An Improper Monster Girl Makeover Diary

To be honest, I really admire you. You are really good at writing novels yourself. You are really capable, the content is good, and the subject matter is wonderful. It is really admirable to achieve this level. To express my respect. I rewarded you with the Golden Alliance. Although it's not much, it's not true either.

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Rare images of the author's early work in a maid shop

One day, in the misty valley Hi! Hello everyone! It's me, Herbert! By the way, do you want to enter my wonderful house (Put your hands behind your ears as if listening) Great, let's go Ah haha, I almost forgot To make the wonderful house appear We must recite a strange spell Miska Moska Monster Girl Tell me once Miska Moska Monster Girl!

I have read Chapter 158 so far. First of all, I was surprised by how fast the author's coding speed was Because I found that including new book issues, it was equivalent to coding about 8k words per day… Secondly, I was surprised by the density of memes From top to old old memes, to bottom to current hot memes. There are a lot of jokes, but they are not awkward. I think the timing and rhythm of the insertion are very good. Finally, minibus post~ Don't ask! Just ask and post! I found the book in Sanjiang. In fact, I have rarely read Western fantasy novels in the past two years, but because I also want to try writing novels recently, I read all the novels that fit my reading habits. I was immediately attracted by your beginning... (I curse this damn fate) (Then I found that this sentence is a frequent visitor in Xiaoba's books, including but not limited to Yangshi...) First of all! Whose author posted memes and voiceovers in chapter reviews? The author spits on the readers, what should we readers complain about! ! (Raises the 40-meter long knife) Ahem, but I have to say, it's really fun! This is the first time I have seen such an active author. Not only is it a meme, but you can also see that the author (bushi) in the comment area has responded to many typos and some suggestions from readers. It can be seen that the author is quite happy. (ớ ₃ờ) But after reading the acceptance speech, I knew it, and sure enough! No one's life is that easy! ! ! Woo hoo hoo (wiping tears) It was only after reading dozens of chapters that I realized that the plot was moving too slowly. And I didn't discover this by myself when I was reading the article. I discovered it suddenly when Xiaoba himself said that the pace was slow. . . However, I didn't feel that the plot progressed very slowly. After reviewing it carefully, I felt that the pace was quite good. Just like the insertion of the memes, the rhythm is just right. I noticed before that Xiaoba mentioned in the author's statement that the chapter about revenge was too long and the text became heavier and heavier, which led to it being a little out of focus. (That's probably what it means) I feel pretty good. Maybe it's in response to a certain book friend's comment, but I'm a little tired of watching the plots posted in posts. It would be good to adjust it with other plot twists. However, the author can react in time, adjust the current plot immediately, and save the revised manuscript. This is really rare! Too strong! (Praise!) At present, I am basically praising Minibus (not that I want to start making criticisms and suggestions), but I am more curious about things. This is the third book. I don't think the first two are high-quality books. You even said that it took you a long time to write Qian Ding, and you didn't even get to Qian Ding. . I'm very curious as to why this is! ! Until I saw Xiaoba said that the last book caught up with the AI ​​reform, I was really speechless. Should I say it was good luck or bad luck? . . But it's okay! This time I went to Sanjiang! Although due to the rush of new book issues, when it was put on the shelves, it already had more than 200,000 words (cannot escape the efforts of minibus) I hope that it can be published as a high-quality book before next year! No matter what, a high-quality product will do (cough) Finally! Minibus Tie Tie~

As a straight man who likes to play DND paladin, if this book is not good, I will go to Baldur's Gate 3 to play the female character and fall in love with Haruki. It's really good-looking and the author is very lively... Ahem~, the author is very easy-going and interesting. It's really high-quality and magical.

It's beautiful, but it's verbose. Although my cultural level is not high, I don't need to keep stressing that this is moisture.

Understand?

Let's improve it

It's so good to watch, this kind of relaxing harem fantasy is something that people can enjoy. The characters are also quite interesting, and the subplot is more sophisticated than some games on DL. If there are any problems, I have two regrets. As far as I can see the progress of the Kiss of the Abyss volume, the core golden finger of the protagonist is actually quite low in existence. Whether it is improvement after posting with Monster Girl or upgrading by directly eating materials, it is an interesting idea, but it only has a sense of existence in the first few hundred thousand words, and Cao Pi's upgrade is not very satisfying. I personally think this is actually closely related to the second regret - the protagonist's level is too high, or in other words, after setting the protagonist to be a very talented person, the time span is also increased, causing the protagonist to be stuck for a long time after reaching the high level at the speed of light. After all, the theme of this book is Monster Girl. When the protagonist is powerful In the end, it became featureless, so it was delayed until the appearance of the Mirror Demon, and the upgrade of the Dragon Girl to increase the protagonist's level... In my opinion, it is better to let the protagonist slowly experience the story from a low level, and then rely on the Monster Girl to show off, and directly upgrade the character to get the smooth feeling of upgrading, which is more sustainable. I feel that this series of problems is caused by the author's entanglement with the protagonist's combat power and status from a God's perspective, after mastering all the realm information, and directly stating Lao Deng's realm at the beginning.