This Is My Frostpunk Era

I originally wanted to keep it for a while, but because it was really well written and exciting, I couldn't help but read it all. But after reading it, it was quite uncomfortable. After it was put on the shelves, the cool operation of stealing things was really annoying. Originally, Jiangxi Lin, who was not said to be exhaustive in the early stage, but at least cautious, became addicted and stable when he arrived in the capital, and all kinds of frustrations came. After searching in the book review section, many book friends felt that it was like a new person after it was put on the shelves. That may not be entirely a problem of my personal feelings, but rather a problem with the author's writing. In my opinion, the specific feeling can be dealt with in several plots. First, Jiang Xilin escaped from the Far East. Although we know that the female bishop is temporarily offline, Jiang Xilin should not know, so he should not have no sense of crisis. Although he can live a stable life in the royal capital, this is not the time for him to sit down and do scientific research in one place. This episode is obviously too slow. He can pursue power without urgency, but never without a sense of crisis. Secondly, there is a unique ancient being in Jiang Xilin, who is at least opposed to Orthodoxy. So he cannot rely entirely on the power of this ancient being. After all, in the capital, according to the author's current writing, he must integrate into the upper class society. So what measures has Jiang Xilin taken to protect himself? Obviously I didn't see this at all, which is very embarrassing. I originally thought that I would rely on professional knowledge such as arcane formations, but the academic report was rejected. Moreover, it was just when the internal organizations of the kingdom began to pay attention to arcane formations. Although this wave of rejections may be reversed later, it is obviously redundant and depressing. This is the first breaking point after the author's sexy operation of stealing things. Obviously many book lovers are waiting for this breaking point. In the end, you have to do it again, which is really embarrassing. To be honest, when it is put on the shelves, it is the time to build trust between the author and book friends, and it is also the time to cultivate our feelings for the protagonist. It is really embarrassing for us that you are so slow.

Author, is the main plot of this book an adventure in another world or a social deduction? If it is the former, judging from the current situation, it can be regarded as food for old bookworms. The early rhythm is tight, the main and supporting characters have online IQs, and there are no common mistakes. However, after arriving in the royal capital, due to the lack of updates, the story rhythm seems to be a bit out of touch. If it is the latter, it can be regarded as food for old bookworms, but the corresponding problems are also more serious. If not solved, the good impression accumulated at the beginning will only get worse and worse. That is, the lack of detailed description of the worldview during the deduction process prevents readers from deducing what the author wants to express through the information expressed in the work. Such writing becomes the author's self-pleasure without resonance from the readers. It would be fine if it were a historical novel, as it would have the Earth's historical background to supplement the details, but this work happens to be set in an alien time and space, so the details all depend on the author to present them. It is necessary to make it clear what is the difference between a different world that is easy for the earth and the earth. If the explanation is not clear, it will make readers feel separated, and then readers will understand it according to their own cognition. As a result, the readership group will also have arguments, and a lot of quarrels will come from this. As long as there is an official statement, everyone will not quarrel. Of course, this statement must be reasonable, and you cannot slap yourself in the face. Otherwise, everyone will simply stop watching it, and there is no need to bother arguing with others. The problem now is that the background details of the work are too weak. For example, there is the problem of misalignment between production relations and productivity in the work. If human beings want to survive in such an environment, they must have a certain level of productivity, but the production relations described by the author probably cannot achieve this level of productivity. A simple cognitive error, as long as someone works, all products can be made, but the fact is that the complexity of the product is closely related to the quality of the workers. Slaves can only do simple labor such as blacksmithing, but cannot build precision equipment such as steam engines, otherwise they will explode for you in minutes. The working class is like slaves. How can humans survive in such an icy and snowy environment? How can they be productive? Even superpowers have their limitations. Can a superior superpower keep working for you in the factory? Maybe the author has a reasonable explanation, but I hope the author will write out the details. Anyway, the only explanation I can think of for the current situation is that human civilization is going backwards instead of moving forward after the appearance of ice and snow. And it was only through accumulation over a long period of time that under backward production relations, productivity was accumulated into what the world looks like now.

The Meiji Restoration also promoted society. Is this a revolution? The Westernization Movement also promoted society. Is this a revolution? The French Revolution, the October Revolution, this is the revolution! The author is saying that change is not revolution. Change is a bottom-up reform movement with the purpose of extending the life of the old regime; revolution is a bottom-up act of violence with the purpose of ending the rule of the old regime!

As an ordinary reader, what I actually hope to see is novel arcana, a basically logical arcane system, and the new knowledge brought by pig's feet to promote arcana and society. It would also be good to intersperse a little daily life. But now that I have arrived in the royal capital, I have spent a lot of time describing the workplace diary? Maybe the author wanted to show reality, but it gave me the feeling that there were too many elements, the main line was unclear, and it was uninteresting. This is not what I want the author to write. I just want to give the author some normal feedback as a member of ordinary readers. The above.

The content after the author puts it on the shelf is to show off his knowledge in the workplace, but this is not an urban classification, and it is not a place for the author to show off his cleverness. It can be said that the author has written biasedly. For novels of this kind, the workplace is not what we care about. The author should grasp the more core aspects. Otherwise, this book can only be said to be readable, but to be said to be exciting, it may not be that interesting. I am very optimistic about this book, but the workplace part is a bit tasteless and makes me not interested in reading it.

It is suggested that the title of the book should be changed to "The Untoldable Story of Me and My Beautiful Landlady in Those Years"

This book has something to do with the Ice and Steam Age🔨

As a former public servant of the people, this guy has such crooked views, no wonder he is sentenced to death.

This is really a tragedy that was caught off guard. This book can be raised to death. Hurry up and pour some water to see if it can survive.

The plot advances too slowly and without any ripples. It looked like it was going to reach a climax, but it ended up being delayed. Did the author intend to turn the readers into eunuchs?