I Have an Invincible City

I think the writing was okay, and the plot didn't break down the IQs of all the characters. The only problem is that it drags a bit, the pace is not fast enough, and it is more plot-oriented. It's a bit similar to the book about Shopkeeper of the World. The reasons for poor grades are still not satisfying enough. It may make people feel frustrated, dragging out a fragment to find a hundred chapters. Goldfinger should have been developed for more uses, but due to the initial setting, it restricted subsequent development. In fact, Yanhuang World is almost complete after writing it, but the author obviously has a grander world view and cannot continue writing. It's OK to give a quick pace, but abandoning the article halfway will undoubtedly dissuade a large number of readers. The content itself is quite impressive.

Yingjiang, are some people who have surrendered to Chang'an gradually become facial expressions? It feels like most people, except for the Twelve Yamas, become the same when they come to Chang'an. Is this the originally desired effect? It just feels like there are no very impressive characters appearing so far. I remember Sanyang and Zhuo Sui because of their names. Chen Mengyang has a high appearance rate recently, but he is just like a tool man. He has really become like playing a game. There is a lot less personality. Of course there must be a reason for promoting the plot, but when I look at it, I don't feel unhappy.

At this stage, the writing is very good. There are two lines. One is the confrontation with Dongtang and its development and growth; the other is to find the Twelve Yamas, revenge and revenge. I hope it won't be too overwhelming. It would be better to add some descriptions of mortal life later and use the changes in the city as a seasoning. Come on 👍

Is there any follow-up to The First Patriarch in History?🥺🥺

The description of the martial arts scenes is excellent, and Fu Lin's layout is wonderful. Apart from a bit too many martial arts scenes, the plot progress is very enjoyable.

I just saw on Tencent Comics that the Big Brother comic is online. Fat Eagle didn't even promote it.

Come on! Come on! Work hard to update!

How can I get [Eagle Yangjun] if I have all of Fei🦅's books?

As an old bookworm, this is the first time I haven't figured out the training level symbols even after nearly 500 chapters! 😭

Let's just end it... It's been a long time... What year and month will it be completed?

To be honest, I was a little confused

After seeing the sixth expansion in Chapter 200, I couldn't bear it and finally took some time to sort out the geographical map. I am limited by my personal abilities and am not a professional, so the details are not entirely accurate, but I hope readers can have a clearer impression of the surroundings of Invincible City and see the author's careful settings. To

Stop writing this kind of invincible article, write something normal. This kind of thing is just a pile of settings. Look at the settings in the early stage. No one wants to pursue it later. What's so good about being invincible? I originally thought that after Senior Brother, I would go to a higher level and no longer be obsessed with settings. The Demon King just saw it as a novelty. If others use your settings, and your writing skills are better than yours, how can you compete with me? I hope that every time the author writes a book, he will think about what to write in the middle and later stages of the book. The outline must be determined, so that it cannot be repeated again and again, or no one will follow it soon. It takes a long time for Squid to write the setting and outline. His setting is used by others, but no one is better than him because it is very complete and the preliminary preparation work is very good. I sincerely hope you can write a good novel.

The front part still looks a bit like an invincible city, but the back part becomes more and more stretched. Every enemy is like a God's perspective. They only test the edges but don't get into the circle. It's like everyone knows the protagonist's invincibility range. Only one or two people in a hundred people come in. , The key characters are not included until the end. Every time I finish reading a chapter, I feel like I am constipated, and it often takes dozens or hundreds of chapters to get out a little bit, and the old one is not finished yet, and the new one is stuck again. It may be difficult to write a long invincible article. The only way to extend the story is through various coincidences. But in this way, the original pleasure of being invincible is lost. It feels like a bad-mouthed elementary school student spitting sweet things at you online. You are obviously tall and strong and you can teach him how to behave, but unfortunately you are beyond your reach. No matter how big your fist is, you can't hit him in the face through the screen. It is really frustrating. For this kind of invincibility, if you take on the role of the protagonist, you will suffer. It is better to take the role of the villain. Greetings to the whole family, and then saying "Are you angry? Are you angry? I can't hit you, just a little bit~" Although it is childish, it is indeed an effective way to anger people, and regardless of whether it angers people or not, the person with the bad mouth first is already satisfied.

This should be quite suitable 😁

Looking forward to your new masterpieces.

Suggestions on urban infrastructure construction can be posted here and may be considered for use as appropriate, so that we can jointly build an invincible city. Imagination is welcome, but it must be in line with the background of the fantasy and ancient world view. This building is for exclusive use only. Speeches that have nothing to do with city construction will be deleted. Don't be offended.

I hope there is no female protagonist! What kind of heroine does this kind of novel need?😢

The biggest problem is the conflict between time and space. In such a large territory, all the new policies were praised within a few days as soon as they were issued. The crops didn't even grow for a season, and the taxes were not collected even once. The people had enough food and clothing, and everyone felt that Chang'an was better... Even in the game, it is calculated in years, right?

It's too fluent Can you write more about the people of Chang'an or from a personal perspective Or describe the construction process. Now it's all covered in one stroke. I keep writing new characters, new resources and new maps. It's too urgent.

I was not impressed when I saw the title and introduction of the book, but then I accidentally saw the author, August? Hey, I have some impression. Damn it, I suddenly remembered a book I read when I was studying, The First Patriarch in History. I was so hyped about it at the time. . .

Let's give this book an ending. I've been waiting for a long time.

In my impression, Grandmaster and Senior Brother both wrote very good books, but my impression of the author was still stuck in the book Seizing the Demon King's Body. I suddenly wanted to read some new books, but I didn't expect it to be like this...

There has been no update for 3 days in a row and no one can be contacted. Fat Eagle must have been delayed due to some unexpected situation. If it can be online, Fat Eagle will also send a single chapter to tell everyone. Please wait, and I will explain the reason to everyone when Fat Eagle comes back 🌹🌹🌹

Starting from the ancestor, why are you becoming more and more incompetent the more you write?

Grandmaster will always be the god in my heart 👍

After reading Chapter 16, I feel that the level is very stable, and the fighting scenes are as good as ever. I can tell that the style of writing is as relaxed as possible. I hope Feiying can stick to the character design and not focus on changing the map and pushing the main line in the middle of writing. Although we like to read the story, we also hope to see a male protagonist who is worth remembering and liking, like Yan Zhaoge? Come on, take care of yourself, you write slowly and we will read slowly. (Also, if this book has a love line, please be sure not to speculate in stocks again. The previous book Qingqinggu was really short-changed 😭😭😭

I like the setting very much. It feels like a combination of RPG and farming. The content also has a sense of group portrait. The main twelve Yamas and the secondary supporting characters all have distinctive characteristics. The various training systems are also very interesting... Even after playing for several months, I still can't fatten up (

Fortunately, I have only read more than 300 chapters, and it is just over now

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