots without leaving any loopholes. Trust me, deal with this place well, otherwise it will become a poisonous spot.

I have some questions that I would like to ask the author about. Regarding the Madonna issues in this book, such as saving the little girl and offending the deputy captain, I agree with this. It can show that the protagonist has principles, and the rules on the ship are not to attack anyone who does not resist. But the protagonist is a pirate, not an adventurer. Chapter 58, why don't you loot all the goods on the ship? Not to mention being principled. The unspoken rule of pirates is to spare their lives. Instead of taking a symbolic amount, even if you take most of them away and leave a little for them, I won't say anything. You are so principled, what kind of pirates are you doing? Why don't you just become an adventurer? As for the author saying that his writing style has declined after chapter 30, it is okay to say that his writing style has declined, even if he is nosy or does not eradicate the root cause, there can be an explanation, but the protagonist violates the position of the pirates, does not fit the theme, and does not search for treasures to his heart's content. Either be like Luffy and rely on taking risks or cheating, or like a normal pirate, you can have principles, but steal all the treasures if you have the ability.

Ninety percent of the area is the sea, and it is divided into nine seas. There are nine pirate kings in the nine seas. Who are the pirates going to rob? Run your own business? Then pirate is also a derogatory term in your book.

The biggest flaw of this book is the setting at the beginning that the world has very little land. Less land means less plants, which means less food. If there is less food, the population will not be able to develop. Without a population base, there will be no big market for luxury goods, because large voyages with spices, gold and gems as the core will not develop. Merchant ships that only trade in grain will not be able to rob the world. The value of making huge profits cannot attract people to become pirates, and pirate civilization cannot take shape.

What to do with the undercover agent? He can also reveal the male protagonist.

The first volume is good, but it's a pity that Dragon Sea has been full of routines since the beginning, all using bad routines and all kinds of virgins! The clock council, the biggest selling point, is boring every time! It doesn't feel weird like Cthulhu at all, but it feels like God is pretty good!

I was so disgusted when I saw the conflict with the vice-captain over a little girl. A pirate is a virgin, so I don't have to do it myself. It's so lenient. If the plot requires it, it can be replaced with potion materials or loot distribution. Which one can't be a point of conflict? Is that plot disgusting or is the word count too low? I haven't read the rest yet, so I won't comment for now.

From my personal point of view, the writing style and creativity of this book are pretty good. The reason why the results are not very good may be related to the lack of successful portrayal of the protagonist. The protagonist is too passive. It is not the protagonist who promotes the development of the story but the story that drives the protagonist forward. This type of Western fantasy novel itself has a certain sense of distance when reading it. This requires the focus to be focused on the protagonist to dilute this sense of distance. The protagonist needs to control the progress of the story and reveal the mystery of this time. However, the protagonist in this book is just the opposite, too passive.

This book has a strong pirate atmosphere, and the pirates are too amusing and joyful. It is completely different from the traditional pirates' burning, killing and looting. It seems to be in violation of the rules and dramas. Why can't the East China Sea, Qinghai, branch, etc. Be given other names? I want to read an orthodox low-magic fantasy pirate novel that is a little colder and selfish. After all, I am a pirate!

Poisoned in Chapter 32 Let's not talk about whether the spy can bring his family with him He is a spy who was threatened by you, and you have to go back to save his lover He can betray the navy, but he can't betray you?

The plot of the old piece of paper is very strange. Why do you have to hold on to that piece of paper and put it back in its place? There are at most one or two more people competing for the prescription, so you just hold on to it. The protagonist's behavior is really unreasonable. I don't know what the paper does and it is hot. Isn't it good to develop well? The protagonist's operation to introduce the navy into the game , let's take a look at the protagonist's plan: to lure the navy with a message that is not known to be true or false, and to adapt the escape route in order to divert attention. What is this plan? If the captain does not sell the ship, how are you going to run away? If the navy is strong enough to get the black box, what should you do if you find that the box is empty? Or if you don't give up and want to check you, you little shrimp, do you have a backup plan? That spy really should be silenced. The most important thing about being a pirate is to be careful and not leave any trouble. If you are spyed and returned to the navy, there will be many variables during the review. You may know that the source of the information is provided by the protagonist The setting of this book is quite good, but I think the plot is a bit confusing. I really need to revise it when I have time.

For example, One Piece at least knows about the Five Old Stars, the Celestial Dragons, the Four Emperors, the Three Great Generals, and the Shichibukai! The four seas, the Grand Line, sky islands, fish-man islands, various races, devil fruits: natural type, animal type, super power type. Six forms, life return, karate, great swordsman, three-color Haki, and fruit development awakening! This is what makes it attractive to write! This book is completely incomprehensible to the chaotic system and world structure!

These chapters are broken, as if they were written by a child. If you can't write about interpersonal relationships, don't write them, otherwise it will be really embarrassing.

The whole world is actually explained very clearly, the structure is very good, and the reference and other aspects are also handled well. However, the plot that the author arranged for the protagonist is very frustrating. It has already arranged scanning eyes, round table conferences, seventh-level secret recipes, divine protection and other golden fingers. It is obviously enough to sustain development and will inevitably take off within ten years. But the author also arranged some plots that lead to being hunted down by various big shots. Although the strength is improving, the sense of mystery is not enough. The big shot appears too early. The general is a third-level general, but he is not an instant kill? Because the protagonist is handsome? In fact, the main reason for feeling frustrated is that the direction of the protagonist in the whole book feels completely controlled by big shots and gods, which is slightly different from the feeling of mystery where the protagonist does things on his own to create the plot.

The extraordinary Virgin of the World should be dead, right?

When I saw something was wrong with Lao Snoring, I suddenly felt that it was boring and couldn't stand it any longer... It was quite good-looking before, but suddenly I felt something was wrong... I gave up...

To be honest, the subject matter is okay and the writing is okay, but your dialogue and description are really a bit poor. After writing a paragraph, it is best to read it yourself to see if there are any conflicts with each other and whether it goes smoothly. Some descriptions need to be careful and some places need to be vague. The selling point of all such novels is not the plot or the intrigue. It is the unknown of the sea, various treasures, various abilities, fighting scenes, descriptions, and adventures. "Be sure to set up the world view and ability view. For details, you can learn from the wizard world and the mysterious journey. Remember that some descriptions are deep and careful, and some should be reserved." In addition, I think novels, especially those written by yourself, are best written as if they are written for yourself. You write them because you want to read them. Only such novels are interesting and the author is open-minded. If you look at your book reviews, few read the novel. They are just reading the plot, and few talk about the novel itself. "The above is just my nonsense," read your novel.

Why can't I see this book in the author column?